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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 35)

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:32am | IP Logged
awesome...

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GOOd Job I lykd it... girls on mission FRnship...

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged

hii guys..

once again thnx for all d luvly likes n comments...

hope u all like dis one also...

n thnx yogini for giving suggestion for d pm's one

n karthika dii sorry for being late...


riya: dii aap iss side baitho naa...mujhe yahan se niche ka view dkhna hai...

kriya: par tumhe darr..(riya cuts b?w)
riya: mujse zyada aapko darr lag rha hai..aap kaanp rhe ho...
kriya: nhi mujhe nhi lag rha mei yaha hi baithungi ...
riya(to rey):plz bhaiya aap beech mei baith jao...
rey: mei...nhi...mei nhi...
riya: plz..plz...plz...varna mei baat nhi karungi...
rey: acha theek hai...]
(rey sits b?w kriya n riya)
riya(in mind): 1st part sucessful...aab bas jaldi se ride shuru ho n kriya dii rey ki bahoon mei...hope wahan tina ka plan bhi work kar rha ho...
rey(closing his eyes n in his mind): pata nhi mujhe kuch gadbad lag rhi hai...riya ye sab kar rhi hai...kahin isse pata toh nhi chal gaya n tina ko??( rey feels a hand on his shoulder...n he smiles still closing his eyes n hold it n opens his eyes too see whose it)
(guess karo...kriya soch rhe ho...par har baar voh hi thodi na hogi..it was riya...his smile faint n he look towards kriya n saw her closing her eyes tight n cluthing her hands tight)
rey: how cute??
riya(whispers in rey ear's): bhaiya kriya dii...
rey: haan wahi...nhi nhi...tu cute...bahut cute...
riya: pata hai mujhe kaun cute hai...aap kriya dii ki hlp karo...unhe darr lag rha hai..dekho woh ro rhi hai...
rey: haan...
(kriya crying closing her eyes)
rey: kriya..kriya...
kriya: rey...rey..mujhe darr lag rha hai...muje nhi leni yeh ride...plz...
rey: kriya..open u'r eyes...
kriya: nhi..mujhe...(rey cuts)
rey: look at me...kriya...open u'r eyes...(she opens her eyes for a while n luk down n again closes n hugs rey tight)
kriya; nhi rey mei nhi...mujhe ghar jana hai plz...
rey:shh...acha...theek hai tum apni aankhe bandh hi rakho..(n dey got a sudden jhatka dat ride struck as dere's a problem in d electricity suply so dey have to be seated)(now aal who r scared of height r shouting...mean while kriya opens her eyes she thought d ride is over...but got a shock n hugged rey more tightly)
kriya: yeh ride ko kya hua..hum yaha upar??
rey; voh..kriya..voh..dere's a problem..so we have to wait... for a while here..
kriya(still huging rey n closing her eyes): kya? aise kaise kharab ho gyi...dhyaan rkhna chahiye inhe...agar kisi ko darr lagta ho toh..
rey: bas baatcutter...bas... is situation mei bhi kitna bolti ho...kuch nhi hoga tumhe..mei hu naa tumhare sath(n for a while dere was a silence..whch was broken by kriya)
kriya: voh mei..voh mei sirf apni baat nhi kar rhi thi...voh riya..(cut by rey)
rey: matlab tum manti ho ki tumhe bhi darr..
kriya: haan..par yeh riya kuch bol kyu nhi rhi?/
rey: kyunki voh so gayi hai...
kriya: kya??yaha bhi so gyi...
rey:haan...(n dey both chuckled...)9p.s kriya still huging rey n closing her eyes)
kriya; sachi mei aisi unique piece sirf aapki hi behan ho sakti hai...bhai linecutter aur behan soti rhti hai...
rey: wht u mean... tumhari behan bhi toh anteic piece hai...sabke ajeeb ajeeb naam rkhti hai.. cutie pie...super hawtt mr. handil... n woh bhi sirf tumhari hi behaan ho sakti hai...ek behaan naam rkhrti hai n dusri baat katti hai...(n dey both chuckled)
rey: waise tumhari behan ko manna padega... naam bahut ache rkhti hai...
kriya: ofcouse meri behan hai...
rey: okk..aab u feeling better naa...aab darr toh nhi lag rha...
kriya: lag rha hai...waise aap kyu puch rhe ho... kahin aapko toh darr nhi lag rha??
rey: nhi..mujhe..naa...
kriya: jhoot mat bolna... sach batao lag rha hai naa...
rey: bloody hell..haan bahut darr lag rha hai...
kriya: dekha...
rey;waise iss case mei riya better hai..aaram se so gyi..koi chinta nhi...
kriya: yaa
rey: ofcourse..behan kiski hai..
kriya: copy cat.. meri lines copy kar rhe ho...
rey: i can't be copy cat
kriya: kyu??
rey: remember mei male hu...i'm not a gay..
kriya: mujhe toh laga aap wahi ho...
rey; what?? seriusly?? u think so??
kriya: omg u taking it serious..i'm jst kidding..
rey: thnk god..
kriya: kyu aapko lagta hai ki aap gay ho??
rey: actually..i don't think so but tum apne bare mei socho coz if u think i'm a gay den u'r even not less as u huging me...
kriya: vogh..voh...(rey chuckled)
rey: relax..i'm too kiding..
kriya: srry..voh mujhe darr lag rha tha isliye i'm
rey: it'z ok..i understand...(tring tring...swayam calls rey)
rey: oyee kya hai?? is situation mei call kar rha hai?/
swayam: haan tu distub ho gaya hoga naa.. bada maza aa rha hai tujhe kriya ke sath..
rey; tujhe kaise pata...
swayam: idhar dekh pata chal jayega tujhe...
rey(luking here n dere): idhar kidhar...
swayam: arre...*( n tries to throw a pop crn on rey, but d whole bucket fell down on d other person...
other person: oyee..dekh ke ..ye dustbeen nhi meri biwi hai...
swayam: sorry sorry..
rey; abhe kya keh rha hai??
swayam: piche dekh...
rey(luking behind):hey bhagwaan...
kriya: rey kya hai... sone do naa...
riya: haan rey chup baitho...
rey: srry ...woh swayam..
riya: iss swayam ki toh mei...
rey: riya plzz...
swayam: rey??
rey: haan...
swayam: aab dikha...
rey; haan...sharon tere sath hai n tu abhi bhi apni novels mei laga hua hai..n yaha tere pass novel kaha se aayi??
swayam: voh mei hamesha apne sath ek pocket novel rkhta hiu..so lucky me...
rey: idiot...usse chod sharon se frndship pe focus kar...
swayam: voh toh so gayi..
rey: tu apni novel ke sath romance karega toh soye gi hi..aur tina??
swayam: voh songs sun rhi hai...vaise novel aur romance not a bad idea...
rey: tera kuch nhi ho sakta...dumbo...bye..
swayam: bye..(n cuts it)
swayam; swayam n novel ka romance...kyu na ispe ek story likhu...(meanwhile sharon wake up n saw dey r at too high n shouts n tina starts crying)
swayam: kya hua?
sharon:mujhe darr lag rha hai..hum yaha (n she hugs swayam)
swayam: kuch nhi hoga..n tum kyu ro rhi ho...
tina: voh sup..super hawtt ne cheenka toh..toh mujhe laga hum..
swayam: kuch nhi hoga...(n she too hug swayam n throws d novel whch again fall down on d same person's wife)
swayam: arre meri novel..
sharon:woh gayi bhaad mei...
other prson: teri toh..tujhe dikhayi nhi deata bhe..
swayam; srry bhaiya..plz...
scene shifted to kriyaansh side:
riya: toh kaisa lag rha hai rey...
rey: bahut acha..nhi nhi..voh mujhe darr lag rha hai..
riya: acha..bas bas mujhe sab pata hai...
rey: kya?? kya pata hai tujhe??
riya: acha bachu..mujse smartness.. i know aap kriya dii ko..hmm bolo bolo...
rey: kya?/ nhi mei kriya se pyar nhi krta??
riya: maine kab pyar kaha tha.. apne toh khud hi bol diya...
rey: tujhe jo sochna hai soch..aisa kuch nhi hai...
riya: acha toh kaisa laga frst hug??
rey: frst nhi second..nhi woh..woh..
riya: oh..second..gud job...
rey: acha ..theek hai aab chup baith n tujhe kaise pata woh mujhe hug kar rhi hai.. teri aankhe toh bandh hai...bandh hi haina?? kahin teri third eye toh nhi??
riya: haahaa..very funny...ho gaya...voh toh sirf niche na dekhu isliye...aapko thodi der kriya dii ke sath dekhne ke liye toh khol hi sakti hu naa..,.
rey: tu nhi sudregi...
riya: mei bhigdi hi kab thi...u know naa i'm very inocent...(karthika dii aapko bhi pata hai naa..mei sabse shareef hu :p)
rey: pata hai mujhe...( n now d ride got down n stops)
rey: kriya...
kriya(no response)
(sharon, swayam n tina also come dere... all were out of d ride exept kriyaansh as kriya still huging rey n sleeping)
swayam: rey...
rey; chup baith tu...
rey(still trying to wake her up): kriyaa...
kriya: hmmm...
rey: kriya utho...
kriya: sone dop naa.. thodi der maa...(all burst out in laughing except kriyaansh whch was enough for kriya to wake up..)( she relises her position n got down frm d ride n saying sorry to rey...after dat they took all d rides...n enjoyed alot..rey stealing sum glances of kriya n riya teasing him...n after dat it was time to go home...)


precap:ice cream fight...Star

new readers  for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:18am

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
yupieee Dancing

awsm

kya tum inncnt accha babaaa uska proof dhikadho

is bar ithna bada wala hug awwwDay Dreaming

swayam vaha novel padneykeliye gaye kya usko romance karna nahi atha or pop cone giradhiya us ko thoAngry

sharon shoutng or tina cryng its a good timing LOL

riya awww sweet Tongueshe is ..tum or riya ek dham twin rightLOL

kriyansh is always bestWink

tum innocnt right mujey proof chahiye LOL



Edited by karthikasekhar - 25 October 2012 at 8:47pm
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awsm ...Thumbs Up
kriyansh ka second hug ...Heart
wow...
kriya ne rey ko maa bola its funny...ROFL
nxt part soon
pm when u update
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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
amazing part...
kriyansh are so cute nd sweet... love them
riya helping rey to get close to kriya...
kriyansh second hug... hayee Embarrassed Embarrassed
kriya calling rey as maa.. LOL LOL
precap-ice cream fight... super excited for it
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Awesome update...kria ne Rey ko maa bola...haha...super funny...nd ye riya to ws da highlight...Kitna chidaya bechare Rey ko...hehe...superb prt...waiting fr da ice cream fight...

Edited by d3fan4eva - 25 October 2012 at 9:55am

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