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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 29)

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
nice update

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NYCC KRiyaansh Argument and Rey's Sister teasing SWAYAm!!!!!
Update soon and thnxx fr d pm..
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nice update
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hii guy's me back...

n sorry last tym chotu update tha

iss tym i tried my best to make it bada wala...

i hope u like it...

thnx for u'r luvly comments n likes...

okk aab update padh lo niche milte hai...Big smile


rey; chale..

kriya: okk..(they reach d near by mall n buy gifts for tina n riya)

kriya; i think we'r done..so let'z go back...
rey9in his mind): ab yeh kuch zyada hi kar rhi hai..ok lemme too play...
rey; yaa..we'r done.halo...
kriya; r u sure...
rey; yaa, tumhe kuch lena hai kya??
kriya: nhi i don't let'z go...
rey: tum nxt counter se jake hamare gift bags cllect karo.. i'll pay d bill n den cum..
kriya: okk(n moves towards d counter)
rey: yeh baatcutter bhi naa...excuse me... can i get that dress whch i selected here instead of there..plz...
g; yaa sure sir...
rey: thnx...n plz make it'z seperate bill..
g: sure sir...
on the other hand...(kriya moving outside the show room n tlking to herself)
kriya(to herself):khadoos kahin ka... ek toh mujhe ghar bhi nhi jane nhi diya n upar se mere liye dress lena bhi bhool gaya...phle toh bada bol rha tha le lena...n aab ek baar pucha tak nhi...
(n lost in her own convo...she bumped into sumone...n her bags.. got scatered...)
kriya: dekh kar nhi chal sakte kya...
guy:i'm really sorry...really(n start cllecting n arranging the stuff of the bags whch were scatered on the ground)(den kriya luks towards d guy)
kriya: karan sir...aap yaha...
karan: hii..sweetheart..(n they hug each other n at d same tym rey saw dem)
rey(to himself):sharon toh bada keh rhi thi ki ye ladko se durr..rehti hai...aab dekho kaise chipak rhi hai...(kriya saw rey n try to tell him)
kriya: rey...yeh...(rey cuts in b/w0
rey: kriya tumhara ho gaya ho toh chale...
kriya: par rey yeh mere...
rey: kriya i'm not interesting in meeting anyone... shall we go?? as i'm getting late or u wanna go wid him...
kriya; rey aap..
rey: kriya...plz...
kriya: okk...fy9..i'm going...n sorry sir for wasting u'r tym(n she hurriedly moves frm dere)
karan: kriya wait...listen...
rey; sir?
karan: yaa i'm karan..i was her teacher in d school...n if i'm not wrong u'r rey,reyaansh singhania??
rey: yhaa...par aapko kaise pata??
karan: kriya told me...
rey: wht?? usne aapko mere barein mein bataya...
karan: yup...so tum ho woh linecutter...
rey(luking down): haan..n sorry woh maine aapke barein mein...i mean maine socha ki...
karan: ki mei uska boyfrnd hu...
rey: hmm..
karan; it'z okk..don't worry...as u see i'm too quite young so kisi ko bhi lagega ...toh uske boyfrnd ko bhi lagega hi...
rey(murmrring): ek baar mujhe pata chal jaye kaun hai uska bf... i'll surely kill him...
karan: so u can do this lucky work on u'rself...
rey: srry??
karan; coz tum hi uske bf lagte ho...
rey: kya... mei uska bf... usne khud kaha kya?? kya voh bhi... i mean..
karan: wait...wait...usne nhi kaha...but jis tarah se tum kabse react kar rhe ho...i'm sure u start liking her...am i rite??
rey: haan nhi...voh...voh...
karan: ok...ok... ek advice du...free mei hai
rey: hmm...
karan: tum kabse yaha khade hoke mujse batein kar rahe ho...usse manaoge nhi...usne tumhari itni hlp ki...
rey: haan par usne yeh bhi aapko bataya...
karan: voh kuch reason ki vajah se mujse apni har baat share karti hai...so dat she feel better...
rey: yaa i know...wht'z d reason...i really feel bad...
karan: tumhe kisne...
rey: voh maine sharon ko insist kiya tha isliye usne bataya...
karan: okk... bye ...aab jao...u were getting late...
rey: yaa...bye sir... n really sorry for getting u wrong...
karan: it'z ok...all d best kriya ko jhelne ke liye...
rey: hmm...yaa...thnk u...(n they move opposite to each other)
(meanwhile rey call swayam)
rey: kahan hai tu??
swayam: woh k... kr...kriya ke ghar pe...
rey: wht but tum log toh nikal gaye the na wahan se ,phir...
swayam: haan... par woh sharon chater box kahin ki... usne tina n riya ko kaha ki tu bhi wahan hoga... toh teri behan ne aane se mana kar diya n uski woh frnd usne ko itni sympathy dii...aur yahan k..k..kriya ke ghar le aayi...
rey: ek kaam theek se nhi hota tujse n tu kriya ka naam lete hue itna gabra kyu rha hai...koi bhoot dekh liya kya??
swayam: voh...voh kriya...naa abhi bahut gusse mei ghar aayi hai n aate hi sharon par bhadak gayi...toh mujhe lag rha hai agla target na hu...
rey: kya...voh ghar chale gayi...damn...
swayam: kya...
rey: tere sath koi hai tina ya sharon mei se...
swayam: haan tina hai... mujhe company de rhi hai...
rey: great usse phone de...
swayam: okk...tina ye lo rey umse baat karna chahta hai...
tina: mujhe koi baat nhi karni...unse...
rey: swayam call speaker pe daal...
swayam: okk(n he puts d call on speaker)
rey; tina plz ...listen to me...i'm sorry plz...
tina; no...mei aapse baat nhi karungi...
rey: acha phle meri baat suno...phir mujse baat maat karna plz...apni sis n frnd ke liye plz...
tina: okk bolo...(rey tell her everything he had done for riya n how kriya get angry wid him,par apni feelings ke barein mein nhi bataya usne)
rey: plz tum meri hlp karogi plz...
tina: okk... mei try karungi...(dere kriya was standing behind n heard deir last line of deir convo dat tina gonna hlp rey as call was on speaker)
kriya(in her mind): toh aab ye linecutter mei sis se hlp le rha hai...how mean??(n she went frm dere to her room)
swayam: tum jao kriya ke pass... mei riya ke paas jata hu...
tina: okk...(dey went to deir respective places n try hard to make kriya n riya agree to cum along..but none of dem agree n dey left along wid sharon frm dere towards d park...where rey was waiting for dem)
(rey was waiting for all of dem n was nervous whether kriya will cum or not...n den swaron n tina arrived..tina told him dat kriya n riya both didn't cum...even dey tried alot...rey was very upset to hear dat but didn't show it in front of dem)
rey; koi baat nhi sweetypie...srry woh...
tina: koi baat nhi aap mujhe sweety pie bula sakte ho...aap bahut ache ho...par kya mein aapko mr. handil bula sakti hu...
shareyam: mr. handil??
tina: haan he is handsum so handsum ka han n devil bhi ho jo mei sis n frnd ko pareshaan karte ho so devil ka il...equal to handil...
rey: okk..u can.. n sorry woh tumhari sis n frnd...meri wajah se...( rey was completing wen he saw swayam shivering n his mouth is open)
rey to swayam: kya hua tujhe...
tina: haan bhaiya..aap toh aise darr rhe ho jaise kriya dii ko dekh liya ho(n tina chuckled)
swayam: k..kr...
(dere two girls cum frm behind n stand behind tina n rey...now swaron were able to see dem but not tina n rey...)
grl 1: haww..mujhe pata nhi tha tina tu bhi inke sath...(n they turned n look at d grls...getting happy n shocked)
grl 2: rhne do riya... ye bhi aisi hi hai... chalo hum dono chalte hai ...kahin aur..
tina n rey: nahin ...plz... sorry...plz...plz...
riya: huh.. bolne se phle sochna chahiye tha...
kriya:" hii... sharon ...hii swayam...(n move towards dem)
sharon: hii...(n hug her)( swayam was still in dellima...sharon pinched him hard...so dat he came out of it..)
swayam: aah...tum pagal ho kya??
sharon: wht??
swayam: r u mad?? itni zorr se pinch kiya?
sharon: mujhe hindi aati hai... n ek toh tumhe tumhare thoughts se bahar lane ki wajah se mera manicure kharab ho gaya n upar se tum..how cheap...
swayam: mei cheap aur tum...
kriya: stop it guyz...
swayam: woh sorry mei...woh..
kriya: tum mujse darr kyu rhe ho??( all were chuckling swayam like dis ecept kriyam)
swayam: woh mei woh...
tina: woh cutie pie bhaiya ko...
kriya: sharon maine tumse pucha kisi aur se nhi...(tina feel bad n move backward towards rey n stand dere wid rey quiet)(kriya oo felt bad...but she was sumwhere upset frm tina)
sharon; woh yeh tumse darta hai(n chuckled)
kriya: i'm sorry swayam...for behaving so rudely... sorry(for d frst tym swayam was not scared of kriya after hearing dis)
swayam; hey...don't be sorry..it'z not u'r fault...woh toh mujhe kriyaphobia ho gaya tha...(kriya glared at him wid wide eyes)
swayam: sorry( kriya smiled at dis...)
kriya: frnds??(sharey were shocked to here dis...dat after dat incident...for d frst tym kriya making a boy as her frnd n dat to by herself)
swayam: yup...best frnds...(n dey shake hands...swayam luked at sharey who were shocked)
swayam to sharey: kya hua...tum dono ko??aise kyu dekh rhe ho...sirf frndship hi kar rhe hai...pyar nhi(kriya was on d verge of crying so she excused herself)
kriya: mei abhi aati hu...
sharon: kriya...wait...
swayam; aab isse kya hua??
sharey: tum kabhi bhi apni bakwass band nhi kar sakte...
swayam:maine kya kiya...
rey(angry)" tune...(sharon cuts him in b/w)
sharon: isme iski koi galti nhi hai...mei kriya ko leke aati hu...(n she left frm dere)
rey: swayam...voh mei car mei kuch bhool gaya hu...mei abhi leke aaya...tu tina n riya ke paas ruk(n he followed sharon n hide herself on seeing krisha...kriya was crying)
kriya: sharon..tu..woh mei...
sharon: u don't even try to hide anything frm me...u know u can't stupid(n kriya burst out crying)
kriya: shar...muj pata nhi kyu...lag...aa ki ...sw..swayam..mera..frn...frnd bann...
sharon: kriya...stop crying...woh un dumbo's ke jaisa nhi hai...he'll not try to...harm u...trust me..aur agar kisi ne kiya toh mei uski...
kriya: i know... par.. muj..mujhe.. darr lag...rha hai aag..agar maine kisi...galat person...par trust kar liya toh...voh bhi...
sharon: stop it kriya...kuch nhi hoga ...aab chal sab wait kar rhe hai...(rey was luking all dis n was too crying n he moves back where all were waiting n aftr sumtym krisha also cum back)
rey to kriya: r u fy9??
kriya: yaa... par mujhe kya hua??(n luk towards sharon)
sharon: mujhe kyu dekh rhi hai jisne pucha...usse puch...
rey: kuch nhi woh tum...woh...(cut by swayam)
swayam:arre chalo aab..enjoy krne... tina n riya ko dekho woh bhi aise baithe baithe so gayi...tum logo ki wajah se...
rey; hmm...yaa...par...
kriya; mein uthati hu dono ko(n kriya wake dem up n told dem dat frst dey'll take rides aftwer dat dey'll have other things which dey wnt...dey both agreed n tina say sorry to kriya n kriya agreed)(dey went towards ride)
riya: pehle marigold round lenge...mei kriya dii ke sah baithugi...
kriya; mei toh rey ke sath baithungi aaja chal chalte hai...(all were shocked to here dis n rey was shocked n happy too)
riya: rehne..do mei swayam bhaiya n sharon ke sath ride lungi...
rey: merevsath nhi legi...baat bhi nhi karegi...sorry...
riya: chalo sharon dii...
sharon: par...mei
riya: aapko bhi nhi aana rehne do mei akele le lungi...
rey: nhi akele nhi...swayam plz...ja...isse hieght se darr lagta hai...phir bhi zidd krti hai...
swayam: okk...
kriya; mei aur sharon yaha hi rukte hai...aap 4 jao...
rey: kyu?? tum dono...
tinaI(chuckling): kyunki cutie pie ho hieght se darr lagta hai n super hawtt usse company deti hai.,..
riya to tina: ek min . idhar aa..
tina; haan bol...
riya(in tina's ear's): mei sharon dii ko apne sath leke jati hu...woh n swayam bhaiya ladte rehte hai...isliye kya pata ride pe unki frndship ho jaye...n phir...u know naa..
tina: par kriya dii...
riya: unhe tu leja kisi tarah ... warna woh borr ho jayengi...okk
tina: okk
riya: sharon dii aap bhi chalo...mujhe kuch nhi sunna bas...(sharon agreed wen kriya forced her n sharon said kriya u have to take dis...in short both agreed)(all were settling at deir places)
riya; sharon dii...
sharon: hmm...
riya: aap n swayam bhaiya hamesha ladte kyu rehte ho??
swayam: tu bhi toh rey se ladi hai..n usse naraz hai...
riya: uski baat alag hai...
sharon: swayam theek keh rha hai...
riya: par...
sharon: tumhe pata hai...yaha aane ka plan rey ka tha n kriya ne uski hlp ki...woh kabse try kar rha hai tumse baat karne ki...par tum...
swayam: haan..n agar tu usse baat karegi..toh mei sharon se kamm ladunga...as i'm not sure about her...
sharon: me too not sure abt u swayam...
riya: phir se ladh rhe ho...pehle promise karo kamm ladoge...
swaron srry...
riya: sachi mei yeh sab rey ne kiya...
sharon: haan..riya: dii..mei rey ke pass ja rhi hu... tina ko yaha bhejti hu...
swaron: okk...(she reach where rey,kriya n tina were sitting to take deir ride,,,)
riya: rey...sorry..(rey was happy to hear dat but now it was his turn to be angry)
riya; tina..plz tu sharon n swayam bhaiya ke pass jayegi..muje rey ke sath baithna hai...
rey: sweetypie tum nhi jaogi..muje iske sath nhi baithna...
riya: nhi muhe baithna hai...
rey: nhi...
riya: haan...
rey; nhi...(n both burst out into laughter n hug each other)
riya: sorry...
rey: it'z okk...
riya: haww...mera sorry wapas karo apne toh bola nhi...
rey: nhi dunga...tujhe mera sorry chahiye toh le le...
riya: mei bhi aapka sorry nhi dungi...
rey: rakh le koi baat nhi...
riya: acha aab mei baith jau...
rey: haan...sweetypie sorry tum..
tina: koi baat nhi mr. handil...
kriya n riya: handil??(n den tina told wht'z handil n all laugh)
riya:tina swayam n sharon milao...
rey: milao??
riya: nhi maine kaha ke paas jao...(n tina moves n takes d place wid swaron)
rey; riya sachi bata tu kya karne vali hai...kya kaha tune tina ko milane ke liye...warna mei...
riya: nhi plz...woh aapne kaha tha na swayam n sharon ki frndship isliye vohi try kar rhe hai...
rey: par woh toh maine aapne n kriy...
riya: kya??
rey; kuch nhi ...kuch nhi...
riya: okk...
rey(in his mind) damn...kash maine isse apne aur kriya ke barei mei bataya hota...toh ye meri help...no..no agar isse batata toh ye tina ko n woh kriya ko...no ways...mei aise hi theek hu...

riya(in her mind): iska matlab rey apne aur kriya dii ki situation bata rha tha...omg ye dono sath mei kitne cute lagenge...kuch toh karna padega...


precap: pata nhi ...sochna padega...Star

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Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:14am

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Awesome update
Thanks for pm
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amazingg update,,,,,,,i luv it
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Awesome and cute update
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loved it

the entire pataofy situation was cute

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