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SS: Chotey Ki Ayegi Barat Ch:10 pg 29*COMPLETED* (Page 18)

vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Really enjoyed the story, read all parts together , love Arnavs sarcasm...please do add me and pm me when you update...thanks.

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Crazy_soul IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Very nice.arnav stop ur mind talking and do something solid.

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Wonderful. Hope Arnav realizes he is in love with Khushi before it is too late.

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areeba_blossom IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
OH MY GOSH!! I justt totally loved this!!! 

The whole set up with the dance and all!! 

and khushi is already his!! ehm ehm! 

Gosh, Arnav trying to impress Khushi!! LOL moment!! 

Awesome update!! I feel like watching the show!! your writing has a touch of what ever used to happen in there plus, the ASR-ish attitude blended in!!

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bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update...poor Arnav.He is confused but his attitude remains the same...loved the Aman-khushi dosti...Awaiting the next update and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
hes jealous wen he sees aman wid kushi...loved kushi n aman bondin...
arnav just realise ur love 4 kushi b4 its too late dammit!!!!!!!!
stop mind talkin n do smetin...
awsum update
tanx 4 dpm...
continue soon

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
V v nice... Arnie baby, realize fast else haat malte reh jaoge

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mahi530 Newbie
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
OMG! I was one of the people this part was dedicated to. Yay! Thanks for making me one of the people this part was dedicated to. Smile Getting to the update, I loved it! I love Arnav's sarcasm in this SS, even though he still has a little bit ASR in him. And Arnav has already made Khushi "his woman"! And I loved how you showed both Arnav and Khushi's thoughts. Especially Arnav's thoughts, he had my ROFL-ing with his jealous thoughts, both from Aman(while Khushi and him were dancing) and from whoever she was texting. I loved how Arnav tried to impress Khushi by trying to fix the car, but was clueless! And Khushi called him adorable, and thought she was going crazy lol. I love ArHi's bickering. All in all, I absolutely loved the chapter! Fabulous, Fantastic, Splendid, and Great update! I'm saying this again, you are such a great and talented writer. Clap You describe scenes, thoughts, clothes, and everything so well. I feel like I'm actually there in the story and watching everything unfold and take place. And once again, a MASSIVE Thank You for dedicating this chapter to me and DM1810. Hug Please update the next chapter soon.    Big smile

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