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i love you part 9

eran Goldie
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 2:04am | IP Logged

here it goes:

Dish: DK you can't tell mummy ji anything she won't be able to take it. (Shock)

DK: OK, i want to spend some time with you disha. Tell you what we'll have dinner at a resturant tonight.

Dish: OK! but you go now, quickly.

In the background Mummy ji is calling "Sunny"!!!!!!

DK: coming maa! DK turns to smile at disha before he leaves.

Dish then falls on her bed like shes away with the fairys, and smiles like mad (don't blame her like, can you?)

that evening:

Dish is getting ready into a yellow sari, looking dead hot and of course with her ring and bangles on!!!! DK is also getting ready into the blue shirt disha had wanted him to wear for the party! both look good!! and DK is to die for here, well he is in my head, anyway!!!!

DK goes to see his maa who is asleep now. kisses her on the forhead and says:

DK: i am going to spend time with your real daughter in law maa, if you knew you would be so happy to know that not Pori but disha was your daughter in law. (DK has soft tears in his eyes)Cry 

DK then turns to leave and sees Pori at the door. He is mad but tries to keep a straight face so he doesn't spoil his mood.

Pori: where are you going so later DK with out your wife?

DK: Shut up Pori.

Disha out of the blue:

Dish: who says he's going without his wife? (Dish is smiling at DK and then has a sarcastic smile for Pori) Ha Ha Ha!!!!

Dish: shall we go DK? (she grabs DK's arm and they walk out together.

Pori: Disha!!! (In a angry tone!!!)Angry

what do you think?

love eran!!!

samy74 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 2:26am | IP Logged

hey

great carry on why stop..waiting for the next part..

samyBig smile

rang Senior Member
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 3:37am | IP Logged

WRITE SOOOOOOOON

RANG

lalit1 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 3:57am | IP Logged
go onnnnnnnnnnnnnn
stonex IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 4:04am | IP Logged
great writing. keep going
Asian Princess Goldie
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 10:58am | IP Logged

lolll thats soo good eran love the last bit lolll who said hes going wid out his wife loll keep it up

Love Asian Princess

crazyfan Goldie
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 11:35am | IP Logged
its just awesome......u just be the riter of TD eran!!!
cant wait for the next part!!! u rok! Clap
crazyfan Goldie
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 11:36am | IP Logged
its just awesome......u just be the riter of TD eran!!!
cant wait for the next part!!! u rok! Clap

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