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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 50)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged

once again thnx for such a luvly comments n like too...

n here is d nxt update..


sharon was standing on the counter table...wen sumrandom guys were drolling over her n passing comments...swayam noticed dis once but ignore it...all were busy in enjoying d so called ice cream fight...wen one of those boy cum near sharon n push her such dat she was abt to fall n dat guy was abt to hold her but swayam cum in between n hold her...sharon had closed her eyes for a while...aftr sumtym she slowly open her eyes n found herself safe in swayam arms...n dey both lost in each other eyes..after sumtym dey came back to deir sense by rey)
rey; ahem...ahem...
swaron: no response
rey; ahem...ahem...rey calling swayam...rey calling...
(still no response frm swayam)(rey move towards swayam n throw ice cream on him)
rey: abhe...oh...ho gaya tera chal aab action mei...
rey(to sharon):sharon tum kriya n company ke sath jake khadi ho jao
(n she follow d command given by rey)
swayam(to those random guys): stay away dude...or u gonna pay for it...
rey: wah swayam...mast dialogue mara..kahan se seekha...
swayam: haan voh kal ek novel padh rha tha...
rey; rhne de... maine tujse puchke galti kar di...
guy: abhe oyee...tum dono apni batein band karo n tum log hote kaun ho mujhe rokne vale...mei jo chahe vioh karu...(n dat guy move towards krisha n holds sharon's hand n reyam were cuming fuming to punch him but before dey can proceed kriya punched him hard...)
kriya: aab pata chala ek ladki se pange lene ka maza...now get lost...
(but d guy was fuming n he in return hold kriya's hand n twist her hand n other guy to do d same wid sharon ...now reyam were full on in rowdy avtar...dey start beating those random guys...n took dem outside d parlour so dat dere would be no loss to d owner of d parlour(krisha n tiya were standing at sum distance n watching all...did...n were feared on seeing dis n d croud of people)
sharon; kriya...
kriya; hmm...
sharon: kuch karna padega warna...(cut by kriya..)
kriya: haan...but kare kya...
sharon; haan..idea...tu jake dono ko rok...waise bhi swayam tujse darta hai ...tujhe dekh ke ruk jayega n rey...woh toh tujse hi ladne shuru ho jayega n woh laDKE TAB TAK BHAAG JAYENGE...WAISE BHI BAHUT PIT GAYE HAI BICHARE...)
kriya; haha...vry funny...mei kyu jao...panga lene ke liye...tu ja na...tu bhi toh swayam se ladti rhti hai.. n rey toh tera kafi acha frnd hai naa...ya shayad frnd se bhi zyada...
sharon: wht??tujhe lagta hai mei aur rey... how could u??
tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai ki...mei tujse kuch chipaungi...
kriya: nhi...maine toh bas aisa kaha...as aaj kal tu apno se durr aur prayo ki tareefe bahut karti hai...waise rey itna bura bhi nhi hai
(n den she luk at rey)
sharon: ohooo...itna acha hai...mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha...
kriya; woh...woh...haan...tu ja...rok unhe...
sharon: nhi tu...
kriya: tu...
sharon: tu..
kriya: tu..
(tiya who were standing near dem try to stop krisha's fight n were suceeded...)
tina: ek fight toh khatam nhi ho rhi aur aap dono bhi shuru ho gaye...
riya; haan...apni fight baad mei continue karna n yeh socho unhe roke kaise...agar mumma ko pata chala toh swayam n rey dono pitenge...
sharon; swyam ko kyu tumhari mom marengi?? usse toh uski mom...(cut by riya)
riya; aapko fikr ho rhi hai unki...
(sharon noded her head like a small kid)
tina; idea...PAR...HAANN...
(SHE TELLS D PLAN TO EVERYONE... frstly krisha refused but aftr dat dey also agreed)(n dey all went n bought sum sadhe hue tamater n eggs frm d near by shop)
kriya; woh hame toh nhi marenge...
riya; nhi.
sharon: yuks agar unhone ne mujhe mara toh mera face...
tiya: chup...
tina; kuch nhi hoga aapke eklote aur pyare chehre ko...aab chalo...Attack
(n dey start throwing those sadi gale tomatoes n eggs on d random guys...trying not to throw on reyam...but unfortunately irt hit reyam also... dose guys were trying to escape n sum were sucessful n sum were still trying...while reyam were moving in d direction frm where d egg n tomato rain is cuming n dey were abt to reach dem)
rey; arre...are...aaram se...hum bhi hai yaha...
swayam: phle ice cream n aab ye eggs ki barsaat kahan se shuru ho gayi..
(n one of d egg goes in swayam mouth n sum on rey's head n swayam push rey by mistake...n he fall on kriya )
swayam; yukks...
(on d other hand kriyaansh sharing an intense eye lock...whch was broken by d egg whch whch was on rey's head n fell on kriya's fore head...they felt awkward n straighten themselves)
rey: sorry...
kriya: its ok...yeh(n give her egg to throw on those guys)
rey; yaa..thnx...
(n dey start hiting those guys unless dey run frm dere...aftr dat dey went to parlour n say sorry for what happen n were asked to clean d parlour but dey sum how requested dem saying d childrean r also along wid dem n pays d loss of d parlour)


at night:

in ghai mansion;
kriya: sharon plz...light off karde...mujhe sona hai... kal tere sath bhi jana hai woh bhi 5 a.m...
sharon: cummon kriya...it'z only 8 now...aise toh hum har saturday ko sath mei itni masti hai...(ps. saturday nite krisha stay together to do masti )
kriya: plz...mei bahut thak gayi hu n upar se cold bhi hai...n tina bhi so gayi hai...
sharon: bahane mat bana...tu nhi jana chahti na mere sath mrning mei ..it'z ok...i'll go alone...
kriya; okk...thnk u...
sharon; wht?? tu sach mei nhi jana chahti...how mean...n waise wahan ke boys gym mei rey n swayam bhi aate hai...
kriya; toh mei kya karu?? n waise tujhe kaise pata tu...boys gym mei kya karne jati hai...haan...
sharon; arre woh toh dono gym ekdum opposite hai naa toh maine kal unhe dekha...
kriya; so wht?? waise bhi mujhe apni subah ki neendh bahut pyari hai...
tina(in sleep): cutie pie..plz dheere bolo...sone do...
sharon: dekh tune tina ko bhi jaga diya...
kriya: acha...maine toh sirf light off krne ko kaha tha...ladai tune shuru ki...apna chater box khol ke...
sharon: tune...(tina get annoyed)
tina: chup...kyu cat fight ho rhi hai...yaha abhi itna lad ke aaye ho woh kam tha kya...
kriya: sweetypie sharon ne shuru ki fight...
sharon: nhi kriya ne...
kriya: sharon ne...
( tina took her pillow n blanket n went outside unnoticed by krisha in d living area n again slept on d near by sofa)
(n dere krisha were fighting in dere room whch was distubed by d ringing of door bell again n again)
(whereas tina went open d door n widut luking at d person again went to sofa n drifted to sleep)
guy 1; arre isne toh hame dekha bhi nhi...
guy2: n sone chali gyi...kya variety hai...
(krisha came outside n found two boys standing at d enterance of d house
krisha TUM!!!!


new readers  for pm's buddy me  Star



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:19am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
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awsm riya jst loved it...Tongue

but i hate one thng that vo egg swatamkey mouth mey evvv i just hate it...Dead

really tina is a diffrnt characterWink

krishas cat fight s intrsngROFL

update the next part soon
Big smile


Edited by karthikasekhar - 11 November 2012 at 9:59pm
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
lovely update
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
superb update
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
awesome update
kya fight thi waah i loved it
krisha cute fight was amazing 
bechari tiya ki neendh kharab kar di 
aur wo ladke  reyam hain na 
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
superb update...
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:32am | IP Logged
awesome
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Pinkpearly

lovely update

thnx...

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