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Cheetah aur Cheeti!!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice work...ty fo d pm and continue...
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Awesome yaar..continue nxt part tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
continue its awesome i luv it srsly want  c deir proper chemistry
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting. plz pm me whenever u update.
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Rathi went up to them and waved his hand infront of their faces.

Rathi: kya ek dusre ki ankhon mein Sab kuch dhoondlo ge kya? Ke bhootni ko bhi dhoondna hai? Haan? ðŸ˜†
Yuvi: umm...to chal na fazool backwas kyun kar raha hai!!! ðŸ˜³
Rathi: chale
Yuvi: to jaa na
Rathi: to jaa raha hoon

And rathi walks away.

Yuvi looks at Suvi and they get awkward: tu...uski baat mat sunna ainvayi...b...backwas karta hai!
Suvi nods her head.
Yuvi softly: chale
Suvi: hmmm...

The chair starts to fly in the corner.
Yuvi looks back surprised as it was what he did to Suvi and then looked at her angrily.

Yuvi: tu hoshyar zaroor hai Lekin itni bhi nahi ke cheeteh ke dimaag ko cross kar jaye.
Suvi: kya?!
Yuvi: tu yeh Sab is liye kar rahi hai na kyun ke meine tujhe pankaj se darraya tha
Suvi: mein itni der baad kyun badal Lena chaahoon gi.
Yuvi: mein to tujhe kabhi samajh hi nahi paoon ga!!


And walks away leaving a dissappointed yet shocked suvreen behind.

He leaves her all alone.



How it is?!
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg..update soonn plzzz...will wait for ur pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooo nice yaar...Amazing work, mixmatch of love, horror..i like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg !!! whatw will happen now !! cant wait !! ;) plz continue and update it !! fast !! :D 
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Part 4:

Suvreen was standing there confused as hell. Yuvraj walks the other way murmuring to himself.

Yuvi: iss ke paas dil hi nahi hai. Mein isse bachaane ki koshish mein tha phir bhi uska dil nahi pigla. Mein kabhi bhi is ki madad nahi karoon ga, ho ja lene do iski chopsi...arghhh...iske saath reh reh kar iski language bhi adapt Karli Lekin koi nahi ab meine isse baat hi nahi karni!!! Hmm!

On the other hand...

Suvi: kya ganu Ji...mujhe to lagta hai ke yeh ulta paida hua hai! Jab dekho mujhpe apna saara gussa nikal deta hai...jab bhi Accha behave Karo to bhi bura aur bura Karo to...to bhi bura! Najaane iske sirr mein budhi kab aye gi! Ganu Ji mein iss kk ke liye apni next birthday ki wish waste karti hoon...plzzz iss ke sirr mein budhi daalo aur...haan plzz woh usse use bhi kare!!

Yuvraj met up with Annie naro rathi and mannu. They all started talking about not finding the bhootni.

Voice: ahhh!!!!

Everyone turns around.
All five in split screen, yuvi in middle: suvreen!!!!!


How's it?!
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg..why du always leave at cliffhangers..damn it...can u update one more part now