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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 73)

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepshakriya

Just read all d parts in a go..
It's amazing..
Loved dis ss..
Do pm me..
thnx..will do it

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kesha1234

Heck awesome update!
Update soon Big smile
thnx..will try..

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Posted: 04 March 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
lovd each and every part...
awesum..
and special nick names.. hehe.. :)
lvd tiya... ;)

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KUSHA14

lovd each and every part...
awesum..
and special nick names.. hehe.. :)
lvd tiya... ;)
thnx

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
finally mere exams khatam hue so here's the update...
itni achi nhi hai sorry...

(THEY WENT TO GET SUMTHING TO EAT they were walking in a (THEY WENT TO GET SUMTHING TO EAT they were walking in a lane...as it was early morning there was noe...as it was early morning there was no one...THERE WAS A pINDROP SILENCE B/W THEM WHCH WAS BROKEN BY
KRIYA)
k: vo...aah vo muje..
r: i'm
sorry...
k: kya?
r(luking down): vo kal maine tumhe ...vo uske liye...i know tumhe occquard laga hoga...
k: haan..laga toh...par koi kisiko aise propose krta hai?
r(facing her); wht? matlab tum gussa nhi (cut by)
k: hu bahut gussa hu...apne muje the great kriya ko propose kiya vo bhi aise...
r: kya? tum iss baat se gussa ho ki maine ainvyi keh diya...aur maine socha ki tum(cut by)
k: apne propose kiya isliye gussa hu...
r: haan par...
k: par var kuch nhi...ye sab toh hota rehta hai...ladke toh har ladki ko propose karte hai jo unhe achi lage(n she turned around pulling her dress down...again n

again continuously)
r: oh toh tumne is baat ko bilkul serious nhi liya...n ye baar baar dress ko keechna bandh karo phat
jayegi itni bhi choti nhi hai...
k: huh...wht the hell meri marzi he hell meri marzi
n haan mei in baton ko serious nhi leti...
r(turning her towards him): oh really...
k(wid atitude): haan...
r: acha toh tum muje bilkul pasand nhi krti...
k: bilkul bhi nhi ...0.1 percent bhi nhi...
r: toh meri di hui dress kyu pehni...
k: aah..vo haa vo vo...
r(holding her more tightly): aah vo kya haan? ko
i bahana yaadi bahana yaad nhi aa rha...mei kuch madad karu...let me tell u b'coz tumhare pass koi dress nhi thi ya tumhari dress
last moment pe fatt gyi, ya uspe coffe gir gyi..(kriya was standing there wid he
r mouth open)
k: wht
the hell?
r: ya tumhe ye dr
ess achi lagi...ya fir tum mujhe ye dress pehan ke impress karna chahti thi...(n they shared an eye lock)
k(trying to free herself): nhi aisa kuch nhi hai...mei aur apko impress ...no way...aap mei aisa hai kya...
r(freeing her): vo toh tumhe pata hoga...
k: muje nhi pata...meine toh ye dress...vo ...vo(under her breath)jldi soch kriya aab kya bolegi vrna ye tuje chodega nhi...
r: tumne kuch kaha?
k: nhi vo..haan vo maine ye dress isliye pehni kyunki koi bhi achi ladki apni vajah se udas nhi karegi...haan bas isliye...
r(thinking ): oh toh tum ek achi ladki ho...(sm
iling inocently)
k(wid atitud
e): haan...koi doubt hai kya?
r: nhi(n laughed)
k: has ky
u rhe ho(geting iritated)
r(still laughing): kyunki tum ek bahut achi ladki ho
...
k: haan mei hu...
r: toh fir...
k; toh fir kyas?
r; prove karo?
k: wht?
r: ek baar samaj mei nhi aata kya? kbhi wht? kbhi kyu? maine kaha prove karo ki tum ek achi ladki ho...
k(confused): kaise?
r: hmm...nhi rehne do tum nhi karogi...
K: krna kya hoga?
r: naa tum nhi kar
ogi...
K(geting iritated): mei karungi...pakka...
r(coming closer to her): theek hai toh tum kisi ko udas nhi dekh sakti toh usse ek chance do...tumhare sath rehne ka(he whispersed in her ears)
k(geting breathless coz of the closeness): vo..haan...vo..
r: toh tum karogi?
k: haan
r(geting exited n speakloudly in her ear); ok so u accept my proposal...finaly...
k: haan... nhi...nhi...(cuming back to her senses)
r: haan haan...tumne kaha...
k: no ways...
r: yes ways...tumne promise kaha tha...don't break it now...
k: nhi..
r: yes...tum apna promise nhi todh sakti...n i know tum nhi todhogi...
k: ye maine kya keh diya...rey plz mei yeh nhi keh sakti...apne sahi kaha tha maine sirf apne khush dekhne ke liye ye dress pehni thi...plz mei ye nhi kar sakti...
mei kabhi kisi relationship ko pura nhi kar payi hu...n sab kya sochenge mere barei mei...
r:shh...chup...kitna bolti ho...chup...kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalega...ye sirf hum dono ke beech secret rehega...mei kisi ko nhi bataunga aur na hi tum n i know
tum is relation ko pura karogi...(n again they shared an intense eyelock)
k:hmm..i can't pro(cut by)
r: i said na i know..
k(trying to change the topic): vo haan vo hum kuch khane ke liye lene aaye the...
r: don't try to change the topic...vaise u look more beautiful today...(she smiled lowering her lashes..n rey got lost in her)
k: rey...rey...oh hello...(rey cuming back to his sense)
k:aab chale...muje bhi bhook lag rhi hai...
r: jaisa tum chaho
k: aargh...(n they moved n take sumthing to eat for the four n
rey droped kriya n ina n then went back home...)

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:20am

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
yeh upar wala res update k lye hai...??

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KUSHA14

yeh upar wala res update k lye hai...??
haan..kal milega

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
okeh..
riyu di ap bi uthi ho inna raat tak..??
means OL ho..??

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