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PART-1: 









it was a casual day...but not for every one...

destiny was starting its beautiful game today...

destiny is plays a really crazy games...

a girl in a light pink salwar came down the stairs elegantly...
.

girl: mamma aapne bulaya???

mom: haan beta...wo tere papa bula rahe hai...

she smiled at her mom and went to her father...

girl: pappa...aapne bulaya????

dad: oh...pari tum???? aao aao...haan maine hi bulaya...

she sad on the chair's hand on which her dad was sitting ang hugged him side wards...

pari: kya hua pappa????? aap thoda serious lag rahe hai????/

dad: kuch nahi pari...bas kuch important baat karni hai tumse...

pari: haan pappa boliye na...

he took a long sigh...took her hands in his...sqeezed them...

dad: beta ab tumhari shaadi ki tym aagaya hai...

pari: pappa...itni bhi kya jaldi??????//

dad: pari meri baat samjho...tum ab 27 ki hogayi ho...beti ko aur apne paas nahi rakhsakta...tumhara ghar baste hue dekhna chahta hun...

pari: pappa...mujhe shaadi se koi problem nahi...par aap ko aur mamma ko chod ke???

dad: beta beti hamesha  parayi hoti hai...ab tumhe apne life partner ke saath baaki life bitani hai...

mom: haan beta...infact ek ladki keliye uska apna sirf uska pati hota hai...

pari: par...

dad: pari...tum kisise?????

pari: arey nahi pappa...mai toh bas yeh soch rahi hun ki jise meine dekha bhi nahi wo mera sabkuch kaise hosakta hai?????/

dad: hmm...ye baat tumhari maa tumhe ache se samjha sakti hai...tum bas ye batao ki tum shaadi keliye tayyar ho?????

pari: pappa aagar aapko lagta hai meri shaadi hojani chahiye toh jaise aap chaho...

dad: *kissed her forehead* meri pyaari pari...

ye lo ladke ka photo...mumbai ka hai...maine bohut pooch taach ki hai...bohut acha hai...dikhne mei bhi aur nature wise bhi...bohut bada...

pari: pappa...!!!!!!!! aapko sahi lagana????? toh theek hai...abhi mai jaa rahi hun...wo sony ki painting beechmei chodke aagayi...gussa hojayegi...

dad: *slight laugh*kk jao jao...aur ye lo photo bhi leke jao...

she smiled and took it...she went upstairs...

dad: smriti...i think she needs u now...

smriti: ji...mai abhi jaa rahi hun...



smriti went up...she saw her daughter seriously painting the picture of sony...her cute pigeon...

she smiled and sat beside her...

finally she completed with a brush in her mouth...a paint bottle in left and giving the final touches with the ri8 (fingers se)

finally after completing she washed her hands and came out...there on the bed lyed the envelop in which HIS photo was present...

finally she sat on the couch...smriti sat beside her and caressed her hair...she lept into her moms lap and was thinking...smriti was silent...then after ong pause kriya spoke...

k: mom...aisa kyun kaha aapne ki pati hi apna hota hai?????

sm: kria...i know maaine tumhe aaj tak nahi bataya...par ab bata deti hun...

hum ladkiyan naa maayke ki apne hote hai na hi sasural ki...kyun ki janam is ghar mei lete hai aur aakhri saans uss ghar mei...par hamareliye ek jagah hamesha se hi rehta hai...wo hai pati ka dil...sach bataun toh bas apne pati ke bahon ko hi hum apni ghar...apni jagah ...kehsakte hai...jo bhi dar ho...pareshani ho...pati hamesha tumhare saath dega...par wo tabhi jab tum use sache dil se apne aapse jyaada pyaar karogi...samjhi?????

kr: par mamma...jinhe mai jaanti tak nahi unhe pyaar kaise karun?????

sm: tumhe karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai beta...pyaar apne aap hojata hai...bas tum apne pati ko apna samjho...baaki unpe chod do...

kria smiled...

sm: ab ladke ka photo dekho...acha lagi toh bata dena...

kriya blushed unknowingly...

smriti stood up...bent and kissed her cheek...

sm: dekha abhi se sharmane lagi?? toh tumne already use apna maanliya...

kria smiled...smriti went down...kriya locked the room and fell on the bed...sony came and sat on her back...slowly walked up to her shoulder and stayed there...

kriya turned pecked sony and took the envelop...she pulled out the pic...she smiled...
.

kr: pappa ki selection hamesha no.1 hai...

she blushed unknowingly and was abt to throw the envelop ...then she saw a slip in it...she opened it...

it was written

name: reyaansh singhania

age: 28

proffession: dance instructor and  the owner of fabric printing company...( in short  textiles...those which we get on fabric printed dresses etc...)

inrests: playing basket ball,table tennis.

ph: ***************

she smiled...she fell back with his pic...then again rolled reached out the photo frame on her table...took it. and slid his pic on top of her pic...she smiled and kept it on the table...she just layed down on her stomach...looking at his pic and slowly drifted to sleep...

a guy after a hell lot of training came back to his home and just rushed into his room and took a cool water shower...he came out wore a vest ...with his boxer and went down to have his dinner...

all were waiting for him...

sw: bhai...atlast aap aagaye...mai toh mar hi jaa raha hun bhook se...

said swayam...

swayam singhania...

second son of singhania's ...

close to his bro...

he was cute and calm boy...but naughty at times...he was very much pampered by his brother...he loves his bro more for the way he takes care of him...he was 23 yrs old...he is a singer...known for slow romantic and blissful songs...he was very succesful in his life and feild...but he cant only give the credit to him...another one also deserves it...it was sharon...

sharon raiprakash...

a great writer...

she writes such a lyrics that ppl just gets lost listening to them...

she was with him through out his career...21 yrs old...

he was pacing to and fro...before the office...waiting for his chance...finally they called him...he sang...but to his bad luck they rejected him ...he headed out dissapointed...he came out of the office and stood there sometym hoping he would be called back...but no use...30 mins passed he thought he should accept the truth...he was abt to move when a girl bumped into him...she fell down...many papers fell down...

girl: saale mujhe dhakha maarke nikalta hai????kyun tum logon ki pol kholdi isliye...dekhloongi tujhe aur tera wo singer ko...mere jhoote ke neeche rehne ke bhi layak nahi hai saal paison se kaam chalaleta hai...meri gaane waste hai???? nahi toh uski tarah bematlab ki shabdh likhun toh wo acha ...kamina kahika...

security: dekhiye aap jyaada bol rahi hai ...mujhe aapko zabardasti dhakha dena padega...

girl: oye!!!!!!! tu dhakka dega mujhe???dena?? dekhti hun mai bhi...ye jo jagah khadi hun na wo tumhare uss nalayak owner ki nahi hai...haath bhi lagaya na toh kya karoongi mujhe hi nahi pata...mai sharon hun...sharon raipraksh...

security: dekhiye abhi jayiye aap plzz...sab ikatta ho rahe hai...plzz aap jayiye...haath jhodta hun...

sh: oye keh rahi hun...iss kamina ke paas se acha kahi aur naukri dhoondhle...acha hoga...mai tumse better hun...uss bandar ki haaton se diya hua paison se toh nahi khati hun...huh!!!!!!!

she turned around...and found some of her papers on ground...

sh: hey bhagwaanji...mere gaane...

she ran grabbing each paper...swayam was also helping her...

finally he handed her papers...

sh: ji thank u...thanks a lot...agar aap nahi hote toh aaj mere saare gaane pata nahi kaha kaha chalegaye hote...

sw: ji no problem...


she fixed all the papers and walked to the parking lot...

sw: waise aap aise chilla kyun rahi thi.?????

sh: woh???????/ woh saala singer...kehraha tha mere lyrics ache nahi par agar 25,000 doongi toh wo gayega...uss kamene se mere gaana gawane se acha mai kue mei khud jaun...

sw: hahaha...par sach kahun bohut ache se gaali di aapne use...

sh: waise aap?????

sw: wo????  actually mei ek singer hun...par usne kaha ki mai singing ke layak nahi hun...

sh: kamina singer ka matlab nahi jaanta wo kya judge karega...ummm...if u dnt mind mei test loon aapki??????

sw: kya?????/really???????ok/...gaane mei kya problem hai...

he san a song very beautifully...

sh: sahi thi mei...wo budda, khadoos, nalayak sach mei kisiki layak nahi aapko singer keliye layak nahi smjha?????/saale...

sw: aap itni gaali kyun deti ho?????

sh: *laugh*oh...wo...jab gussa aata hai toh aise hi pavitra shabdh nikal jaate hai...

both laughed...

swayam reached his car...

sw: waise aap galat na samjhe toh hum saath mei kaam kar sakte hai...muscians vagera aap chinta mat kijiye mere bhai sab arrange kardenge...toh kya aap?????

sh: arey its a fab idea...so kal se strt kare...iss kamine ko bhi mooh thod jawab denge...

sw: laughing... theek ahi toh mai chalta hu...

sh: bye...Smile

swayam took his car and came out to see her standing in the sun for bus...

he stopped and asked her to get in...first she denied but later agreed...

(sharon:
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she got in and he drove to her house instructed by her...she is a middle class girl...came from a small town dehradun just to fulfil her dreams...living in a small house...alone...

he asked whether she lives in that house...she smiled waved her hand and went in jumping...he smiled and finallly headed back...they strtd working next day...they made albums...it became hits...atlast they were on top 5...

their friendship grew stronger...and for swayam its too strong he knew he fell for her...but she doesnt...so he was afraid to aske her...

swaron are the successful persons...


rey : sorry chote aaj practice mei late hogaya...waise tera naya gaaana kaise chal raha hai..?????? hi mom...hi dad...

priya: hello beta...aao baito...

ranvijay: hello beta...

sw: hectic day huh?????? aur waise bhi ...mera gaana bohut hi sahi track pe hai...aur bhai kya kahun sharon ne aise lyrics likhena...bas poocho mat...

rey: paagal...use confess kyun nahi kardeta...

vijay: haan haan sahi hai...

sw: dad...aap bhi...im afraid...mai apna friendship kharab nahi karna chahta hun...she is my luck...i cant loose it...

all smiled and continued...

priya: rey...beta tumse kuch baat karni hai...

rey: haan   mom...swayam wo dal dena...

priya: wo beta tum bhi kisise pyaar...

rey: nahi mom...u know na...meri types ki koi nahi hai...

vijay: hai...

reyam: wat???Confused

vijay: haan beta ...maine ek ladki dhoondha tereliye/...toh kya tum????/

rey: dad chill...ye tensed face aapko suit nahi karta...waise agar ladki achi hai...aapko pasand aayi toh mujhe koi problem nahi...

sw: par dad fixed hai kya???????

vijay: bas rey ko aur uss ladki ko ok kehna hai...agar donon ko ok toh pakka...

sw: toh kya bhabhi ka pic bhi nahi milega?????

priya: haina...pehle khana khalo aur mere saath drawing room chalo...

reyam ate and followed her...she showed them the pic...rey smiled at the simple yet serene beauty he was looking at.
..

sw: bhabhi toh bohut beautiful hai...

rey smiled...

finally all headed to their rooms...rey took the pic in his pocket...later after gng in he placed it on tabe...took out his laptop...checked his schedule and did some work and finally fell on bed ...he took the pic...smiled..."beautiful"he muttered and dozed of keeping it in the frame side to his bed...then he saw the envelop his mom gave along with the pic...he found a paper...he read.


name: kriya ghai...

age: 27

proffession: painting...and dancing...

intrests...: table tennis and  batminton

ph:****************


he smiled and dozed of looking at her pic...



there it was gonna start the very beautiful play of destiny...

to know what happens just stay connected...

but lyks and cmnts must!!!!!!!!!!!

hope u all like it...

love u all...Embarrassed




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res!

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RES
*unres.*
It was awesum..!
loved it..
really excited to knw wats gonna happned next..
di jaldi update karo..!Embarrassed


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*EDITED

This is called awesome to the power infinity Big smile

God damn this was so different from all the FFs on this forum...simply BEAUTIFUL Smile

Rey-kriya hopefully about to get married, n their story kinda reminds me of Vivah (shahid-amrita's film), which btw is one of my favourite movies...I just love that movie Heart Smile the journey from engagement to marriage, how they fall in love, the sweetness n innocence of a rltnshp, how they come close n finally how they overcome all the difficulties TOGETHER Smile expecting the same magic from rey-kriya's story too Smile

OMG was that actually sharon??? Shocked yeh sharon k character ko kya bana diya?? By god sharon n gali, wo v yeh wale Shocked I'm still shocked Shocked I'm gonna need a lot of time to believe ki its actually sharon Stern Smile

Btw in short it was a fadu starting...already in love with it Heart Smile

Update soon n don't forget to pm me Smile

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Res
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Awesome part di 

Dono photo dekh ke hi happy ho gaye 

Dono ko dance pasand hai wah kya baat hai 

Swayam singer that was unexpected 

Sharon writer that was also unexpected

As always swayam has fallen Sharon 
Sharon doesn't even know or she also has feeling for him 

Dekh te hai age kya hoga 

Long comment for you di


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owesome start
loved it

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