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SS: Chotey Ki Ayegi Barat Ch:10 pg 29*COMPLETED* (Page 19)

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
V v nice... Arnie baby, realize fast else haat malte reh jaoge

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
OMG! I was one of the people this part was dedicated to. Yay! Thanks for making me one of the people this part was dedicated to. Smile Getting to the update, I loved it! I love Arnav's sarcasm in this SS, even though he still has a little bit ASR in him. And Arnav has already made Khushi "his woman"! And I loved how you showed both Arnav and Khushi's thoughts. Especially Arnav's thoughts, he had my ROFL-ing with his jealous thoughts, both from Aman(while Khushi and him were dancing) and from whoever she was texting. I loved how Arnav tried to impress Khushi by trying to fix the car, but was clueless! And Khushi called him adorable, and thought she was going crazy lol. I love ArHi's bickering. All in all, I absolutely loved the chapter! Fabulous, Fantastic, Splendid, and Great update! I'm saying this again, you are such a great and talented writer. Clap You describe scenes, thoughts, clothes, and everything so well. I feel like I'm actually there in the story and watching everything unfold and take place. And once again, a MASSIVE Thank You for dedicating this chapter to me and DM1810. Hug Please update the next chapter soon.    Big smile

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
so sweet

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
that was rily good!! :D

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Come on Arnav and Khushi...hurry up guys...At this rate Arnav would get married to Lavanya before the two of you realize that you are in love...jaldiii

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update!
That was too good Grace (: 
thank you so much for the PM! this OS is really interesting, please please update soon!

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
reserved!


Now hopefully will edit by thursday :D
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Lovely update!!
Aww he's jealous. So cute! Embarrassed
He should do something before Khushi slips out of his hand..
Cant wait for the next part.
Really enjoyed this Hug

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