Posted: 17 September 2012 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
You called me your best critic and I took forever to comment! MEH! I suck, ne? Anyway! I'll just keep it short :P
I actually felt bad for KD because I'm not a huge fan of this "reading minds" powers. It seems fun at first but when it is uncontrollable it just becomes a pain. KD will be fine once he masters it fully but till then...ouch. First glimpse of Samar, nice! Does he disappear? Or is he like Flash? Anyway! He got me all intrigued! So the Scions are home! Not bad! It was kinda cool seeing that they have a secret place in the school.
One thing though, I got a bit confused at the narrative. During the starting. Did the POV change or was it constantly KD's? I couldn't make it out. Uss pe dhyan do!
MAR JAA MARDOOD! MY AVI IS A LOT BETTER! :@
So yeah, short chapter. Lolz at their reactions and JJ wanted to capture the moment. Lovely description of their hideout, so detailed. Could picture it all in my head. KD followed them? hmmm...curious! Oh well, he is with them now! RV not reacting much to KD..ajeeb laga thora. Poor JJ, he is getting all these surprises in one day.
Getting a bit draggish now yaar! Let JJ explain everything! I'm getting so curious to know what's going on! :P
Yeah, the comments are crappy but I'm not in a very hyper mood -___-''
P.S - my avi STILL rules!