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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 89)

RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged

here's the update..

sorry there isn't a kriyansh moment..

nxt update mei pakka dalungi 

n ye update padne ke baad i'll will be abused to hell Confused

sorry phle seBig smile

person: welcum back miss ghai...

he smirked n left kissing kriya on her cheek...leaving a shocked n dumbfolded kriya behind..she

stood there for a while touching her cheek n taking the image of the 

incident happened..n then her mobile rang it was sharon's msg saying to cum to the room

soon...she buzzed around for half an hr not finding her room..may be due to 

nervousness ..she thought getting irritated..after searching for another 10 min. she finally foud the

room n quickly laid down n switched of the lights before sharon

can ask anything..but sleep aws far away from her eyes..whole nite she kept thinking and around

7 due to tiredness of the journey n continuous thinking she slept...

aftr another half n hr. sharon got up n was abot to wake kriya up wen she saw her sleeping

peacefully cuddling into her so she went to freshen up without disturbing 

her.and when she came out fully dressed to wake her..she saw rey already sitting on the bed

smiling at kriya who was still sleeping..she mantained a stern face n cont.


r(almost whispering): shh...dheere jag gyi na toh hum zinda nhi bachenge...

sharon chuckled recieving a glare frm rey meanwhile swayam entered n was about to say loud

wen both sharey 'shushed' him n he tell them that he is going out for sum 

work wen rey ask him silently to take sharon too..they both tried to make sharon ready to go n aftr

alot of insistence she agreed n they both left..while rey adjusted

himself on the sofa whch was close + adjacent to the bed such dat he was holding her hand n

fell asleep..aftr sumtym he realised grip on his hand tightened n sum 

murmurings..he opened his eyes n swa kriya murmuring in sleep n sweating even wen ac was

at full..he tried to calm her but nothing work...he took the glass frm the

nearby n made her drink it but as she was continuously moving her hands the glass fell upsided

down making her wet n finaly she opened her eyes..she luked at the glass

n then at rey n hugged him tightly...

k:plz muje mat chodna plz...maine kuch nhi kiya ..voh usne..

r: shh..kuch nhi hua kriya tumne sirf ek bura sapna dkha hoga chup...

they remained in the same posiion for sumtym n aftr dat rey took the towel n wiped her face while

doing so they shared an eyelock..which was broken by the knock at

the door..kriya went inside to freshen while rey opened the door it was sharon who informed him

to cum down for break fast..he informed kriya as she was taking to much

tym n left..kriya came outside ready to leave wen she saw a note on the table...whch reads

"gud morning babes!! waiting for u come down soon - with loveur lover"

she thought it must be from rey n smiled n went down ...she sat with shar oposite to rey n greeted

everyone..n started eating her meal wen 2 persons joined them n swayam 

introduced the 3 with kriyaansh n sharon..krisha didn't bothered to luk up until they heard the names..

sw: ye hai mere 2 cousins shavy n swati n shavy ki hi shadi hai n swati ka no. bhi lagne vala hai
for whch he recieved a punch frm swati..while others laughed exept krisha

sw: oouch

(p.s shravan ko uske close ones shavy bulate hai toh krisha also knows n ya kriya saw shavy

late nite u knw that person n sharon ne just abhi so rey ko kya pata ki 

shavy hi shravan hai n waise bhi ussee koi shravan nhi bulata)

both luked at the persons standing in front of them..while rey juast greeted them..sharon luked at

kriya knowing y she was behaiving diff. last nite..

sw: kriya sharon tum dono inshe hii bi nhi kahogi kya..

kriya just said "hii" to him n resumed her eating while sharon was about to say sumthing wen

kriya stopped her by squeezing her hand...she too coldly greeted him..aftr

there breakfast they all were chit chatting exept kriya she just sat opposite to all alone...seeing the

seat beside kriya emppty shravan who was standing till now sat 

with her ..she tried to make sum distance bt the more she move the more he came close to her...

reyam were busy on fighting on a silly topic n swati n sharon were 

engrossed in there girly none noticed kriya n shravan...kriya was about to get up wen

shravan put his hand around her waist she tried to remove it bt he

tightened his grip..she was realy feared n finding it difficult as tears too velled up in her eyes..she

called rey n shravan immediately removed his hand n sit straight

k: rey

r: haan.. tum.. kya hua ro kyun rhi ho?

sharon came there n sat to the ther side of kriya n wiped her tears...

k; muje ghar jana hai

listening this reyam n shravan n swati burst out laughing making kriya burst out crying while they

just zipped there mouth on recieving some good scolding frm 

sharon..all said sory to kriya while saying it shravan luked at her with a dirty smirk whch didn't go

unnoticed by sharon she stood in front of him n said to everyone eyeing him,

sh; mei kriya ko room mei leke ja rhi hu n rey tum bhi chalo vo muje tujse kuch kam hai..

r; ok..i'll just cum..

sh: abhi..

r; arre pani peke aata hu

sh: ok

saying this krisha left whereas shravan luked at the two angrily..they both reached there room

making kriya sit on the bed sharon went to attend a call outside wen

shravan came n locked the door n sat infront of kriya..she was siting with her head down that she

didn't notice him n thout it was sharon..

k: sharon kya muje rey aur swayam ko sab bta dena chahiye..

sHravan: no baby..

kriya immediately luked at the person n she moved backward only to be pulled back by shravan

..such that he was holding her waist..he touched her cheeks while she tried to remove his dirty


k; ch..chodo plz..

sh: shh...chup.. n let me get to the point tum reyaansh ko kuch nhi bataugi vrna..

he said still rubbing his hands over her face n neck whch was making her nervous

k: vrna kya..

he lifted her top a little n made sum design on her waist..she was about to shout wen he kept his

hand on her mouth...

sh: shh..aisi koshish bilkul mat krna kyunki ye mera ghar hai n tumse zyada log mujpe trust karenge swayam bhi aur shayad tumhara rey bhi..aur agar nhi karega toh swaym hai na..

n he removed his hand leaving a shivering n crying kriya

sh: shh chup aise thodi na rote hain n haan..rey ko btane ki bilkul koshish mat krna vrna 

k: vr..vrn..vrna

sh;vrna jis din tumne usse btaya vo uska last day hoga..aur tumhara toh

he said eyeing her from top to bottom

k: tum aisa nhi

sh i'll

k: kyu? kya bhigada hai maine tumhara? kyu muje chod nhi dete? tumhari shadi hone vali kam

se kam apni wife ke barein mei socho

sh; uaske barei mei tumhe pareshan hone ki koi zarurat nhi tum bas meri chinta karo

knock knock

"kriya drwaza kholo aab toh rey bhi aa gya mere sath" sharon said

k: aayi sharon

she got up to open the door wen shravan hugged her frm behind she tried to get off his grip but

failed..he kissed her shoulder while she closed her eyes n cried  on having a dirty mark on the


on the other hand observing that the lock was open rey pushed the door open n both sharey 

luked at kriya shocked

"kriya" both sharey said in unison

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:26am

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RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Nxt update will be at page 115 n resers: chand di,mannu di n tamana unres krdo plz n dn't u dare agar kisi ne bhool ke bi sorry likha

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RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Reserved for all my di's n frndsBig smile
chand91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:52am | IP Logged
itna shokng updat
good one

Edited by chand91 - 03 June 2013 at 1:44am

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anjali22 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
awesome one
loved it

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bluelashes IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
still in shock
baad mey comment

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sweetydiyafrien IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked comment it back tomorrow...

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moon_cupcake IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged


uaaan meri first place fir gayab...not fair

haila yeh kaisa update tha?

itna shocking

iss saale shravan ko toh meinAngryCensored

i hope rey knows the truth soon..

update sooon aur next time i again want to be first..

Edited by lovely7010 - 02 June 2013 at 12:22pm

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