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Next day morning she sat beside suchitra and was working on her laptop
rv calls her
n-haan kahiye
r-yeh kuch doubt hain
she was telling him
r-how is chiru
this was called height of kaminapan ek toh jab woh yehaan tha use kabhi chain se rehne nahin diya aur naahin uski party main gaya aur aaj what a question but bechari samaj nahin paayi
n-mujhe nahin pata woh actually main kisiko contact main nahin rakti mujhe kuch kaam tha isiliye chiru ko call kiya usne kahan use job ki zaroorat hain i helped him he wanted to leave i didnt say anything i dont have right on anyones decision and i dont take people to heart as long as there are infront of me i talk when they leave there wish
rv was somewhere happy with nupurs answer
r-sorry i was unable to come actually he was not so close i was not feeling right to come anyways when you leave i will take party from you for sure
n-i am not that lucky
this mayu and gang are filled with kaminas ek toh uske dost ko usse dur kiya upar se jale pe namak chida rahe hain aur toh aur they wont allow her to go so easily but still he is saying party from her when she leaves
nupur didnt even have idea what was going behind her she only knows mayu following her wherever she goes and on rv she has just a small doub
she was back to her work mayu went to other division to place from where nupsi was infront of him from glass
mayu aur uske faltu ideas par nupsi uske shaitaaniyo ko bade ache se pehchaan leti hain actually jitna mayu uspar nazar rakhta hain utna hi nupsi bhi
n-kitna sincere bacha hain doubts ke naam pe aaraam se yehaan bait ke mujhe line maar raha hain aur main kuch bhi nahin kar pa rahi upar se rv ka bhi koi barosa nahin jab dekho stupid questions poochke mera sar kaata hain kya karun indono se bachne ka koi option toh chahiye soch nupsi warna yeh dono tujhe paagal bana denge
next day when she came to office she was shifting her place back to mayu instead of sitting beside rv
n-ab dekhti hun rv mera enquiry kaise karega rv ke baaju uski stupid questions se better mayu ke baaju uski staring atleast bechare ko stupid plans toh nahin banane padenge mujhe dekhne ki
r-mam aap place shift kar rahi hain
n-haan kyun koi problem hain
r-mera matlab hain yehaan rahenge toh i will be here to talk wahaan akele pad jayenge
n-to herself isi ka toh darr hain
n-nahin yeh place sumitra mam ka hain unhein problem hogi so i have my own place i will go there
r-mam woh yehaan nahin baitegi she is sitting in nupsi mams plac
n-but still i wanna leave
seeing nupsi coming back to her place mayu was smiling to himself
m-atlast my jaanu back in her place aur hum dono ke beech koi nahin how lucky i am
at tea
d-atlast teri heroine waapas aagayi kya baat hain may be she is atracted to you
r-mam waisi type nahin hain she just shifted becoz sumitra mam ko problem ho rahi hain
a-i dont think waise why where you trying to stop her
r-bechari akeli pad jaayegi na isliye
d-tu bhi na mayu ke hote hue nupsi akeli kaise rahegi
r-yaar leave it na i know mayu tu use pasand karta hain but i dont think yeh sahi hain she is bit reserved use bura lagega
m-mujhe sirf itna pata hain she is my life and i will make her mine thats for sure tujhe meri help karna hain kar warna main akele hi use handle karloonga
r-tik hain karoonga but are you serious tu yeh sab timepass ke liye nahin kar raha hain na i feel she is sensitive she cant bear heartbreak
a-haan yaar its not fun someones life masti ki bhi had hoti hain mayu tu sach main use chahta hain tu uske baare main kuch nahin jaanta then how are you ready for lifelong commitment tujhe yeh bhi nahin pata ki kabhi woh tujhse pyar karegi bhi ya nahin to tu uske liye itna kyun disturb horaha hain she is least bothered even to look at you
m-mujhe nahin pata main use kyun chahta hun bas she makes me smile use todhi der nahin dekhun toh i feel like i am missing something uski ek hasi ke liye marta hun pata nahin main use itna pasand kyun karta hun but if i am given a chance i will stay looking at her forever
a-par mayu you know she is least bothered about anyone chiru ko hi dekhlo uske itne close thi aur ab kehti hain she doesnt care about him she is not taking any person seriously
m-acha hi hain she is not serious about him
a-mayu jo ladki apne dost ko seriously nahin lerahi tujhe kya lagta hain woh ladki ek ajnabee ko seriously legi never she wont
r-she can
a-wat do you mean
r-yaar its right she is not serious about chiru becoz she thinks about him as friend uske dil main apni family ka special place hain she never thinks of any person above them agar tujhe uska pyar jeetna hain toh uska dost nahin pyar ban tab hi she will be yours mayu maanta hun bahut mushkil hain tujhe unka pyar jeetna but if you win you are the luckiest becoz she is best girl anyone can get she is just sweetest she listens to anyone blindly she never thinks bad about anyone maine kaafi ladkiyon se dosti ki par inke jaisi ek nahin dekhi she is too smart you cant win her love easily take it as challenge im with you

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Nupsi didnt even have idea whole office was against her i mean some of managers knew that mayu is trying for her use har pal darr tha kahin managers ko pata chala toh kya hoga use nahin pata tha ki sirji managers ke laadle hain
shilpa-so kya chal raha hain
m-nupur ka dost chala gaya
sh-main tere baare main pooch rahi thi office ke baare ya nupsi ke baare main nahin waise tujhe kaise pata
m-rv ne kaha tha
sh-kyun gaya
m-use dusri company main offer aaya tha
sh-tab toh problem hoga na
m-kuch problem nahin hoga khud kuch nahin karta tha sab kuch nupsi akeli karti thi jab dekho nupsi ke saath gappe maarta thi nupsi ke hote hue project ka darr nahin hain
sh-haan shoba bhi keh rahi thi bade ache se sambhalti hain
m-haan maasi she is very hardworking aur zaraa bhi gamand nahin hain sabse easily gulmil jaati hain kisike baare main bura nahin sochti she is very intelligent aha mam ka bhi kaam khud sambhal rahi hain she is very much talented
she coughs mayu realises he is getting too much
sh-kya baat hain koi kisike tareefo ki phool barsa rahi hain
m-i am just saying she is smart
sh-ek toh main tere baare main pooch rahi tu office ke baare main bataya upar se nupur ko bada cheda raha hain
m-bas i was saying she is hardworking
sh-sirf wohi hardworking hain adhi dhruv rv unke baare main bhi bata sakta tha na nupsi ke baare main hi kyun
m-woh mere baaju baitti hain na uske baare main jyada pata
sh-tu hi toh keh raha tha woh ab tere baaju nahin baiti phir aaj
m-aaj subah hi waapas aayi
sh-sham tak kaafi kuch jaan liya waise tu toh keh raha tha rv ne bataya aur ab
m-maasi woh
sh-dekh agar tu use pasand karta hain toh sambhal ke kuch bhi aisa waisa hua toh baad main main kuch bhi nahin kar sakti
shoba calls shilpa
sh-suna hain nupsi ka dost chala gaya
shoba-haan woh banglore shift hua hain
sh-par maine suna use dusri company main offer aaya
shoba-kya nupsi ne toh kahaan he shifted to banglore
sh-jooth kahaan hoga
shoba-yeh ladki bhi na iska koi barosa nahin hain par tujhse jisne kahaan
sh-mayu ne
shoba-use kaise pata tujhe nahin lagta tera laadla us ladki main kuch jyada hi interest dikha raha hain
sh-haan jaanti hun yeh aaj kal ke ladke bhi na hamari bilkul bhi nahin sunte mere bache itne chote hain wohi mujhe tang karta hain aur mayu use kya control main rakhun waise nupsi achi ladki hain na i mean woh adityaji ki risthedar ki tarah toh nahin hain yeh aaj kal ki ladkiyan
shoba-woh bahut pyari bachi hain rv ke alawa kisise baat nahin karti bado se darti hain samajdaar nadaan aur shaitaan sab kuch hain par ise daantna padega chiru ke baare main jut kahaan
sh-ismain woh bhi kya karti shayad hi dost ki madad kar rahi hain
shoba-phir bhi main uspar barosa karti hun aur madam jut bolrahi thi mujhe laga sirf rv shaitaan hain yeh uski behan nikli isiliye donoki itni jamti hain
sh-haan rv ke wajah se hi mayu ko pata chala woh rv ke saamne sab bolti hain aur rv mayu aur mayu hamaare saamne
shoba-yeh bache bhi na kaam kam naatak jyada kar rahe hain woh bhi hamaare saamne phir bhi inko kuch nahin keh sakte mujhe laga meri beti hi shaitaan hain par ab lagta hain yeh aaj kalke bache hi shaitaan hain inhein sambalna impossible hain
daily nupsi used to find mayus card missing and felt different dont know wat it was
N-ise pata nahin kaise handle karoon
she enters office didnt find him when she went to turn on fan she found him chatting with shukla manager
she smiles to herself
n-made for each other kya combination hain dostana part2
nupsi mayu ka kuch bigaad nahin paa rahi isiliye use aisa sochna pad raha hain
mayu finds her from the corner of eye
m-madam aagayi aur main yehaan kya kismat hain pehle woh chiru beech main aaya ab yeh subah subah mera bheja fry kar raha hain pata nahin har koi hamaare lovestory ke beech kyun aarahe hain
she continuosly noticed mayu chatting with shukla
shukla was treating mayu like close friend
n-kya dost mila hain uncle ko mujhe har pal dostana movie hi yaad aaraha hain nupsi tu bewajah tension lerahi hain priyanka bale hi abhishek aur john ke beech kaise aayegi maa da laadla bigad gaya hahaha
mayu was unable to understand why was nupsi smiling so much agar pata chala toh kue main dub main suicide karega nupsi kam shaitaan nahin hain till know she was treating mayu as idiot but now he became her entertainment and to mayus badluck shukla was getting more close to mayu
days were passing one day a girl comes there she chats with rv adhi all boys atlast comes to mayu nupsi was fuming with anger
n-kamina ladki milna paap hain
actually mayu did nothing girl came to mayu he just smiled and told hi but nupsi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha uski kismat achi thi todhi der main lunch thi she went from there but unknowingly she was waiting for mayu to comeup she was getting possesive for mayu first time in nupsis life she felt like this for someone pyar kab kaise hota hain samajna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hain
nupsi was thinking like its not jealousy for girl but hatred for mayu heart knows truth mind sees what it wants

Edited by --unknown-- - 27 January 2013 at 8:56am

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Posted: 25 January 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Precap
nupur targetting mayu

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Waw Nice story !!!!!

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
very nice update.

loved mayur ... bt lets hope for the best...waiting for next udpate

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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beautiful part
lekin tum mayur ki ek dusre ki saath koi scene nehi daalti hu
kyun????????/:( :( :(

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nice updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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nice update 

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