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SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) ~2 RTMC FF (Page 50)

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhwanimehta23

Awesome Update!!!!!!!!!!1
thanks sweetheart

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

very nice update dii loved it
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loved the chand n veer scene

mehrangarh ajeeb h bhot...but excited to read more about it

it getting more suspense now

di pls pls update soon na

plss n veer also

sorry for late commentBig smile
love u di
thanks darling...lov u too...i will try and update soon...
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Freethinker

 thanks sweeti...how r u...as usual loved your comments...


its only me u r asking HOW ARE YOU???...no one else...((makes me feel special as ur sweety..Embarrassed)))
bcz u knw i m seriously annoyed the way u leave agn n agn...widout telling here on thread...u r trying to butter up me...maska...ohoo!
formality...hmm...

but stil i wil answer.
i m fine di...graved beneath books...
studies r really thng to sulk.

i knw u lov my cmnts...but di really dnt like ur sudden dispersal evry time... Cry

waiting fr update...

but i may be late to read n cmnt...dnt feel bad diOuch

by the way..how r u di???hope u doing great/...


Edited by sweetsanyo - 14 February 2013 at 5:05am
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 9:29am | IP Logged
di...hwz u?
Fine na...
Di if u r free then pls give us a ud?im dying to read ur stories
it's been long time since u updated

bt if u r free then only...

Edited by tejjo - 16 February 2013 at 10:00am
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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
awesome n interesting update!!!
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Posted: 19 February 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
happy 50 pages on second thread of shikar...

Edited by sweetsanyo - 19 February 2013 at 4:16am

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged

 

Part 51

 

The car stopped at the gates of a lovely restaurant…..

"come lets go…." Veer hold her hand and they walked inside….

Chandni was still wondering about Mehrangarh….. why does this name comes in front of her everytime when she wants to forget about that…. She remembered the stone that she found, and now the old fort… what does that really want to tell her…. Everything around her was confusing her… her imagination stopped working beyond the truth that occured in her life… ever since her mother left her, she tried somehow to gather her life and stopped thinking about all the things that seemed somewhat unusual in her life….

"two soft drinks" Veer told the waiter…

Chandni immediately looked at Veer…. Then glanced around the place…. It was indeed silent… not many people had come for dinner… dim lights and soft music made her relax….

Veer touched her soft hands…. " Chandni" …

Chandni smiled….

"I always want you in front of me…. You have become an important part of my life…. i can't even think about staying without you"

"I know Veer…. And I feel the same" Chandni kept her hand on Veer's strong hand….

***************

 

Manohar was waiting for the Doctor's report while standing impatiently outside Kaka's room…. Though Manohar now thought about the day when Kaka was lying on the ground, after he heard the scream…. Just before that Kaka loudly said that he saw Chandni sitting outside the house…… "but how is this possible…" Manohar murmured…. This was not getting anywhere…

"Manohar" Doctor came from the corridors….

"yes Doctor, is everything normal??" Manohar asked

"well I am surprised…. The reports are normal… the only thing is he cannot talk, but he can listen to everybody…. His body may not move… but he can sense everything…"

Manohar was still thinking about the things taking place one after the other….

 

*****************

 

"Thanks for nice dinner…" Chandni said….while putting her arm in Veer's arm…

"don't say thanks… I will take my thanks myself…" he came closer while Chandni pushed him…

"you take the keys, I will come…."

Chandni smiled at him and walked towards the car….

She walked in the dark car park when out of sudden she saw an old woman standing in front of her…. "ouch…." Chandni jerked back a little… "you scared me"

She kept her hand on her heart….

The old lady smiled… "it's time to face the bitter truth of your life…. it's the time to realize who you are….. numerous seasons have past with this time…. Through out ages this horrifying truth has carried away so many lives….its the time"

"you are still standing here.." Veer shouted…

Chandni turned behind.. "yes…i.."

"what…??"

Chandni turned again…. There wasn't anyone…. "Veer…I saw.."

"not again Chandni….now lets go…."

He slid her arm around her waist and walked towards the car…..

*****************

Maneka couldn't sleep…. She knew something was wrong…. When for the first time she heard Mehrangarh's name from Chandni… she thought Chandni must be making up some story…. But after looking at the pictures, she now was sure that something is wrong….

"I must help Chandni to find the truth… but why only Chandni saw that stone…"

 

***********

He stopped the car outside her house…. "we have reached home.."

She opened her eyes… "oh… did I sleep.??"  She said embarrassingly…

"yes" he said and came closer to kiss her lips…

She smiled and turned away… "I must go now…"

"wait" he ran her fingers on her cheeks…. Slowly towards her neck….. she closed her eyes, feeling his touch….

His hands touched her chest…. She took deep breath…. "no …." She said softly….

He did not stop and came closer…. Placed a small kiss on her chest….

She opened her eyes and pushed him away… "I am getting late…" another second she was standing outside the car and started walking towards the main door….

"I won't leave you next time.." he said softly

She smiled and watched him leaving outside the gate….

*************

 

 

 

 

Next Day……..

Chandni looked at the pictures again…. "I think we must go to this place…"

Maneka wasn't surprised at Chandni's response… "I know we must…. but do you think by going there, you can solve all your confusions….??"

"I don't know Maneka….but I must do something…you won't understand, so many unusual things are taking place in my life….i have lost my Mother… Kaka is in hospital… and I am sure something is linked with all these happenings…" Chandni said ..

"alright…  I will go with you…" Maneka added..

"thanks Maneka…. I have to go to mom's office today… there are some important documents that I have to take to the lawyer… will see you in the evening."

 

After some time

 

Chandni walked towards the office…. She had to complete some important work…. "I think I must sit in Mom's room… all the files are there…. While she checked the files…her hands reached the drawer of the table….

She opened…then slide back…. "what was that??"

She saw a black dairy…… slowly she picked it up….. "what's that" she said to herself….

Chandni never saw this diary before… it was old…very old indeed…. She flipped through the pages…..

I still see her….. I don't know what she wants…. The evil is surrounding this place…

I am writing this today when I saw her….she wants her life, after which she can have whatever she wants forever…I can see the shadow around me, my life has come to halt, everything seems foggy… I cannot wait for the day.

Again I heard the same noise, it is getting closer… but I have to sacrifice my life before I can see anything wrong taking place…

There is only one solution to this evil… Mehrangarh….before I could go, I am no more….

"Chandni maam…."  Someone knocked at the door….

Chandni looked around… all nervous, "yes"

"Mr Veer has come to see you" Rita said….

"oh …ok…." Chandni quickly kept the diary back….

 

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Edited by Freethinker - 09 March 2013 at 5:07am

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Posted: 09 March 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
resed...
 god, finally u r here...

i ws so despearately waiting di...whr wer u??


n see, my luck, incredibly i m able to welcome u back...(in midst of long n tiring studies n wrk.)...i m almost inactive nowadays...

wil try to unres soon.

but seriously a big shock to see u diShocked


~~EDITED~~

though it ws a chotu chotu upadte...
 but lovly...
 chandeer's first date- officially 1st date...ohooo!!!...

hmm...it ws like marnagarh ws hero of the update...ofcourse after veer...

god, veer is so so philandering..can't miss naughtyness anytime...
 chandini is so like prey, innocent wid him...

god, that buddhi aunty bck again...-wat ws she saying- time has come...em so sos excited for thet...the real thrill of stry is on its way...
garam garam masala to be served for us- thrilling...superntural things too gonna cm na???

i w8ing w8ing n waiting...

jaldi jaldi dena..

mahrengrh- wer it is??/...evn i wanna go- so mysterious, but still so adventurous...

veer, u naughty boyy...car scn ws so cosy, real treat afta so many days...

but di, next time a bigger bigger update...

and bring mahrngarh soon...

dat is grandpa's diary...yeaa!...but vo merr kyu gye...y he died...mystry agn...??
grandpa cud also see shadows...like chand...

evn veer cn see dem...but he sees only wen drunken...

y he cud not see while cming to car afta chand...


onooo!!..
 so many mysteries...

di, super suspence, jaldi jaldi updates dena plz...

miss u, lov u...love rtmc


Edited by sweetsanyo - 09 March 2013 at 6:30am

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