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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Tu apne reserves poore kar. Uske baad mera update milega Evil Smile

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Born2Dance

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
U updating this ??? Shocked

luv_arsha

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
just read all ur parts..
sorry for commenting late...

SO coming to the 1ST CHAPTER:
loved sharon's entry..
always wanted to see reyam ka brother bond... "CHOTE"WinkWink  
neva imagined sharon rai prakash saying such "PAVITRA" words.. TongueTongue
kriyaansh ki shaadi hai...WinkWinkWink LOVE @ FIRST SITE.. LOLLOL

2ND CHAPTER
rey sayin kria 'unki'.. haii EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
kriyaansh fisrt talk.. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
swaron fights.. he he Big smileBig smile
kriyam $ sharey scene epic.. LOL 
omg kriyaansh romance.. it was HOT.. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

3rd chapter
rey imagines sharon as kriya.. TongueTongueTongue *side effects of love*
love sharey convo.. n GAJAR KA HALWA..
swayam bohot zyada naughty hai... LOLLOL i'm liking this swayam WinkWink ( bt he really cares bout his brother SmileSmile ) kriyaansh romance.. really amazing.. BlushingBlushingBlushing 
loved kriyaansh's anger & fight.. thnk god on the spot solve ho gyi.. 

chapter 4 
loved swayam-mom bond.. n finally swaron scene... 
*itna late kyun diya*... AngryAngryAngry 
krisha r lovely... LOLLOLLOL 
loved the mushy mushy update..

chapter 5
finally shaadi ho gayi... SmileSmile
poor kriya crying.. CryCry 
loved the use of "chooli ke peeche" wala video Big smileBig smileBig smile
"kya kahun sharon?? maine socha ki maine ek mard se shaadi ki "kriya said dramatically sad reyam shocked and soon krisha burst out laughing... 'EPIC'
REALLY like the way dey understood eachother.. SmileSmile

chapter 6 
loved the kriyaansh convo.. SmileSmile
swaron also.. bt plz more swaron romance.. ConfusedConfused

chapter 7
loved he way u described the kriyaansh scene it was beautifull... ClapClap
really love the effect kriya is having on rey EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
*y sharon had to come dere AngryAngry*
rey actually cant see kriya crying.. CryCryCry
loved the PAINTBRUSH wala part [ i was thinkin something else.. dirty mind WinkWink ]
dori wala scene toh kriyaansh ka patent scene hain..

chapter 8
i really like swaron fights.. they fight lke kids..
fighting over a washroom.. LOL 
* swaron romance + kriyaansh romance = atom bomb EmbarrassedEmbarrassed*
i really like reyam's dad.. Big smileBig smile
golgappe.. yummm !!!
last but nt the least: loved the students 'BHABHI'.. TongueTongue


thnk u so much for giving such long long updates...
bt plz add a little more SWARON to the ff... want to read their side of LOVE STORY also...
plz pm me nxt time when u update..
eagerly waitin for the next upadate...
well written n amazing concept.. ClapClapClap

zona_malik

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
MINDBLOWING

SUPER AMAZING

SO SO SO LOVED IT

SWARON WERE CUTE

KRIYAANSH STARTING SCENE DEN REYAM MASTI WID AUNTI'S

DEN DRIVE

PAANI PURI

LAST BUT NT THE LEAST BHABI

n yeah
"Rey!!! "Kriya looked around as she stepped into the big hall!!!

the big fans made her hairs blow  and her pallu flowed back as she tied it in a saree model!!! Rey grinned wide seeing the beauty in front of him!!!!!

"wow!!"he heard all the students gasp  slowly!!!

Indeed !! meri wife hai !!

he gave a smile of pride!! Kriya spotted him  and smiled but felt concious!!

"come !!"rey called her...

she passed smiles to all looking or to say gaping at her and reached them

"Guys this is "he was cut

"bhabhi!!!!!!!"all the boys shouted and  two lifted her on their shoulders as the rest danced around them!! Kriya was totally shocked when rey laughed and someone left out of jealousy fuming...!!!

"guys darao mat use Rey said to them and they placed her down !!"

hehe guyz darao mat ussey..so cuteee

update soon :)

princessSonia

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
FABClapClap

MINDBLOWINGThumbs UpThumbs Up

WONDERFUL...CoolCool

AWESUMStarStar

AMAZING...HeartHeart

loved d whole update...
do cont soon...

n thnks 4 d pm...Smile

shelly_Arsha

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
WOWW!! loveedd it..
the boyss staring at kriya saying wow.. rey proudly saying she's his wife LOL
who was jealoused and fumed out?
update soon and do pm   Smile

Edited by shelly_Arsha - 28 March 2013 at 3:57pm

kriyasree

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Deetha dii wen wil u update

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