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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged

in the evening:

(kriya was all set wid d arangements to suprise riya n tina..she was having her cofee n wen she trned the cup of cofee fell down frm her hand,seeing rey standing too close too him n deir l2h2 starts..after sum tym wen dey cum back to deir senses) 

Rey:sorry.. 

Kriya:  it'z ok..

Rey:it'z not ok.. Woh maine sab gadbad.

Kriya:  gadbad.. 

Rey(lost in kriyaland):woh u luk beautiful...

Kriya:ye gadbad hai.. 

Rey:  nhi woh..i'm sry maine tumhari dress spoil kar di... 

Kriya: it'z ok..vaise bhi mei ghar hi ja rhi thi..as all d arangements r done..aap ek bhar dekh lo..

Rey: tum ja rhi ho..iska matlab tumne mujhe abhi tak forgive nhi kiya..plz ruk jao..i'm sorry.. Plz.. 

Kriya(hyper):urgh..kitni baar sorry bologe aab..jab milte ho sorry ka mantra japna shuru kar dete ho..  

Rey: acha mei karta hu..toh aab kaun shuru hua..baatcutter kahin ki..(n they start fighting dere.. Den a sparrow cum n sit on kriya's shoulder,she get scared n screamed in rey's arm..they both huging each other for a while.. After sum tym they get seperated n after so many tries of rey..kriya agrees wid him)

Rey:  toh dono..tum yahan ruk rhi ho.. 

Kriya: yaa but mujhe dress change karne n tina ko lene ghar toh jana hi padega naa.. 

Rey:  nhi,woh maine swayam ko kaha hai woh tina,riya n sharon ko leke aayega.. 

Kriya: but mei aisa yaha nhi ruk skti..i mean meri dress.. 

Rey:hmm..ya i know..waise mei abhi riya n tinake liye gifts lene ja raha hu..tum bhi chalo n waha apne liye dress le lena.... 

Kriya: but...

Rey:but vut ka kuch nhi..tum chup chap chalo..tumhe pata hai..ki end mei meri hi jeetta hu..hamari is fight mei..  

Kriya: hmm..ok...(n they move to the near by mall)

At kriya's home: 

(swayam along wid riya n tina sitting in living area..waiting for sharon..after half an hr. Sharon arrived) 

sharon:  srry..srry..mei thodi late ho gyi... 

Tina: thodi..aap pure hlf an hr. Late ho..miss. Super hot.. (at all dis tym swayam was luking at sharon wid his mouth open)

riya(whisper):  swayam bhaiya..muh bandh karo..isse pehle makhi gus jaye..

Swayam:haan woh..woh..tu chup reh..  

Riya: acha toh yhi woh..jiske sath aap frndship krna chahte ho.. 

Swayam:  tujhe kisne kaha? 

Riya:  rey ne..

Swayam: ye rey..usse toh.. 

Riya: woh hai hi aisa,abhi usse chodo..inki ladai rokte hai n mujhe inse introduce karwao.. 

Swayam:haan chal..excuse me..   

Sharon:bolo..  

Swayam: agar aapka ho gaya ho toh chale...

Sharon:wht do u mean ki aapka ho gya ho..u.. 

Swayam: arre tum aise hi bina matlab ladti rhti ho... 

Sharon:u..

tina n riya(together):  chup..

Tina:  bas karo aab miss. Super hot..

Riya:aap bhi bhaiya.. 

Tina:  chale aab jahan aap leke jane ke liye itna excited the.. 

Swayam: haan..chalo..n sorry all of u.. 

Sharon:  u must be.. 

Tina:  mi$s. Super hot..bas aab chalo..(they all sit in swayam's car n moves towards deir destination) 

precap:socha nhi abhi tak..Star 


sorry for chotu update..

new readers  for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:12am

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Awesome update
thanks for pm


Edited by reet_26 - 14 October 2012 at 9:52am

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 4:22am | IP Logged
amazing update...
nd
dis tym swayam was luking at sharon wid his mouth open) riya(whisper): swayam bhaiya..muh bandh karo..isse pehle makhi gus jaye..LOLLOL
nd Swayam: haan chal..excuse me.. Sharon: bolo.. Swayam: agar aapka ho gaya ho toh chale.. Sharon: wht do u mean ki aapka ho gya ho..u.. Swayam: arre tum aise hi bina matlab ladti rhti ho... Sharon: u.LOL
riya nd tina both setup...hahahahROFL
amazing pls update soon...

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Smileso sweettt just loved it...kriya hug i loved but vo chotta tha ...always kriyansh rock Winkand swaron fightLOL tina and riya are such a cute and imp highlights of ur update next time vant a bada updateTongue

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by karthikasekhar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330066"><font size="6">Smileso sweettt just loved it...kriya hug i loved but vo chotta tha ...always kriyansh rock Winkand swaron fightLOL tina and riya are such a cute and imp highlights of ur update next time vant a bada updateTongue</font></font>

nxt tym pakka bada wala..abhi mobile se kiya isliya chotu tha..sorry
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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Woww. . .
Super update. . . .
Kriyaansh ka chotu sa part was super cute. .
He he he swaron ki cute fight was nice. . .
Tina and riya r like cherry on the cake. . .
Chalo jaldi se nxt update dena. . . . .
Thanks 4 d chotu bt cute update. . . .

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
sorry ka mantra japte rehte hoROFL
swaym bhaiya muh band karo varna makhkhi chali jayegiROFL
just loved d update
plz di next update soon & than for PM

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Thanx fr d pm:))
An awesum updte
continue soon...

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