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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 43)

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjalijayan

Awesome updates
i loved it

thnx..:)

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged

hii...thnk u for all d precious comments n like..

.luv u all..

n reet dii...i haven't tried ever on swaron b'coz brain mei zyada tar kriyaansh virus hai...

but i'll try to give equal part too swaron too...by nxt update..

have to get sum idea...

promise by nxt update will include swaron part too...

now see u all at d end...enjoy...


after enjoying alot...
rey: so chale guys ...
swayam: kahan...aur kuch bhi bacha hai aab?
rey: arre ghar...chalte hai...aab aur kya chahiye tujhe...(everyone luk at eachtother exept kriyaansh n den shout)
all(exept kriyaansh): ice cream...
rey: wht ice cream??u know na swayam i ha...( before he could complete tina n riya spoke in b/w)
tina: kriya dii ko ice cream bahut pasand hai...
riya + sharon: haan...
kriya: mujhe...arre tum log apni baat karo...tumhe khani hai...mera naam kyu le rhe ho...
rey: haan...vahi toh mei keh rha tha...i ha...ha...(eyeing riya for hlp but den tina spoke in b/w)
tina: haan...bhaiya keh rhe the ki he have to give ice cream treat to us...unhe bhi toh ice cream bahut pasand hai...hena...
rey + riya: haan ... haan...
swayam: par tujhe toh ice cream bilku...
riya: arre swayam bhaiya chalo na hum ice cream parlour chalte hai...
swayam: sab sath mei chalte hai...
tiya: nhi hum phle chalte hai plz...plz...( riya n swayam move towards d parlour)
swayam: ok chalo...
tina: mr. handil aap bhi chalo...cutie pie n super hawtt ko rhne do...unhe nhi chahiye ice cream shayad...
rey: haan ...chalo lagta toh yhi hai...(luking at krisha wid a cute pout)
sharon: yaa rite...waise bhi mujhe nhi khani mei yha hi rukti hu...waISE BHI ICE CREAMS MEI KITNI CALLARIES HOTI HAI...KRIYA AGAR TUJHE JANA HAI TOH TU JAA...(kriya noded a no n said dat she'll be dere along sharon)
KRIYA(IN HER MIND): hey universe ji is sharon ko pata hai ki ice cream toh chod nhi sakti par mei kaise kahu ki mujhe ice cream chahiye...voh bhi rey or swayam ke samne...lagta hai aaj mujhe ice cream balidaan dena hi padega...life mei phli baar kriya ghai ice cream ko mana kar rhi hai...
tina: miss super hawtt...ek ice cream se kuch nhi hota...n tumhe pata hai tum nhi aa rhi isliye cutie pie bhi nhi aa rhi...
kriya: sweety pie..sachi mei mujhe nhi chahiye...
rey: agar tum dono nhi aaogi toh mei kisi ko bhi nhi treat dunga...mei aandar ja rha hu...agar tum teeno 5 min mei nhi aayi toh no ice cream treat...(n he moves widout even listening to dem)
tina: plz... miss.. super hawtt..plz...plz...cutie pie...
sharon: okk..but ek shart par...
tina: wht??
sharon: as kal sunday hai toh tum dono ko mere sath kal full day rhna padega...frm early mrning wen i do my work out...
kriya: nhi...nhi...mei apni neendh nhi kharab nhi kar sakti...n tere sath work out...
tina n kriya: NO WAYS...
sharon: okk..u'r choice..so no ice cream...wise mujhe pata hai tum dono ice cream ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho...so...yes...
kriya n tina; nooo...
sharon: yes...
kriya n tina: noo...
sharon: nooo...
kriya n tina: yesss..
sharon: yes...okk...lets go...dey'll be waiting..n get ready in d morning by 5 p.m
kriya: tab toh raat hoti hai...morning toh 11 a.m hoti hai na...
tina: haan... 11 am bhi bahut jaldi hai...
sharon: 4 a.m...
tina..nhi nhi... 5 a.m hi theek hai...haina cutie pie...
kriya; haan.. chalo aab chalte hai...varna ice cream bhi nhi milegi n ghar bhi toh jaldi jana..taki jaldi sp pai...
sharon: ok letz...go...
inside parlour:
swayam: rey mei kabse puchne ki try kar rha hu par sum one always disturbing me...huh...(eyeing riya)...
rey: kya hai??
swayam: tujhe toh ice cream pasand nhi n ek hi khane se cold bhi ho jata hai...
rey: aaj se muje ice cream bahut achi lagti hai...
riya: choclate...
rey: haan spclly choclate vali..thnx for telling...
swayam: par...
riya: par var kuch nhi...agar aapko ice cream chahiye...toh chup chap baitho...(swayam sit silently wid his finger on his lips n den krisha + tina enters n dey headed towards d table were reyam + riya were sitting n take deir seats)
rey: so...u want ice cream treat or program cancel??
sharon: offcorse not...
rey: matlab u don't want...
kriya: nhi...i want...i mean we all want...hena riya, tina...(dey all noded a no too tease kriya..rey too join dem in deir plan...)
rey: ok toh sirf kriya ko hi ice cream chaiye ice cream...
kriya: nhi mujhe bhi nhi...
rey: okk...so lets go...
kriya: okk..chalo(making a sad face...n get up)(all burst out in a huge laughter..exept kriyam...dey luk at swayam who was sitting quietly wid his finger on his lips)
rey: tu kuch bol kyu nhi rha??tu theek toh hai...
riya: rey humne isse chup rhne ko kaha tha n ye tab se aise hi baitha hai...
rey: aab tu bol sakta hai...agar tujhe bhi ice cream chahiye...
swayam: haan...chahiye...naa...
rey: acha...yeh iss ice cream mei aisa kya hai jo sab ekdum se mann jate hai...
all(exept rey): megic...
rey: yaa true...
riya n tina: aab chalo na...order dete hai..
rey: tum sab yhi baitho mei aur swayam ice cream leke aate hai...( n dey both headed towards d counter n place deir respectve orderes n took dem n was about to go...wen swayam thron one of d ice cream on rey...n starts laughing)
rey(angrily0: swayam...(n he throw ice cream...but unfortunately swayam bent down n it hit sharon who was siting behind him...)
sharon: argh...who d hell dare to do this??( she saw swayam standing dere n laughing on her...she took d ice cream frm d near by table n throws on swayam...(dere was a silence for sumrtym which was broken by tiya's n kriya's gigling)(shareyam came together towards dem...wid a mischievious smile on deir face...n all of dem becum silent n d trio of d grls were luking at shareyam with their eyes if asking wat...)(shareyam took one ice cream each
swayam: attack...( n soon d grls trio was also involved in d ice cream fight)(everyone in d parlouswere enjoying d ice cream fight...even d waiters...)(sharon took one n throw one n throw on swayam's face n start laughing... swayam also do d same but it hit kriya...as sharon bent down)
swayam: marr gaya...jhansi ki rani se panga le liya...(while kriya start laughing on seeing her own condition)
kriya; handi...
rey(standing away frm her): smile krte hue kitni cute lagti hai yeh baatcutter...
tina(aftr hearing wht rey said): hmm...baatcutter...nice name...
rey: woh...ahh...woh...
riya: don't wory rey isse sab pata hai n yeh hamari hlp kar rhi hai...
rey: kya?? tune isse bhi bata diya?? tu kam thi jo yeh bhi...
tina: bhaiya...isne mujhe bataya...but aap chinta mat karo mei dii ko kuch nhi bataungi...promise...n i''l hlp u...kriya dii ke likes n dislikes bata ke...
rey(smiling): thnx...
riya: omg...tina tune...sabke real naam liye...phli baar...
tina: toh kya??(luking at rey)aapko cutie pie ke sath cake fight nhi khelni??
rey9lyk a small kid): khlni hai...par agar voh gussa ho gayi toh...
tina: arre nhi hogi...chalo hamare sath...(they eel headed towards d counter wn was searching for her wen rey notice dat shewas hiding under d table to deir rite n was smiling...n rey starts staring her...riya n tina notice dis n followed his gaze n found kriya)
tina; chale...(n d trio went towards kriya while going dey all took ice cream in deir hands... n dey sat on deir knees in front of kriya)
kriya; tum sab..yh...(beforeshe complete tina throw icecram on her face n push rey towards kriya...n ran frm dere...
kriya(closing her eyes due to dis sudden action of tina): sweetypie tum ruko...(as ice cream was all over her face...she was n't able too see...n rey was just staring at herw id his million dollar smile...she took d ice cream frm his hand n throw it on rey...thinking dat it was tina...here riya n tina sit ib front of dem widout making noise so dat dey don't know n start making deir video...)
kriya; aab bol kaisa lalaga...9 rey was still lost in her)
kriya: tina tu kuch bol kyu nhi rhi hai...(n mean while she holds rey's hand)(rey start cleaning kriya's face... still staring at her)(after dat kriya's open her eyes slowly...n saw him smiling)(she again took d ice cream frm d table under whch dey were hiding n throw it on him..n starts laughing hard...)
kriya(still laughing): aab tum lag rhe ho...woh tutu the monkey...
rey: baatcutter ruko yum...(they both tried to get up but they hit deir head to d table under whch dey were hiding...)
kriyaansh: oouch...(now tiya who were sitting in front of dem n making dere video start gigling whch was a li'l loud...kriyansh luk at dem never letting dem to know dat dey caught dem red handed...n dey both place deir one hand each on d table under which dey were hiding n by chance rey put his hand on kriya's n den deir l2h2...whch was broken by swayam wen he fell down()
swayam: hii...
rey' hii...
swayam: bye...(n he gets up...rey luk at kriyaho was screaming...)
kriya: aah...aah...rey..
rey: sorry...sorryy...aah...ahh...ek min mei tumhe sorry kyu bol rha hu n mei kyu chila rha hu...haan mera hath...( he luk upside d table n saw sharon sitting on deir hand)
rey: sharon...utho...
sharon: y?? mei tumhare upar thodi naa baithi hu...
rey: yaa but..baat...i mean tum mere hath ke upar baithi ho...( she notices dis n stand frm dere n said a soory n move frm dere...rey too went under d table)
rey:u okk??
kriya: yaa...(n den told him by ishara too continue dere plan...on tiya...frstly he didn't undrstand n den he follow her gaze n understands)(they took one ice cream each)
kriyansh: 3 ...2...1...splash...(n throw ic on tiya...n start laughing...while frstly tiya...cry..but later dey too start laughing...all d four get up frm under d table n were laughing hardly so da dey hug each other...tiya hug each other n same wid d kriyaansh...tiya on seeing dem)
tiya: 3rd...(kriya on hearing dis step back n luk at rey who was already luking at her n deir l2h2 begins...dey came back to dere senses wen sumone throw ice cream on rey...)
kriya: sorry...
rey: itz ok...
kriya(lukig at tiya): wht 3rd??(rey widening his eyes n luking at tiya too not tell kriya n handle d situation)
tina: mr. handil ki 3rd...(rey widened his eyes n pleading to her silently not to tell anything)
tina: 3rd ...3rd(eyeing riya to handle...)
riya: woh 3rd... 3rd... ice cream treat par aisa hua...
kriya: kya hua...
riya: voh 3rd baar aisa hua ki rey ne ice cream treat di aur woh ice cream fight mei badal gayi...
kriya: ohh...maine toh...
tina: aapne toh...apne kya socha??
kriya: k...kuch nhi...bas aisi hii...
rey: kriyaaa...
kriya: hmm...(n rey throw ice cream on kriya n starts running...followed by kriya...n kriya climbs on rey's back n start giving him ice cream massage...after sumtym she feel awkward...so she get down...)


precap: don't know...sochna padega...


new readers  for pm's buddy me 



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:18am

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
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woww awsm ice cream fightThumbs Up

swayam LOLLOL

kriyansh awww so sweetWink

riya or tina kitna shararath karthey heyBig smile

rey kriya ki face par ice cream dala usko eysey karneyki kyazaroorath thi par it was cute

ye i cream fight dekkar mera or mera bro ka cake fight yad agya sersly i miss him alot...now kriyansh toooCry

plz update nxt part soon ... egrly waitingTongue



Edited by karthikasekhar - 03 November 2012 at 7:00am
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awsm fight 
loved it
nxt part soon


Edited by angel_luvkreya - 02 November 2012 at 8:18am
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remimds me of food fight... I loved Sharon's work oit plan...
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awesome...
loved the fight...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_luvkreya

awsm fight
loved it
nxt part soon

thnx..

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