SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) ~2 RTMC FF - Page 23

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909


awesome part <3
thanks dear 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by samu_khamkar


Awesome and wowsome...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Finally Veer told her the entire story😊I am happy to see this transformation from passionate and arrogant lover to a loyal and caring one... but these cell phones i tell u😑baja di galat time ghanti when Chandani is about tell him her experiences...

And don't know why but I am feeling like something important is associated with this Vishal's partyπŸ˜•

Do continue soon.
thanks for the lovely comments...lets see how the story unfolds its twists.. πŸ˜‰
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by tejjo


Di
im blushing
blushing

blushing

blushing

blushing

blushing

haye kya ud tha
me to mar gyi aj

kinna shona or romantic ud tha

at last he told her everything
wow wo bhi romantic way me

oops! Chand nhi bta payi us bhootni ke baare me

or wo tree wala scene to...bs
blushing

blushing

blushing

hey apni chand daring ho gyi h hmmm
she unbuttoned his shirt...ek or blushing scene

ab chand veer se nhi darti darna bhi nhi chahiye

oh veer party me ja rha hope wo drink na kare chand ke liye

di veer chand se milne aana wala h na to pls ud soon

im excited to read more

mindblowing tha ye ud

ud soon
luv u di
thanks a lot darling...loved reading your comments. 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by shafyyy


nice part
ThankS a LOt deaR
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by --Ruchi--


Lovely update dear.
thanKs A Lot DeaR
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by nitali


very nice and emotional sweet... very very very very very very very lovelyyy... yaar u write so gooddd... just fantasticcc... mindblowing... waiting for next part..
thanks a lot sweetie..will try and update next part soon... 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Shraddhamurat


<font size="6">Wow wow wow wow that was simply mindblowing...




it was nt dat much ahem ahem but still it was tooo romantic...veer raichand told the truth to chandani...i loved the way chand blushed...u have described it so beautifully dat i could clearly visualize thd whole scenario...amazing too good...
</font>
thank you so much for the lovely comments dear...thanks a lot 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by disha15


<font color="#9999cc">A a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h!πŸ˜ƒ</font>

<font color="#9999cc">I dunno if im even alive after reading such an epic update!My heart had given up beating you see</font>πŸ˜†

<font color="#9999cc">You know you're just too good with the romantic stuff,so anything i say would never be good enough in comparison to the update,so im simply gonna shut up and applaudπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘</font>

<font color="#9999cc">You're awesome!Way too awesome!</font>


my lavender girl...thanks a lot for the awesome comments...you are too good in writting comments...loved reading...
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Bells.E.cullen


wow superb...
finally veer told her about d curse...
n chand to bechari khud ko control hi nhi kr pa rhi...
loved d update alot...
thnx alot 4 d pm...
thanks sweetie... 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by dhwanimehta23


awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊
thanks dear 😊

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