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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 21)

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Wth . . . . Those boys were jerks,,,, cheapsters Angry
bas gals ko use karne ka shock hai . . . . Psycho guys Pinch
pehle gals ko gf banao,,,, insult kar de toh humilate karo . . . D'oh
& sab ussi ko galat samajh rahe hai . . . . . Un ba**@**s ko nhi Censored
achha hua jo sharon ne rey ko sab bta diya Smile
reyam are katrina crazy LOL
yay . . . . They gonna meet again Big smile

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Wow. . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Ohh. . , . . . .
Kriya k sath itna sab hua. . . . .
I feel so sorry 4 her. . . .
I jst love d way rey told ki voh purani kriya ko vapas laake rahega. . .
Thankz 4 d pm. .
nxt part jaldi update krna. . . .
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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
awesome...pm me too wheneve updated plz
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:21am | IP Logged
wow... kriya's past was sad
but rey started liking her...Embarrassed
thanks for the pmSmile
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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 2:05am | IP Logged

same day at night...

In kriya's house:

(kriya thinking abt d moment wen he n rey were together n feeling guilty for her behaviour n den her li'l sis tina enters)

tina: miss. cutie pie..

kriya: hmm..

tina: us ladke ke barei mei soch rhi ho..

kriya: haan, mera matlab nhi nhi.. kaun ladka.. mei kisi ladke ko nhi janti..

tina(teasingly): kaun ladka.. mujhe sab pata hai..uss makeup ki dukaan... sorry sorry..

kriya: tina tumhe kitni baar kaha na sharon ko makeup ki dukaan...nhi kha karo

tina: acha..srry.. miss super hot.. ne mujhe bataya tumhari aur un ladko ki ladai ke barei mei..mujhe batao kaun hai woh mei usse batati hu..

kriya: arre kuch nhi kiya unhone.. baksh de unhe.. ye sharon bhi naa..

tina: ok.. aap keh rhi ho toh chor deti hu..

kriya; bas kar aab apni nautanki.. chal aab so jaa..

tina; haan.. woh kal meri p.t.m hai oh mamma busy hai toh aapko mere sath school chalna hai..

kriya: mei tere school nhi.. mujhe kal college bhi toh jana hai...

tina; plz..plz.. half day le lena..plz..

kriya: acha theek hai.. chal so jaa aab.. gud nite..sweet dreams..

tina: gud nite.. n un dono ladke mei se aapke fav. vale ke sweet dreams..

kriya: besharmi ki hadd hoti hai tina.. now shut u'r mouth n sleep.. warna kal tumhari p.t.m mei..

tina: nhi plz.. sorry..plz

kriya: ok..now sleep well...

In rey's house:

(rey thinking abt how to regain kriya's trust in frndship den riya enter's)

riya: bhaiya.. kya soch rhe ho.. kuch chahiye..

rey: nhi..ek min. meri pyari behna.. tune mujhe abhi kya bhulaya..

riya: bhaiya..

rey: kya

riya: bhaiya..

rey: wah.. yeh word sunne ke liye mere kaan taras gaye the...

riya: aap mujse badhe ho toh bhaiya hi bulaungi  naa..

rey: aab butering karna bandh kar n seedhi tarah se bata kya baat hai..

riya: woh .. naa woh..

rey: jaldi.. jitni jaldi pranks karti hai utni jaldi...

riya: woh mumma chahti hai ki aap kal mere sath p.t.m pe chalo mere school..

rey: toh .. usme nayi baat kya hai..

riya: theek hai.. par plz meri complain matt karna..plz..

rey: acha beta.. isliye itna bhaiya bhaiya kar rhi hai.. woh toh tujhe pange lene se pehle sochna chahiye tha..

riya: plz..plz..  aab nhi karungi plz.. aap jo kahoge woh karungi..plz..

rey: pakka jo kahunga woh manegi naa.. 

riya: haan..promise..

rey: theek hai.. chal ja aab..

riya: aap kya soch rhe the..

rey: kuch khaas nhi..acha tu yeh bata ki agar kisi ladki se frndship karni ho toh kaise kare..

riya: kya?aapko kisi ladki se.. strange.. pehli baar.. yeh kya ho gaya hai aapko..

rey: nhi nhi.. mujhe nhi.. voh toh voh... voh swayam ko krni hai.. mujhe nhi..

riya: acha.. frndship karni hai toh .. usse ache se baat karo.. uski help karo.. usse believe kar vao ki aap usske ache frnd ban sakte ho n phir frnd se kuch zyada bhi..

rey: haan? kya frnd se kuch zyada?? tu yhi sab sochti rehti hai kya...Angry

 riya: nhi.. voh jab mei n meri frnd library jate hai naa.. toh wahan jo badi didi baithi hoti hai na.. woh ek book padhti hai.. usme yeh sab likha tha.. ham bhi unke sath voh book padte hai..

rey: kya? aaj kal chote chote bache bhi..god knows kya hoga inka.. acha ja aab.. mujhe bhi sona hai..

riya: room tak chodne chalo.. agar bhoot aa gaya toh..

rey: toh phir aayi kyu thi waise bhoot bhi tere pranks ko dekh ke darr jayega.. chal aab..(they both reach towards the riya room)

riya: bye.. gud nite...

rey: bye..(suddenly rey shouts)''bhoot bhoot''

riya(scarely in her room):mumma.. bhoot..(rey chuckled n was abt to go wen riya hold his hand n was crying)

riya: mei akele nhi aap yahan so jao sofe pe plz..

rey: hey bhagwaan yeh maine apne liye hi mussibat khadi kar li.. bhootni ko bhoot se dara ke khud hi bhootni ke room mei urgh.. aab kya karu.. maa uth gayi toh bahut gussa karengi...

riya: plz bhaiya..

rey: ok chal aab..

riya(smiling): thnk u.. gud nite..

rey: bad nite..chudail dreams..

(nxt morning all of dem get ready n reach the school.. tina n riya saw each other n run towards each other)

tina: hii.. rii..(tina call riya rii n riya call her tee)

riya: hii tee..( rey n kriya too come towards dem but didn't notice each other frstly..)

tina: rii yeh meri dii..kriya dii..

riya: hello dii..i mean miss cutie pie..

tina: hello.. tina.. n isne tumhe bhi mera naam bata diya..

riya: we both r best frnds n harr  baat share karte hai..(n dey both hug.. n rey n kriya den notice each  other.. but didn't say anything)

rey: tum logon ka ho gaya ho.. toh mei bhi yahan hu.. remember..

riya: aap koi celebrity thodi naa ho.. ruko karwa hi deti hu introduco..

rey: tu rehne de..kriya tum yahan?

riya n tina: aap dono ek dusre ko jante ho..

kriya: haan, woh hum same college mei hai..n meri mom busy thi isliye..mei tina ki p.t.m attend karni aayi..

tina: bhaiya aapka naam..

rey: mera naam reyaansh hai..par tum mujhe rey bula sakti ho..

tina(in mind): toh yeh hai jiski  ke sath dii ki ladai hui thi...

rey: toh chale..

riya n tina: sath mei chalte hai..

rey n kriya: okk..

(they meet deir teachers n get good remarks but every teacher saya dat dey both r very talkative.. after meeting all the teachers wen dey were in cooridoor)

rey: kitni batein karti ho tum dono..

tina: batein karna koi bann thodi na hai aur mam toh aise hi bolti hai..

(rey smiling listenin all dis n in his mind'mei bhi kisse batei naa karne ke liye keh rha tha jab ki iski behan hi baatcutter hai n came out frm his thought wen kriya scold tina)

kriya:tina bass.. bahut ho gaya aabji teacher ne kaha n phir se tu shuru ho gayi.. aab mujse baat mat karna.. apne se bade se aise baat krte hai..

tina: sorry dii..plz.. aapko pata hai na mei aapse baat kiye bina nhi reh sakti..plz..plz..

rey:arre kriya usne kuch nhi kaha mujhe..n pakka yeh riya hi batei karwati hogi isse..yeh bahut shararti hai..ek dum 'tutu the monkey' ki tarah.. 

riya:(get angry): haan ei karwati hu.. usse batei khush..mei sabse buri hu rey..theek hai.. mei jaa rhi hu jab tumhari meri complain karna khatam ho jaye toh aa jana car mei(n she move frm dere towards car, crying)

rey,tina n kriya: riya.. ruku riya..

tina: bhaiya aap bahut gande ho.. aapki wajah se woh mujse bhi baat nhi kar rhi.. mei aap se kbhi baat nhi karungi..(n she too moves)

kriya: mujhe toh waise hi aapse baat nhi karni..n kya zarurat thi usse tutu the monkey bulane ki..(n she was too abt too move wen rey caught her by her hand n stop her)

rey:plz tum  toh mat jao..plz sorry plz..

kriya: haan par mera hath..

rey: sorry woh..

kriya: itz okk..

rey:plz meri hlp karo in dono ko manane ki..plz..

kriya:mei kaise..

rey:tum toh janti hogi naa grls ko kya acha lagta hai plzz..

kriya:haan but..okk..i'll(n dey disscuss d plan)

rey; thnk u kriya..thnk u..u'r great...(n hug her wen kriya through him back..)

rey: sorry woh exitement mei..

kriya: itzz okk..toh evening mei park mei milte hai 5:30 p.m baje..

rey: done...bye..

kriya: bye..(they both move towards deir car..) 

Rey(in his mind): kitni hlpfull hai yeh miss. baatcutter...oh man ..i ..no rey..abhi nhi..katrina pe focus kar..isse phle koi aur usse le jaye...

kriya(in her mind): hlp th mei kar rhi hu..par mujhe usse sorry bhi kehna hai mere rude behaviour ke liye..park mei bol dungi done...

(they sat in deir car n reach deir homes widout talking to deir young sisters)


precap: kriya huging rey n swaron fighting in the park...Star


pheww..finally done..srry for typo erors..

hope u like it...n plz like n comment..

dey r very valuable too me..

new readers  for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 22 June 2013 at 1:27am

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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
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riya i love u cutie pie Wink

Thumbs Upwowww so cute update u  shown a awsm relation ship betwn bro-sis and sis -sis ..rey and kriya s fab and higlight one ..riya cryng that secn made me to remmmeber by brother...Clapawsm one riya u shown a true realtion ...Tongue


Edited by karthikasekhar - 02 October 2012 at 6:41am

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Loved it, awesome. You described it perfectly.
The dance battle and KriYam and ShaRey were a good call to write upon. Smile 
You're an amazing writer. But I have a small advice for you, please use font colors that would make it easier for readers to read. Green has the flash which makes it difficult to read. Embarrassed
In all, I loved it. Thanks for the PM and keep on sending me PMs. 

Aditi

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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquilia_Aditi

Loved it, awesome. You described it perfectly.
The dance battle and KriYam and ShaRey were a good call to write upon. Smile 
You're an amazing writer. But I have a small advice for you, please use font colors that would make it easier for readers to read. Green has the flash which makes it difficult to read. Embarrassed
In all, I loved it. Thanks for the PM and keep on sending me PMs. 

Aditi

yup sure..i'll do it ...

thnx for telling...Smile

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