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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 14)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
nice one...
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
waiting for dance battle

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged

mei aa gayi vapas..

so here's d update.. spclly dedicated to..karthika dii... 

thnx for all d  likes n sweet comments...

swayam:haan darr lagta hai..

rey:wht.. oh god.. leave it...(rey facing towards krisha)

rey:itni late??

sharon:woh.. ahh .. sorry actually kriya fell down n her leg got injured.. so we went to dispensery..

swayam:abhi se itne bahane..

sharon(in anger)..we'r not making any excuses..(rey luking at kriya)

rey:r u fy9??

kriya: yaa i'm..( sharon interrupts)

sharon:no she isn't..

rey;yaa i can understand.. she can rest.. we'll have battle sum other time..

swayam: haan.. taki baad mei koi zyada na bole..(krisha fuming wid anger)

kriya:no,chalenge mane diya hai. toh looser kaun hai batana hi padega..

sharey:but..

kriya:letz start..(no one want to argue wid her so dey agree)

KRISHA VS REYAM

d battle strt krisha showing deir sexy n hawtt dance moves.. ( rey luking towards kriya.. n swayam was totally shocked to see sharon dancing.. dat his mouth left open ... rey closes his mounth n dey too show sum of deir awesum moves... their battle was so tough n long dat all d students of d cllge were watching it frm outside n enjoying it...mean while kriya was going to slip but rey caught her by her waist...n den deir l2h2(lukluk hawa hawa)whereas sharon dancing in anger n muving towards swayam..swayam was totally suprised to see her dancing..sharon ka rodraras itna zyada ho gaya dat swayam stop n give up..  sharon: aab kaun hai looser..

 swayam:woh tum woh bahut.. 

sharon(still luking at swayam):  kriya letzz go..( rey n kriya came back to deir senses)

(sharon now facing towards kriya n lukingat her leg) ..aab tum seedhi tarah se despensery chalo..

kriya:okk chal..(she muves frm deir wid sharon but luking back towards rey. rey cuming frm his lost world muves towads krisha n ask if dey need help..)

sharon:hlp tum apne frnd ki karo..we don't need

rey: plz.. let me help u.. i'm really sorry frm his side.. plz sharon plz.. aab toh hum frnds bhi hai..

kriya:sharon tum dono frnds?kab??

sharon:jab u n dat so called trusty ka beta jhagad rahe the tab..

rey:yaa. plz can i..plzz..

sharon;okk..

rey:thnx( n he take one of kriya's arm n put it around his neck n dey start muving.. kriyaansh luking at each other..n dere was a pin dropsilence whch was broken by sharon's phone..)

sharon:rey i have to attend dis call itzz urgent n imp. so can u take her to dispensery plz..

rey:yaa sure..

sharon;thnx..(n she muves frm dere)( rey trying to take her.. but seeing pain in her eyes he took her in his arms)

kriya:REY PLZ.. LEAVE ME.. I CAN WALK PLZZ..(rey just lost in her n nor rplying)

kriya:rey plzz..rr..

rey;shh..(putting his finger on her lips.. n lost in each other dey finally reach dispensery..but no one was dere..)

kriya;yahan koi nhi hai.. aap jao i'll manage n waise bhi sharon aati hogi..

rey;it'z okk let me do it for u..

kriya:no, no it'z okk..

rey;plzz..

kriya; rey..

rey;kriya(rey didn't listen to her n put a layer of tape on her mouthn hold his both hands..)

rey:aab tum chup rahogi.. 'baatcutter'..(dey both lost in each other..n after coming to deir senses rey chuckled at kriya's condition, after applying d tape.. he luk at her leg.. whch was totally red)

rey;toh yeh kuch nhi hua hai.. ekdum pagal ho tum.. aab kuch bol kyu nhi rhi..(n he luk at her n again laughed)

rey;sorry.. mei toh bhool hi gaya tha.. 'baatcutter'

(kriya acting to be angry n trying to talk wid him by her innocent eyes rey wasn't able to understand.. so he removed d tape..)

rey:aab bolo..

kriya;thnk god.. mei keh rhi thi mere hands chodo so dat i can remove d tape..it was too difficult for me to live widout talking n aap kya mujhe baatcutter bolte rehte.. ho.. mei bhi aab aapko linecutter bulaungi..

rey:ho gaya.. kitna bolti ho tum..

kriya;sorry'linecutter'

rey; baatcutter

 kriya;linecutter

rey:okk..okk..toh kya hum.. woh kya hum..

kriya;jaldi bolo..

rey:okk can we be frnds..

( tears rolled out in kriya's eyes n she kept thinking abt her past..n she tried to run frm dere but she fell down)

rey(worriedly):kriya.. wht happened .. r u fy9?

kriya:rey plz aap jao yahan se ...

rey:but..

kriya:plz.. rey.. plz..plz..( she was crying hardly)

rey: ok.. relax.. i'm going...(rey muves frm dere n hide near d door outside...)

kriya;kyu mere sath aisa hua universe ji kyu...


precap;d reason y kriya don't like to have boys as deir frnd's...

pheww... done..

.now.. comments.. plzz..

n nxt update after 4th oct. exams going on dat'z y...

new readers  for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 22 June 2013 at 1:22am

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Its was gud D tape scene LOL!!!!!! and
tthnxxx fr d pm
update ssooonnn... Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Awesome part Clap...
Kria ki leg mein pain hai but still she is dancing Ouch...
Ab KriSha ka dance dekh kar ReYam to heiran honge he Wink...
Haye Kriyansh lost in each other Day Dreaming...
Rey bandaging Kria Thumbs Up...
Usne uske mun pe tape laga di LOL...
But why is Kria afraid of making boys a friend ?Disapprove...
Waiting to know the reason...
Continue soon Smile.

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
it was awesome
i really liked the tape scene
loved it 
it was unique one

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roxxy47

Awesome part Clap...
Kria ki leg mein pain hai but still she is dancing Ouch...
Ab KriSha ka dance dekh kar ReYam to heiran honge he Wink...
Haye Kriyansh lost in each other Day Dreaming...
Rey bandaging Kria Thumbs Up...
Usne uske mun pe tape laga di LOL...
But why is Kria afraid of making boys a friend ?Disapprove...
Waiting to know the reason...
Continue soon Smile.

thnx...Wink

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Wow. . .
Awsome update. . . .
Krisha ka dance dekh ker reyum almost behosh . . . . . . . .
Ha ha ha. . . . . . . .
Kriyaansh ka scene was awsome. . . . .. . . .
Swayum lost in sharon. . . . . . . . .
Majnu kahi ka. . . . . . .
Yaar m egar to knw,
kriya ka past. . . . .
Plz nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . . .
Thankz 4 d pm. . .

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