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Presenting...
     
 
    


 
    Prologue
     

We often see what is not there, and what is there we often un see

Life is an uneven distribution of blessings and punishments

What seems like a blessing often turns out to be a source of torture

What we think is punishment often turns out to be our best moment


I gave you everything and never asked in return

I let you decide for me and never showed my burn

I had now forgotten who was the real owner

Falling in love was my mistake

I wont blame you because im the one at stake

For your sake I will give up the best thing too

Only given that I won't ever cry in front of you

 

You were my ideal ever since I had opened these eyes

With that my mind started to teach me lies

Things were smooth, but when did they say it would never crease?

I thought I was exactly what you wanted

In that race my own life became haunted


Life seemed perfect before you exposed the shock

Between me and my other half you became the block 

I cried I screamed I felt lost

Couldn't share my grief with the only other

As you had crushed him under your order


I use to capture beautiful moments of life

Who knew the grieves would become rife?

Gone were the days when smiles came in stocks

 Only thing I remembered were the hearts made of rock


I was the free bird with high spirits

Not in my wild imaginations I could think I would loose those spirits 

Didn't know what season brought in the tornado

Life was flipped in a blink

All we got to witness were the kinks


I was the strong one all along

Didn't know I would be proved wrong 

I was faced with the chaos that I thought died years ago

When I needed you the most

    You showed me I was lost
     

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This FF (other than the poem which I wrote) is a combined effort of me (-Grace-) and Zainab (zainab.A)
So all the credit goes to both of us.
We work on it together and put an equal amount of effort so please keep in mind this FF is a the result of the hand work of not one but two people.
To those who read my works, this is something different and more of a light hearted FF and has more dialogues compared to the ones I usually write. 

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Edited by -Grace- - 05 January 2013 at 6:00pm

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Okay this is so interesting. I like this poem, you guys have written, i can see a clear view into the story you will be present. Kudos to both,wonderful start.

PS| you rhymed the poemApprove


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update soon sounds good...

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Okay this is so interesting. I like this poem, you guys have written, i can see a clear view into the story you will be present. Kudos to both,wonderful start.

PS| you rhymed the poemApprove


heheh thanks!

idk why but whenever i start writing a poem it always ends up with rhymes lolLOL

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Loved the poem. Am waiting to read more

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Loved the poem... would like to read what you two came up with...

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