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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 130)

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kanchi01

Update

seriously sabko update chahiyeShocked

Originally posted by nikkreyarshafan

ye kya tha
shravan ne kriya toh dhaka diya
rey ne kriya par trust nahi kiya
kriya lost her memory n rey left her without informing anyone n he dint even know abt kriya
sad update...
update soon...
dis tym happy wala plzzz
thnx fr d pm...

thank u so much



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 14 June 2013 at 9:14am
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update tym..

as promised on 14...

for mannu di..once againLOL.. sanju_arsha (idnt knw u'r real name) n shelly thnx for helping me at the last moment.. jab mere pc ne mera sath chod diyaROFLCry

n guys ripu jeet gya isliye bhi ye update..Dancing

enjoyBig smile


 4 months passed somehow...rey tried hard to forget everything n move on but was not able

too...wenever ho do something..it reminded him of her..he cried over nighs but

never ever called her...but he was damn angry for what she did..n his ego came in between

whenever he wanted to contact her...if she dn't call then why should he..if

swayam,sharon can call her than y can't she? moreover wen they call her..he became restless to

hear her voice just once..but no..she never came with an excuse to talk 

to him n he never allow swaron to speak about her..they tried alot but he would cut the call or

make any excuse...aftr many encounters..even they stopped trying..as 

they thought wen destiny dn't want wht can they do...but today he was getting more restless as he

heard herinnocent voice..he had called sharon to wish her for her 

birthday...n there he heard her calling her in her oh so cute voice..like she was a kid..damn..he so

badly wanted to hear her..he was hoping that if he had recorded

there convo. he can heard her voice but no he was so lost to do so...he tried to sleep..but it was

far away from his eyes..wenever he closed his eyes he would see her

crying like a baby or smiling or laughing over him..onlyb'coz of her he had got low grades in

college..b'coz in every paper..he was day dreaming about her...his mind

said forget her..she is ruining u'r life..n she must be move on but his heart was neither

less..,argued back she can't..she was and is u'r love..u never forget her n

thatz y itz affecting u..go back to her..n they'll end up fighting badly..like it was India vs Pakistan..n

no matter the one had to win..finally gathering some courage

he dailled her number but it wasn't working so he called on her landline..it ringed once n he cut

the call getting nervous..what would he say? n whether she will talk

to him or not? but gathering some more courage n making it clear he would say it was wrong

number,he again dialled the number..after along session of ringing finally 

someone picked up the call..it was some lady...may be her mother...hearing her..he cut the

call..after about 5 to 10 min. he again called..this tym it was not her mom

but neither her too..it was some boy on the other hand..disappointedly..he agin cut the call..n

decided to sleep..he make himself comfortable but her thoughts never

stopped cumin in his mind..he forcefully shut his,covered himself with a blanket n pilow on his

face n tried to sleep..but again he was not able to sleep..this damn 

mobile..he picked the call without chcking who was it..he was about to give a good

scolding..when he heard that angelic voice...a smile automaticaly spread on his lips

"hello" the speaker said rather whispered..

but rey was nowhere in mood to rply..he was so lost in her soothing voice..while the speaker

continued..

"sharon tu hai kya? ye tera nya no. hai/ mom ne kha 2 baar call aya..toh maine socha tu hi

hogi..mera kaam hua..tu doll layi?kisi ko btaya toh nhi na..plz kisiko btana

mat..tu kuch bol kyu nhi rhi" the speaker replied irritated..

but still didn't get any rply..loosing her temper she shouted..on the call..

"kaun hai? sharon tu hai toh rply kar" she said angrily...

this make rey came out of his trance but not completely..

"kriya!!" he said softly..still smiling..

she closed her eyes listening to the familar voice n the flashes came in front like a movie ..all she

could mutter was..

"rey" n she left the phone n fell down along..

seeing this her parents came n tried to wake her up..hearing the voices rey became worried..he

spoke back but there was no response...n the call get disconnected..he

panicked n in haste called sharon...within one ring she picked up the call..

"haan rey"she said

"shar..kriya vo usse call karo"rey replied still worried..

"what??"sharon replied suprise..how cum now he is worried about her? did he got to know

everthing? but how?..on the other hand rey composed himself..before rplying..

"voh abhi muje call aya pta nhi she was saying ki tum uske liye koi doll lane vali ho..so.."rey

tried to divert his saying..

"haan but usne tumhe hi kyu call kiya? after so many tym..hmm..ya fir..tumne usse call kiya."she replied teasing him..

"stop it sharon..just call her..i heard some shouting so i just told u to ask about her..i dn't care

how is she is now?itz just.. vo..vo mere friend ne galti se uska  no. dial kiya n i think she saw it

in id caller n call back.." rey replied irritated n defending himself...

"oh toh maine kab pucha ki kisne call kiya..n it means u still had her number.."she said wen

rey was about to shout ..she again replied..

"ok rey.. i'll call her..n will tell u what happened to her...bye"n she immediately cut the cal

before he can speak..

rey was getting restless..he was walking in his room..to n fro. at late 2 am..after about 1 hr. rey got

the msg frm sharon..that she is fy9...to which he get reliefed n replied that..i don't care...

sharon saw the msg n smiled...n placed her mobile aside n kissed kriya forehead..yes..she was

at kriya's home as soon as she came to knw about the incident she runned towards her

house..without caring anything n was suprised n happy too as she heard her taking

rey's name...

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days passed n rey finally decided to go back n face whatever came in front of him..swaron got to

know about this were very happy..rey joined the college back but never

let anyone speak about kriya..he would always walk away or ignore when anyone dare too..but

the thing which irritated him was he couldn't see her neither in his class 

as he joined the same section of them earlier..swaron were there..but where is she? may be she

had changed her section..but no he had almost chcked every section n 

corner of college but couldn't spot her anywhere..now the only option left was she must have

changed the college like he did earlier..he was sad but ignored n make his

mind to belive that itz her life..he don't love her anymore..she can do whatever came to her

mind..as she did earlier..n ried to got engrossed with others...days passed

n he was enjoying again but whatever his mind says his heart still missed her,her essence,her

innocence,cuteness..his heart still beat for her..he knows he love her but

his mind never accepted...


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one day he was passing by Rehersal hall when he heard a couple talking...

girl: yaar reyaansh singhania is back..i'm so happy..he is the hawtty..

guy: haan..par reyaansh ko dkh ke kriya ki yaad aati hai..swayam sharon , kriya reyaansh they

had a perfect group..i hope vo couple hote..Just like us..

guy said trying to bring his girlfriend back to reality.. LOL

girl: haan yar muje kriya ke barei mei soch ke bahut bura lagta hai pta nhi kaisi hogi voh..us

din ke baad..

guy: haan that worst day of her lyf..hey dn't worry hum sharon se uske barein puch lenge n ho

sake toh usse mine bhi jayenge...

guy tried to cheer her up..

girl: haan..but promise me agar mere sath aisa hua toh tum muje kabhi chodke nhi jaoge..

guy: ye tum kaisi batei kar rhi ho?

girl; sorry..itz just dat muje kriya ke liye bahut bura lag rha hai..but u promise me..

guy: arre haan i promise u..now letz go to class..

n they moved from there leaving a confused rey behind..


likes n comments plz...

for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:31am

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
amazing story..!!

sorry that i read it soo late.. but yaar its soo damn amazing loved it..!!

d way u juzz changed d entire storyline in an update was a sudden shock.. good change of track..!!

keep updating sooner n keep pm'ing meSmile


Edited by namratajadhav - 14 June 2013 at 10:55am

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:35am | IP Logged
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First off all don't say thanks pagli.. its fine Wink
Shocked Ripu jeet gaya!?? yayy!! didn't see last epi
Coming to the story...
Mwahh riyuu!! kya likha yar!!!
ending was superb! the couple being kriyaansh's friends
are feeling sorry for them.. cute
loved the small phone convo and sharon teasing rey
and then rey's 'i don't care reply' with sharons smile Wink
Finallyy sharavans out!
Amazing updatee!!

Edited by shelly_Arsha - 14 June 2013 at 10:11am

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
its superawesome
as the events changed in this chappy my emotions also changed from time to time
i just loved it
i really loved it
next kab update karegi? haan pata hai abhi hi tune update kiya hai butkya karu ruka hi ni ja raha
plz update soon aur wait ni ho raha
plz update n sharon ko aisa ni karna chahiye tha 
rey ko sab kuch bata dena chahyie 
i am waiting


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