SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) ~2 RTMC FF - Page 21

Posted: 11 years ago
Wao maze aa gye 🤗
full romantic 😳
kinne cute lag rhe the dono sath sath
wao veer drink ni krega ab 👍🏼
raat ko ayega 😳
fir se romance hoga 😳
yipppeee
di jaldi ud krna
veer bi
n
shikar bi
luv u di
Edited by princesspriyart - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
great part
so now chandni knows about the curse
Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow finally veer ne bata diya but chandini ne kyun nahi bataya
thanks for pm nd superb up
Posted: 11 years ago
superb...
its so beautiful..😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Cute & lovely superb update di veer ka ye uncharecterstic change behavior mujhe bohat acha laga per vishal ki party? 😲 yani raat ko veer firse drink karke chand k pass ayega? Hna jarur ayega akher o veer ha hope chand vi jaldi se veer ko satyabama k baremein bata de and di mujhe aapka pm nehi mila 😭 plz add me in ur pm list cont soon di i am already waiting 4 ur next update
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and wowsome... 👏  👏

Finally Veer told her the entire story 😊 I am happy to see this transformation from passionate and arrogant lover to a loyal and caring one... but these cell phones i tell u 😡 baja di galat time ghanti when Chandani is about tell him her experiences...

And don't know why but I am feeling like something important is associated with this Vishal's party 😕

Do continue soon.
Posted: 11 years ago
Di
im blushing
blushing

blushing

blushing

blushing

blushing

haye kya ud tha
me to mar gyi aj

kinna shona or romantic ud tha

at last he told her everything
wow wo bhi romantic way me

oops! Chand nhi bta payi us bhootni ke baare me

or wo tree wala scene to...bs
blushing

blushing

blushing

hey apni chand daring ho gyi h hmmm
she unbuttoned his shirt...ek or blushing scene

ab chand veer se nhi darti darna bhi nhi chahiye

oh veer party me ja rha hope wo drink na kare chand ke liye

di veer chand se milne aana wala h na to pls ud soon

im excited to read more

mindblowing tha ye ud

ud soon
luv u di
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice and emotional sweet... very very very very very very very lovelyyy... yaar u write so gooddd... just fantasticcc... mindblowing... waiting for next part..
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wow wow wow that was simply mindblowing...




it was nt dat much ahem ahem but still it was tooo romantic...veer raichand told the truth to chandani...i loved the way chand blushed...u have described it so beautifully dat i could clearly visualize thd whole scenario...amazing too good...
Edited by Shraddhamurat - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
 A a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h! 😃 

I dunno if im even alive after reading such an epic update!My heart had given up beating you see😆

You know you're just too good with the romantic stuff,so anything i say would never be good enough in comparison to the update,so im simply gonna shut up and applaud 👏 👏 👏 

You're awesome!Way too awesome!


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