OS : Night whispers - Page 9

Posted: 11 years ago
I liked that he came to visit her at night.

I liked that both were uncomfortable being apart from each other.

I liked that both were comfortable sharing the bed.

I liked that Khushi was caught.

I liked how you ended your story. Leaves so much to the imagination :)
Posted: 11 years ago
dis was amzin..:D
incdnts 4m d past..:D
Posted: 11 years ago
Reread your os again :D

You write so amazingly La

Go write
Posted: 11 years ago
brought half the memories of old episode. .

thanks for sharing. . enjoyed reading all bits of it. .

:)
Posted: 11 years ago
I just relived the good wale Gupta House moments <3

La you write so so so well and I wonder why dont you write often?

I loved his possessiveness, so much in love attitude sprinkled with his ASR-ishness making him all the more appealing <3

And Khushi the ever hesitant yet giving in to whatever her Lard Governor demands from her, looking annoyed outwardly but feeling contend from within <3


Well well her lie was caught in the show :-D


Well done *claps*
Posted: 11 years ago
haha khushi is caught!!!!
nice one
Posted: 11 years ago
heheheh.. nice.. would have been really good had this actually happened in the series!
Posted: 11 years ago
wow...that was too good...thumbs up to u!!!!!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Ya. . I too wished somethng like dis happened. . .

Nice os.

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