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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
lovely part

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Very nice update. lovely. but i m missing sanskari bahu ki updateThumbs Up

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lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Great update..

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Here is next part only for mayur the reason behind updating only this I will tell later

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Rv was bit shocked to see hard nupur as he was thinking she was too soft
at tea
a-kahaan koya hua hain
r-woh kuch nahin
a-overaction karna band kar aur bol kya hua kisine kuch kaha kya
r-haan nupur mam ne
a-kyu tune kuch kiya kya
r-maine nahin indono kamino ne
both split coffee
d-humne kya kiya
r-subah subah mam par comment kyun kiya
m-nahin toh tareef karun jab dekho ladko ke baare main discuss karna ya phir ladko se baat karna yehi kaam hain use sharam nahin hain kisi ka bhi darr nahin hain
r-dheere agar madam ne sun liya na to tera gala daba degi already woh tujhe tappad maaarne ki plan bana rahi hain maine hi unhe shant kiya tu unhein jitna boli samajta hain mam utni boli bilkul bhi nahin hain pitega
d-ek minute usne mayu ko tappad maarne ki warning di
r-haan
d-yeh ladki too much hain yaar
a-koi batayega yeh mayu ko tappad kyun marna chahti hain
r-kyunki mayu ne uske baare main badtameezi se baat ki subah subah madam apne place main aate hi isne kahaa tujhe kisi ne miss nahin kiya par mujhe kisine miss kiya mujhe kuch samj nahin aaya par madam ne mujhe samjaya ki yeh log unke baare main hi discuss kar rahe hain unhein mayu ko tappad maarne ka mann kar raha hain aur warning bhi di ki agar yeh repeat hua toh unse bura koi nahin hoga
mayu was smiling naughtily
m-kamini mujhe warning deti hain ab dekho main use dikhaonga mayu kis bale ko kehte hain
nupur at dinner
nm-yeh sada hua chehra lekar kyun baiti hain
n-mom mujh par us ladke ne comment kiya
nm-yeh usne kisne
n-naam nahin pata
nm-kya kaha
n-yehi ki main rv ke baare main discuss kar rahi thi
nm-sahi hi toh kaha tujhe uske baare main baat karne ki kya zaroorat hain
n-aapko hamesha main hi galat lagti hun kal mera pati mujh par gussa kare na tab bhi usi ki side lengi
nm-dena toh padega usne pata nahin pichle janam main kitne paap kiye honge jo tujhse shaadi karega
n-aapse baat karna bekaar hain
that day gunji was chatting with her mom
g-aapki laadli beti kya kar rahi hain
nm-pata nahin andar hain
nm gives phone to nupsi
g-kya kar rahi hain
n-mujhe na us idiot pe bada gussa aaraha hain
g-kis idiot pe
she narrates again
n-mujhe na use tappad maarne ka mann kar raha hain
g-aagayi jhansi ki rani tu ladko se dur reh samji jyada naatak kiya na tappad main tujhe maroongi sab tere jeeju ke jitne ache nahin hote
n-aapko hamesha yehi sujta hain kya main itni badi bevakuf nahin hun jo aapko dekhne ke baad bhi galti karun mujhe aise cheezo se allergy hogayi hain
g-good aise hi rehna warna meri tarah royegi
next day nupsi was still in anger whenever she sees mayu she was scolding him internally
she suddenly came to know his name was mayank
mayu was most handsome in office to drool over par nupsi ko woh pasand nahin pasand uske hisaab se woh sabse worst ladka hain becoz of her anger on him
one day she was chatting with aha she notices mayu was interfering in their conversation
she was bit confused she even notices mayu staring at her and smiling she just moves her seat back so that mayu cant see her
n-to herself ise main tappad maarna chahti hun aur yeh mujhe hi line maar raha hain nupsi pehle confirmation karle uske baad gussa kar
next day shoba assigns her some work with rv
nupsi was sitting in her place and testing that while rv was in his own place
s-maine tum dono ko testing karne ko kaha tha tum is corner main woh us corner main bait ke kya testing kar rahe ho jaake uske baaju bait
she shifts her place beside rv on shobhas order and something which shocks nupsi was whole day mayu was sitting in her opposite row
n-nupsi yeh yehaan kya kar raha hain tera shaq sahi hain yeh waaqe hi main tujh par line maar raha hain
she goes to lunch she finds him exact opposite to her
n-oh God yehaan bhi saamne idiot kahika
after lunch he finds mayu chatting with adhi who sat other side RV
a-tu achanak yehaan
m-meri madam se milne aaya tha pata nahin place kyun change ki
a-shoba mam ne karwaaya
m-wohi bait sakti thi na yehaan kyu
a-mayu tu bhi na kya uske peeche pada hain tujhe nahin pata usdin itni baat ka itna hungama kiya chod na use tujhe usse better ladkiyan milenge
m-yaar main use pasand karta hun please use kuch mat kehna mujhe acha nahin lagega i just love her
a-are you serious
m-haan uski hasi uski stupid baatein sune bina mera kahin mann nahin lagta i am just addicted to her
a-par kyun
m-reason nahin pata agar reason se karte hain toh use pyar nahin kehte
a-oh really kaafi samajdaar hogaya hain
rv comes there
r-kya baatein horahi hain
m-mere saath chal batata hun
r-par kya baat hain
m-chup chap chal
nupsi sees rv going with mayu
nupsi daal main bahut kuch kaala lag raha hain tujhe samajdaari se kaam karna hoga

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:03am | IP Logged
All this happened in past currently mayus stage
he was sitting silently looking at right lost in his world shoba sees that and informs shilpa
she goes to mayu
shilpa-mayu kahaan koya hua hain
m-kuch nahin maasi main abhi aaya
he goes to washroom he was having tears shilpa looks at adhi dhruv and rv to check him
a-mayu kya hua tu teek hain tere aankon main aasoon kis baat ki
m-kya main itna bura hun jo usne mujhse itna nafrat karti hain maine use apni zindagi samja use jaan se jyada pyar kiya aur use mere shakal dekhne se bhi nafrat hain mujhe khud se nafrat hogayi hain
d-stop it mayu use mental hospital ki treatment ki zaroorat hain tune pyar normal ladki se nahin abnormal ladki se kiya isiliye woh teri sache pyar ko samaj nahin paayi she is a big fool
r-par yaar woh buri nahin hain
a-rv mere saath chal
he takes rv from there and dhruv was trying to convince mayu mayu was completely broken for what happened in the past few days he just hug dhruv with tears freind in need is friend in deed
his friends know how sweet he is they just hate nupsi for what she has done to mayu they feel that nupsi is responsible for every tear mayu is having
adhi was talking to rv
a-tu waada kar aaj ke baad nupur ke baare main mayu ke saamne baat nahin karega
r-lekin kyun yaar
a-tujhe dikhayi nahin deraha teri pyari madam ne mayu ka kya haal kiya hain use kya kuch nahin kahaan us gamandi ladki ne pata nahin khudko kya samajti hain uske wajah se mayu ke life main aasun se jyada kuch nahin hain
r-yaar use yeh sab pasand nahin hain
a-pasand nahin tha toh kaamosh bait sakti thi na mayu ko itne taane maarne ki kya zaroorat thi uske achai ka galat faida uta rahi hain agar dubaara usne mayu ke khilaaf ek lafz bhi kahaan toh humse bura koi nahin hoga yeh tu apne madam ko samjade
at lunch shilpa was busy thinking about mayu
shoba-kya baat hain khana nahin kaa rahi
shilpa-mujhse mayu ki haal dekhi nahin jaarahi pata nahin us ladkine aisa kya kiya jo mayu uske liye paagal hogaya hain
suchitra-mayu ki taraf dekhkar haste hue dekha hain use mayu ko tang karna acha lagta hain
shoba-mujhe woh ladki kabhi sahi nahin lagi hum sabne use itna pyar diya beti ki tarah rakha pehle project barbaad ki ab mayu ki zindagi
deepika-sahi kaha ji woh ladki thi hi paagal
mayu was lost in his thoughts
shilp goes to him
shilpa-mayu yeh kya haal banaya hain jab se woh ladki gayi hain kisise teekse baat nahin karta naahin hasta hain hamesha koya rehta hain
m-maasi mujhe aapki madat chahiye karogi kya
sh-teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sajti hun bol kya karna hoga jisse mere bete ki koyi hui hasi waapas aayegi
m-use yehaan aane mat do
shilpa-nahin aayegi main use kabhi yehaan aane nahin dungi usne mere bete ka mazaak banaya
m-maasi main aapko use rokhne ke liye isliye keh raha hun kyunki use yehaan aane se mere shakal dekhne se nafrat hain please use rokhdo main nahin chahta meri wajah se use takleef ho
shilpa-tujhe abhi bhi uski padi hain main use rokhungi par uske liye nahin mere bete ke liye
m-thanks maasi
shilpa-main tujhe khush dekhne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hun
she goes to aditya
shilpa-adityaji mujhe aapse nupur ke baare main baat karni hain
aditya-kaho shilpa kya baat hain pareshan lag rahi ho
shilpa-us ladki ko yehaan aane mat dena
a-lekin kyun tumhein nahin pata uske bina woh project rukh jaayega
shilpa-woh aayi toh mera mayu zinda nahin bachega
a-kya keh rahi ho mayu ka us ladki se kya talluq hain
she narrates whole story
a-yeh sab kab hua
shilpa-pata nahin chal raha par mujhe mayu ke liye bahut darr lag raha hain main aapke aage haat jodti hun use yehaan aane mat dijiye main uski jagah koi aur designer ko lekar aaongi par use aane mat do
a-tum chinta mat karo woh yehaan kabhi nahin aayegi yeh waada hain mera
shilpa-aapka bahut bahut danywaad
nupsi ne mayu ke saath kuch aisa kiya jise wahaan kisine sapne main bhi nahin socha sab usse naaraaz hain par kyun naaraaz hain
aajtak bahut saari kahaniyan dekhi hogi ya toh ladai nafrat ego kisina kisi wajah se couple alag hojaate hain par inki seperation ki wajah sabse alag thi nupsi ne kabhi mayu se pyar kiya yeh us office main kisiko nahin pata sab hairaan hain nupsi aur mayu ke baare main sunkar sabke hisaab se nupsi aur rv ke beech kuch tha yeh sab kya hain yeh aage samaj aayega

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