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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 7)

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
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thnk u so much will update asap 

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 28 May 2013 at 10:41am

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 28 May 2013 at 10:42am

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Done,just posting

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 28 May 2013 at 11:37pm

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In the college:

krisha luking around the college..

Kriya: wow,kitna acha college hai.. Isn't it sharon..(kriya luk at sharon n put her hand on her head)

kriya: hey universe ji! Iska kuch nahi ho sakta.. (sharon as usual busy in makeup)

sharon: did u just say sumthing?

Kriya: haan sharon matein..aap bahut khoobsurat hai.. Aab aap apna makeup quran bandh karengi..

Sharon: just one min..  (kriya takes sharon's makeup kit n put in her bag) 

kriya: aab yeh tumhe college khatam hone ke baad milega..

Sharon: kriyu..

Kriya: Sharon don't act like a small child n let go to deposit our fee..(They move towards the fee counter)

In the co-oridoor, Reyam talking to each other.

. Swayam: rey aur bata uss chuhiya ne aaj kya panga kiya tere saath..

Rey: wht chu chuhiya??

Swayam: arre u'r sis riya.

. Rey: oh,riya..puch matt aaj usne mere upar buckett full of water phenk dii.

. Swayam: oh!toh toh tujhe oxygen lene mein problem nahi hui..u know wht? Air mei oxygen ka content zyada hota hai as compared to water n water mei dissolved oxygen hota hai(n swayam open a book n starts explaining)

Rey: oh!no.. Phir se khul gayi swayam encyclopedia..

Rey shout: swayam..

Swayam: yes sir..

Rey: attention,aage badh..(swayam starts moving)

Rey: oh teri!piche mudh..vapas aa..aab sath mei aage badh..

Swayam: left, right, left,right..(rey chuckled n dey both to move to deposit the fee..

Krisha were standing in a line whereas reyam just reach n saw a big line dere..

Rey: itni lambi line.

.. Swayam: toh kya hum toh direct aage ja sakte hai..

Rey: no swayam,ruk..ruk naa..(swayam moving n rey following him to stop) unfortunately,swayam hit a girl by mistake n move forward n d girl was none other than kriya..

Kriya saw rey,n she shout''oyee..linecutter''

Reyam(together): wht?

Kriya:aage kaha ja rahe ho,line mei lago..

Sharon: kriya leave it..

Kriya: aise kaise leave it.. Yeh line todh ke aage nahi ja sakte..college inka thodi na hai,yaha sab equal hai(n keep saying)

swayam(in a loud sound): chup(dere was a pindrop silence..n everyone luking at swayam)

kriya: start saying again..

Rey: urgh..oye..baatcutter...

Kriya: tumne mujhe baatcutter kaha..

Swayam: haan kaha usne toh..

Kriya(in anger): usse chod tujhe batati hu pehle..(swayam run frm dere n kriya following him all over d college)whereas sharey laughing over dem.. N both together''yeh bhi naa''

sharon: hii,i'm sharon..

Rey: hey sharon..i'm rey..nice to meet u..

Sharon: same here..(whereas kriya still running behind swayam.. Swayam reaches the fire exit n locked d door frm inside..)

swayam: aaj toh maine bahut bada risk le liya hai..kya karu..idea,rey ko call krta hu..(kriya frm outside,oyee bahar nikal..) swayam calling rey..(rey n sharon standing with each other)

rey: haan swayam bol..

Swayam: arre yeh ladki toh mujhe aaj markar hi dum legi,plz tu kuch kar..

Rey: mei kya karu..

Swayam: tere saath us ladki ki frnd hai..

Rey: yaa..

Swayam: good,usse phone de..

Rey: but..

Swayam: but vut ko maar goli..

Rey: ok..(n gives d phone to sharon)

sharon: hello.

. Swayam: hello..miss..miss..

Sharon:sharon..

Swayam: yaa, sharon vo aapki sanki frnd..

Sharon: wht??

Swayam: i mean voh aap bahut achi frnd,mujhe aaj chodhegi..nahi..plz,plz aap usse yaha aakar samjayie plz..usse apni tarah hawtt n beautiful banna sikhao,na ki ladna plz.. (sharon blushes n rey getting confused aisa kya kaha swayam ne)

sharon: ok,where r u mr.

Swayam: it'z swayam n i'm in fire exit..

Sharon: ok i'm coming.. (sharon narrates whole story to rey n dey both reach near fire exit)

precap: riya ne aab tak socha nahi..LOL

sorry guys i'm going to meet her will update nxt part in evening..

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 22 June 2013 at 1:10am

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Wow. . .
Awsome start. . . . . .
Sharn. . .baba re. . .
Loves shopng n ovr makeup. . . .
N,rey,he iz dam cool. . . .
Lovd the update. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. , . . .
N plz pm me wen u update nxt. . . .
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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
*Get wel soon riya*

awesomee part
bapre kria toh swayam ko bhikul nai chodegi

n sharon maate n swayam encycleopedia was amazinggg
seriously


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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 2:56am | IP Logged
it was so cute
loved it
specially kriyam

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