Matters of the Heart (Fanfic)... - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow nuce fanfic
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the lovely fanfiction carry on soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey its Awsome..... plz continuee soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
its very interesting.Keep it up.plzzzzz continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
woooo thanx friends, that was a huge response.

                   :::< PART 3 >:::

The rain strength starts decreasing slowly. Prem is heading towards the group with anger fuming around his mind. Mukti's constant shouts and screams are not heard by Prem.

Prem : Hai , what's ur problem huh? Why are u trying to hurt Mukti? Don't u dare to even touch her.

Guy2 (laughs) : Acha...haha...

Guy3 : Arey Bhai, y r u being the villian of our story . Why don't u join us. She is a good catch. We can satisfy ourselves for today.(He brings his hand to Prem for shaking).

Prem (ignores Guy3) and turns to move to his car. Guy1 comes quickly and catches hold of Prem's shoulders.

Guy1 : Hai dude, ithni jaldi kya hey? Tumhe akela chahiye kya..vo nahi hoga..ladki ko chod ke ja. Varna....

Prem (turns around and punches Guy1's face...looks down as Guy1 falls) : Varna..Varna...kya karega tu?

Mukti (gives a sudden scream) : Prem please lets go. I am...getting scared.

Guy3 (jumps over Prem...Prem falls down and Guy3 is on him now....Guy2 and Guy4 catch hold of Mukti) : Tune apne brother ko mara. Nai chodunga mein tuge....

Guy3 takes a knife from his jeans pocket...proceeds its over Prem...meanwhile Prem watches Mukti being tortured by the other two guys...Prem's pulse rate increases. Prem gives a loud and long scream and pushes Guy3 out of his way...snatches the knife from Guy3 and rushes to Mukti.

Guy1 wakes from his unconsciousness and along with Guy3 runs towards Prem. Prem sences their approach turns back and cuts a thick mark on Guy3's right hand (upper arm) and pushes the knife into the right leg of Guy1...takes it back and turn back to attend Mukti's attackers. By the time the other two understand the upcoming danger and run to save their lives. He turns back to see Guy1 and Guy3, who also with great difficulty rise from the ground and run to save themselves. Prem drops the knife and turns back to look at Mukti.

Mukti doesn't know what was happening all this while. She gets very confused and has lost her state of mind. She runs to Prem and fall on his arms with her hands held tightly around him. Prem at first hesitates...but slowly covers Mukti in his hands and holds her against his chest.
Mukti (suddenly realises what she was doing and pushes herself away from him) :Sorry...i...it...it was...jst a mistake.

She takes a few steps back and turns herself. She starts crying her two palms covering her face. Prem looks at her helplessly and walks towards her.
Suddenly Mukti feels something hard in her head. She feels a very bad headache...and brings her hands to massage her head. As she was going to fall, Prem gets hold of her. Prem carries her and takes her to his yellow sports car....

            #### END OF PART 3 ####

Hope it was satisfying friends!
I thought it would be nice if u could participate and help out on the music...like which song would be apt for the hugging situation, when she turns and cries etc etc and where else u feel music is necessary...
Do suggest.

Cheers:),
Sneha

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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG it waz really gud. update again yaar!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was soo cute i loved the way u described da fighting scene
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please cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Please update soon!!!! too good to stop now! please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 and great description!~ 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx frnds..i will be posting soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
really like ur fanfic, keep at it and one day u will become a writer 😊