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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 94)

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 1:16am | IP Logged
super awsm update

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 1:29am | IP Logged

Originally posted by dazzlingmanavi

super awsm update


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RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged

hi people..Smile

dn't be shocked ..Shocked

as i said wen i'l get my result i'l update so here i'm..Tongue

thnx fr praying..Wink

still my result wasn't dat good got 9 in all exept sst..Cry

got 8 in sst... so total cgpa 8.8..just frm 0.2 lost my chance to meet arshaCry

better luck in 11th

felt so bad being topper of sst always scoring full marks in every test being half yearly or


n board ke tym b'coz of it i lost my 9 cgpaCry

n pm dkh ke sabko pta chal gya hoga mei stml hu..LOL

pm id ka pass bhool gyi so for the tym sending pm frm my id...

n gonna update alternatively or regular in between

here's a chotu update..enjoyBig smile

nxt day the four got ready as planned they were going through car...swayam was driving, rey was

sitting adjacent to him n krisha were seating behind them..both the 

couple never left the chance to c their respective partners faces frm the front miror...half way

swyam drived as he was tired they stopped near a dhabba have there 

food n swayam sat back as he want to relax..sharon was going to sit in front wen kriya quickly

came n grabbed the seat..seeing this rey smiled n shake his head...
(chatur kriya bichari sharon ko bhi nhi baithne diya LOL)'

k:shar tu peeche baith aaram se...

sharon just passed a nervous smile n sat behind with swayam..journey was going silent as

swaron were just glancing in between each other n kriyaansh were talking in 

isharas...kriya switched on the fm n started mimicing the songs..while rey was not at all

interested in drive he just want to be with his baatcutter..he made a sad 

face luking ahead on the road wen an idea came in his mind ..he stopped the car with a sudden

jolt such that they all were pushed ali'l above frm there respective seats...



he made him straight n lay back at his seat while swaron too tried to see him frm behind n there

head banged into each other

swaron(together): oouch, (silence) sorry

n they share an eyelock n then they look at rey who was screaming n screaming..

k: rey kya hua?

she said worriedly ..while rey was just screaming..

r:meri back mei bahut pain ho rha hai aah...

k:yha koi doctor bhi nhi hai aab koi (cut by)

sw;dn't worry kriya..rey tu peeche baith mei aage aata hu..

he somehow managed to make rey sat behind,while rey hold kriya's hand n winked at her whch

didn't go unnoticed by swayam..he just chuckled at him..

sw:aah vo mei keh rha ha kriya tum mere sath age baitho..


r: nhi..aah...mere sath bhi kisi ko rhne de bahut dard ho rha hai yaar..

k:haan plz

she said worriedly as she still didn't understood rey's plan...

sw: sharon baith jati hai tere sath..

k: nhi

swaron n rey luked at further ans..

k: vo mera matlab tha ki vo mei haan mei bhi tired hu toh thoda rest kar lungi n rey ka dhayan bhi..

r: haan plz..

sh: itz ok..kriya tu peeche baith aaram se..

saying this sharon sat in swayam's plan no more gonna work he too sat in the drivers

seat while kriyaansh behind..rey's head was on kriya's shoulder n she

was soothing his hair while he just closed his eyes n feel her touch..while swayam just luked at

the both n shook his head n then his eyes fell on sharon who was 

sleeping peacefully..he smiled seeing her but soon blinked his eyes n concentrate on the road..



late nite around 1 a.m they reach their venue..swayam parked the car n wake up everybody...they

were greeted by swayam's masi n family..n were shown there rooms... 

swayam went along with his cosin on alot of insistance..sharon went to her n kriya's room with a

girl while swayam's masi too show rey his n swyam's room also kriya 

went with rey giving him support soon his masi left...leaving kriyaansh alone...kriya managed to

make rey comfortable on the bed while doing so they shared an eye lock

..kriya was the frst to cum back frm the trance..she wished him gud nite n was moving

outside..wen rey called her frm behind..getting up (kitna nataK KRTA HAI LOL)

r:kriya..aah muma..

she ran towards him 

k:rey dhyaan se...

r: jab tak swayam nhi aata aah plz yha ruk jao...aah plz..

k: but..

she luked at rey n think for a while..

k: ok..

rey was very happy to hear dat..

kriya sat on the bed beside him n he immediately put his head in her lap n hold her hands..n

started pllaying with her fingers..she smiled seeing him..soon both 

drifted into the same position...aftr sumtym swayam came n seeing them he just took

there picture n due to the flash kriya wake up while rey hide his face 

in her lap..kriya luked here n here nrvously..

k: vo..

sw: shh.. so jao.. i'll mange

k: nhi..

she hold rey's head frm her lap n kept a pillow below n just brushed her hand once on his face n

hair n slowly get up n moved towards the swyam who was standing near  the door,

k: good nite

sw: good nite...

n she moved frm there while SWAYAM  luked at rey n said to himself

sw: nautanki sala...



outside kriya was heading towrds her room as she forget what the masi had told her soon she

was pulled a room whch look like a store..the person had covered 

her mouth with his hand...kriya widened her eyes seeing the person..

person: welcum miss. ghai..

p.s: no more tiya sorryBig smile

n for pm's add me

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:32am

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
awesomeee updatesClap
loovveddd itttBig smile
who s dat personShocked
waiting for d nxt partEmbarrassed
and congos for d resultParty

Edited by aishu3003 - 31 May 2013 at 3:12am

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chand91 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
1st f all congo 4 reslt
it ws a lvly updat
sry lt ho gai

Edited by chand91 - 03 June 2013 at 1:43am

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moon_cupcake IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged


tune mujhe first place nahi diCry

but the update was mind blowing...

loved it

swayam ne sahi kaha rey nautanki hai...

aee tiya kyu no more?? un dono ne kya bigada tera jo unko nikaal diya?

and sorry for late unres

Edited by lovely7010 - 02 June 2013 at 12:16pm

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Jade_Precious Senior Member

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Rey d nutanki kahi ka :->

bt ab yeh kaun aa gya kria ko tang krne

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