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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 62)

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hii everyone...

Haan i know itni der baad continue kar rhi hu..

mei pagal ho rhi kya likhu ya nhi  

Ok now my bak bak stops n here is the update..

Haan yaad nhi hoga kahan choda tha toh last part padh lo page 50 pe                             

krisha:tum..

Guy1: haan vo chu.. I mean riya ko tina se baat krni thi..  

Guy2(coughing n whispering): usse ya tuje..mr. Newly born luver..

Guy1: chup be swayam..ja sharon ke pass dimag mat kha..

Kriya: par vo hai kaha...

Sharon: aur rey ka toh theek hai ki vo riya ka bhai hai bt tum yha kya kar rhe ho mr. Einstien..

Swayam(to himself): mar gya..

Rey: vo sharon maine isse kha tha mere sath aane ko..aur mei riya ko leke aatavo car mei so gyi (guys maine apna naam  rey ki behan ka isliye rakha coz meri frnds ko lgta haimeri rey ki taraf kuch aur feeling hai..vo bi bahut zyada strong vali..isliye uske kehne pe ye likha) 

(rey went towards his car woke up riya n move inside aftr that..kriya woke tina n they went to tina's room..while swaron n kriyansh were siting in the hall..swayam sumhow manage n took sharon wid him..as he said he wana see the house..itz very beautiful..now kriyaansh were alone in the hall)

k: vo..vo hum tina n riya ke pass chalte hai..

R: kyu? Tumhe mere sath baithna acha nhi lagta..

K: nhi..nhi..aisa nhi..vo dono akeli hongi..

R: do log kbhi akele nhi hote..(n they share an intense eye lock...all the while swaron n tina n riya were hiding behind a pilar nearby n hearing there convo)

tina: IDEA..

Sw: kya(bt without even answring she went towards her room n then come back n throw sumthing on kriya..seeing a lizard kriya get scared n hug rey..)

tina: plan sucesful..

Sw: great job.. (n there kriyansh get aparted aftr a while n kriya said sory n was abt to move when rey hold her hand)  

k: mera hath..

R: ek min. (he gave a packet to kriya..which he had caried..along.)

k(confusd): ye?

R: khol ke dekho.. (she opened it n smiled..it was the dress whch rey selectd in the shop to give her as present..)

k: wow..

R(smiling): tumhare liye..meri help krne ke liye..thnx..

K: bt..(cut by)

R(pleading): plz na mat kehna plz..bahut mehngi hai (n they both laughd..)

k:thnx(n then swaron n riya n tina also joined them...they had coffee n aftr sumtym reyam n riya were leaving..wen rey excused himself n ask kriya to cum aside he wana talk abt sumthing..kriya becum nervous bt she agreed...n they went towards the gardn area)

k(nrvsly n making sum distance): re..rey ky..kya baa.. baat krni hai...

R: daro mat mei bas ye bolna chahta hu ki muje tumhari hlp chahiye..

K: kaisi help?

R(quickly): vo swayam ko sharon achi lagti hai isliye..

K(smiling): muje bi lagta hai sharon ko ya toh aap ache lagte ho ya swayam..

R: nhi mei nhi..

K: kyu aap nhi..

R: muje vo achi nhi lagti..

K: wht? Itni achi hai vo..

R: haan achi hai bt mei usse sirf frnd manta hu n vaise bimei(he stopd)

k: aap?

R: kuch nhi,

k: bolo na..(bt rey didn't say anything n she was asking continuously sudenly rey hold her by her waist..kriya was shockd)

R: mei tumse pyar krta hu..(sumwhere she was happy..sumwhere shockd)

k(trying to be normal): chod..chodo muje.(rey realisd wht he said n cursd himself..he left her n said sory n widout even saying anything they wen outside where everyone was waiting n reyam n riya lft towards there home..)

whole nite both rey n kriya were not able to sleep..so rey decided to tlk to kriya..he called her many tyms bt she didn't pickd later he msaged her  to meet him in morning at xxx park..at 7 am for making planto make swayam n sharon one n plz don't ignore..itz important..spcly wana tlk abt ourself. she read it bt didn't rply n kept thinking wether she should go or not..n finaly she decided she'l go for swaron n will take tina along too n she till now didn't forgt her past..she trust rey bt nt a boy..she msaged him back to cum wid riya..frst he was confusd bt then he get that she is still scared n he replied ok..

early morning:

(they four met..kriyansh were a li'l uncomfortable wid each othr..bt didn't say anything..kriya told tina n riya to play aside bt rey told her that they r the one till now who r keeping swaron together..n they knew abt them n r included in our plan..frstly kriya refusd bt alot of insistion frm tina n riya..she agreed..bt all the tym rey didn't utter a word..they all discusd the plan of how to make swaron realise there feeling..kriya tried to tlk to rey bt he never luk at her ,in her eyes bt give replies..) 

Kriya's pov:

rey ne meri taraf ek baar bi nhi dkha..vo mujse naraz hai shayad par fir usne muje yha kyu bulaya ..muje kisi tarah kal ke barei mei hamare barei mei baat krni padegi..bas ek baar sab sort out ho jaye fir bataungi ek toh ye uski di hui dress jo itni choti vo phni upar se sharon n tina ki batein aur rey ne muje dkha tak nhi..huh

Rey's pov:

kya kahu kriya se kuch samaj nhi aa rha..kal ke baat vo mujse kaise behave karegi...pata nhi baat bi karegi ya nhi..abi toh riya n tina hai isliye baat kar rhi hai..kya karu..

K: tina,riya tum dono thodi der khelo..muje rey se kuch baat krni hai...(all shockd to hear that..n that is wen rey notice that kriya was wearing the same dress whch he giftd her..n he was jst chcking her out n kriya was continuously puling her dress down..by rey's constant staring while tina n riya gigled to see ts..whch bring rey back to his senses.)

kriya's dress


tina:hum idar khelte hai..par bhook lagi hai..kuch khana hai..

Riya: haan..

K:haan theek hai mei aur rey kuch khane ko leke aate hai yha se do gali chodke ek resturant hai..(riya n tina again gigled..while kriya glared at them n kriyansh went to get sumthing to eat...)


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awesome update..loved kriya's dress...

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kriya's dress ws beautiful
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