Originally posted by CoffeeAddictI read the last two chapters late at night so didn't leave a comment.
Coming to both separetely.
Loved the serious intensity you've shown Piddi to have related to his power, hidden behind all the happy-go-lucky-jumping-buffoon boy.
I wish they'd show the Radio Station working in the show too.
The whole mystery with Panchi was amazingly shown, and Ranveer's powers too.
The KiSha moment was enchanting.
I wish JJ had showed them his mark too. I loved the symbols you've used for all of them. I guess Kiya's half flower is the indication that she still to learn to control the nature.
It really is going fast. But hey, we ain't complaining!!
This is all reminding me of YRF TV's Seven a lot. I used to love that show.
So Panchi's power is of hydrokinesis, Ranveer has the healing factor and pyrokinesis (somehow I don't understand two powers being present together), KD is telepathic so automatically has a chance of being telekinetic and power of invisibility (my favorite types, I love that you gave them to KD), Piddi has the ability of precognition, Kiya can manipulate weather... They all need a lot of working and practice to master them though as we can see. Now I wonder what Juhi, Samar and Bobby can do.
And even JJ.
Amazing work Panchi.
I guess it wasn't supposed to get so supernatural when you begun, since you didn't mention them being heirs of "powerful" people instead you said "humble". Though there mystifying inklings of something different.
Brilliantly concieved!! Kudos...
Thank you si much for reading and giving such an amazing response! Looking at your comment, you seem like a really good writer! :D
Actually, I use to watch Seven, Asmin, Mastishk, Dhrishika, Haryaksh, Varya, Hriday, Eklavya, Shonya & Shlok :D Use to love it! This FF wasnt suppose to be supernatural, but I thought because there are so many characters, it would be easier that way!
Ranveer doesnt have a healing power. I will explain how he was able to heal Panchi in the later chapters. I actually had to think alot about that one
i have figured Juhi & Samar, Bobby...err! Haha!
Well keep reading! Thank you for this comment!