-TBP FF- Deepest Desire - Ch3 - Page37 Nov12 - Page 28

 Chotu sa updatte...

Originally posted by: asmaju

 Chotu sa updatte... i know =( 

Its k something better than nothing.. i'll try making it longer next time.. 

 And now tro the update

 it was bit emotional..i thought so too.. 

Kria feeling all sad and crying her heart out to panchi even if not by words by the hug she meant it all..kria ya kiya? 😆 Kriya, Kripa and Kiya.. my three fav gals.. I sometimes get them confused since I have ff's on all three 😛 

Deepika r asking KD to be aroung Kiya for her safety..

ANd finally coming to know that Kiya was no where involverd..:) yes.. see how she feels now in next update :P

Me waiting for next update..

Firstly, thank you so much for the pm! The intro, prologue,character sketch and even the updates were all amazing :D Loved the bond between panchi and kiya. Felt sad for kiya, but glad that she had a friend beside her! And yaay, her mom came to know the truth. I think now we will see a new relation between kiya and her mom :-)
Short, but great update. Loved it <3
I hope atleast now you will update a bit sooner :-P

Oh a tbp ff

khushi...u r gr8 darls...seriously...

How do u manage so many together...lol...

Will read all the parts and then comment

thanx 4 the pm

ps - khabar dar agar iske chakar mein IJD n MF ko bhul gayi toh

Khushi this time nor m i late or super late😆😆

itna chota??????kyu yaar????

but cute yaar Panchi n Kiya i love this bonding😳😳😳

finally Deepika knows the truth

lets see wht happens next😳

cont soon

A well written update is always welcome, however short or long Khushi.
This was one
Panchi and Kiya share a good bond.
Deepika seems like a multifaceted character.
Good job dear!

amazing update👏

short but sweet update... love the fact that her mother is not so bad as she is in the real drama... Please update the next part soon...

It was nice, but chotu =(. Update next part soon =)

awesome yr,...it wes short but very beautiful..plz update nesxt part whenu r free n sry fr d late cmnt...