llScionsll [TBP'FF] Ch6-Pg29 16th Sept'12 UPD! - Page 20

Prachi!!..ahh i hv become regular reader of this FF now :)
Well as i said before i love the pace of the story..neither too rushed nor lame..perfect :)
KD's being a loner description ws well penned written.
I loved the part of X-Z speed of life n RV n panchi confused part,nice one.
But the description at the end of what Uncle did that was a wow!!.

Well update ASAP! :) :)

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

Prachi!!..ahh i hv become regular reader of this FF now :)
Well as i said before i love the pace of the story..neither too rushed nor lame..perfect :)
KD's being a loner description ws well penned written.
I loved the part of X-Z speed of life n RV n panchi confused part,nice one.
But the description at the end of what Uncle did that was a wow!!.

Well update ASAP! :) :)

I'm loving the pace of the events. I love the supernatural touch.Keep it up😊Edited by DamonCrazy_D3 - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DamonCrazy_D3

I'm loving the pace of the events. I love the supernatural touch.Keep it up😊

What I meant earlier was the sudden flow in revealing of Scions.
So KD didn't follow them,
Royal has a room for Scions? That was surprising.
You've given a glimpse into the power of each I think, expect Bobby i guess.
Brilliant work
Cntnu soon.

Res! Will comment later! Edited by iloveASR - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

What I meant earlier was the sudden flow in revealing of Scions.
So KD didn't follow them,
Royal has a room for Scions? That was surprising.
You've given a glimpse into the power of each I think, expect Bobby i guess.
Brilliant work
Cntnu soon.

Originally posted by: iloveASR

Res! Will comment later!

Unres

ok here it goes! when i saw ur pm today I was like yaay!! i really like the way u write. Usually when anyone talks abt supernatural powers the person possessing it is shown to be very powerfull and has no weakness but i liked that u dint take the conventional approach. Instead you called their powers as their weakness...the reason why KD is a loner...really liked your thought behind that. I even liked that in this part u showed how they feel abt their powers(mostly KD's views) and the whole x,y,z thing was a nice touch. The end was something unexpected...i thought JJ would take to to some quite and safe place and tell then abt their powers but a secret door in royal!! and thanks for the insight on juhi and samar's powers...though concluding much is not that possible but now i have a hint!! keep up the good work :DD 

I love the pace of the story,Neither too Rushed nor too Lame,Its Simply Perfect *Madhuriji ki Style mein* 😉

Originally posted by: *Prachi*

Lol! Honestly, when I started reading that comment, I thought you were gonna contrast your first sentence! 😆  anyways, thank you!

I don't like the way a hero is given all the benefits in the world! I am glad you like it!

I did not give any hint for Juhi. But you guys are taking on something as one. Hey! Normal people have some advantages too, you know! 😆

Thank you so much for ommenting :P Glad you are liking my work!