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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 120)

RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KUSHA14

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by KUSHA14

hawww ...


sorry riyu di for such a late comment ..

maine story mai bahot kuch miss kar diya ...


pehle toh galat baat no tiya Cry

missing them ...

and rey nautanki .. asli dramebaaz hai ... LOL

ohh ... kahani mai ek naya twist ..

evil ki entry ...

kitna ganda hai shravan ...

kriya ko blackmailing kar raha ai ...

abb yeh knsi pics aa gai beech mai ??????

in all loved all the 3 parts of the story ...
sory yr people wasn't liking tiya.. N thnk u finaly tera cmnt mila


oh welcm ...chalo koi ni tiya nai toh riya[aap] sai LOL

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RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 June 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KUSHA14

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by KUSHA14

after 14????????
i'l try agr aaj de pau


aap try ni karogi aapko aaj dena padega ...
okays 10 pm pakka

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RiyaHayMurKreYa IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7378

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 10:02am | IP Logged

hii everyone...

for a while sending pm frm my id

as pm's se link nhi ja rha sabko still a newbee..Ouch 

 here's the update...

spclly for tridevies...LOL

mannu di,shelly n kusha..Big smile

2 days came on n go neither do rey tried to talk to kriya nor kriya..they both were engrossed in

preparing for the wedding ceremoney..even kriya had told sharon to 

stay mum...n vowed her..whenever both came face to face rey would move or kriya..swayam was

being doubtful as many a tyms he saw kriya n shravan together..he had even

told rey about it..but in return he got a great shouting from rey..finally it was the most important

day.. "THE WEDDING" all were busy in preparations...reyam had gone

out to bought the last moment things while krisha were luking at the decorations n the things

which pandit ji wants...everthing was done n everyone was getting ready

as it was a noon wedding due to some reason..


kriya was getting ready in the room seating all glommy in front of the the same tym rey

passed by n saw her lyk dat..his eyes directly fell on her bare back

whch only had a few dories on it..aftr gawking on her finaly his eyes reached her face whch was

pale n glommy..she took her head in her hands...while rey just luked at

her..n move forward..n she sat like that for a while...

k: i'm sorrry... rey...

n she move to go outside wen she tripped over sharon's heel whch she had thrown in hurry n fell

down at the door..she luked at her elbow whch was bleeding due to the

cut whch she got just now due to the fall n the glass piece whch was responsible for it...she

remembered how rey had put the tape on her mouth wen they were in 

despensery n smiled...but soon it got vanished on cuming in reality...she went to attend the

marriage still worried what shravan would do nxt...but to her utter 

shock he didn't do anything during the whole marriage...the marriage got sucessfuly over n kriya

smiled as she'l go back to her place..she hugged sharon tightly..

sharon too resiprocated knowing the fact why was she so happy..while shravan smirked whch

didn't go unnoticed by swayam while during whole marriage rey kept himself 

busy in chcking the arrangements or sitting alone n glancing at kriya...finally marriage was over

..kriya went to her too change n leave hurriedly frm this place 

before shravan noiced as he was busy in the afterwards rasam's on the other hand rey was too

busy in packing the stuff n was eagerly waiting for the clock to strike

7 so that he can meet person n beat him till death if he was wrong n wht if he was rite was going

through his mind? n swayam was still busy in aum last moment 

things..taking the chance shravan msgd kriya frm swyams mobile... n so do kriya replied n he

deleted the chat n put his mobile back to the nearby table...finally the 

clock strike 7..kriya went to the teris as he got the msg frm swayam's mobile that he came to knw

everything about shravan whereas rey moved to the garden waiting for 

the person n he saw kriya roaming on the teris as it was oposite to th garden but couldn't listen

wht she was mumbling..but he was sure by her expressiong he can say 

that she was talking to her very own universe ji..he chuckled over his thoughts...only one word

that he can say about her at that moment.. "baatcutter" soon the

person appeared in front of him n he laid his eyes on the pics he was showing..anger raged n

perfectly visible in his eyes... he luked at kriya who was standing there 

with shavy her back was facing him n her eyes were covered with a blind fold n she was

laughing as shavy was tickling her...he let go of tht person n 

immediately sat in his car n drove off...while shravan noticed this n opened kriya's blind fold...

(p.s: pics wre those wen tum sabne muje galiya di thi the second day wen shravan entered

her room before sharey n den all dat just a bit edited making it more closer)

k; swayam ye kya

she left it uncompleted as she finally turned around n faced the person...fear clearly visible in her


k: shrav.shravan tum yha ?

sh: yaa swayam ne tumhe yha bulaya na bt sirf mere liye u knw i tld him to do dat for me..

k: no..

sh: yea he is my bro u c n now let me complete my work for whch i'm here...

he moved forward..with the smirk on his face until she reached the end of the terris...n leaned

forward while she moved backward.. he smirked n pulled himself back n

turned around as kriya straightened herself only to get a push frm shravan such that she fell frm

the terris...

sh; good bye miss ghai..the revenge is over now..

n then he heard a was none other than swayam who had a doubt on him n though

followed him to the terris n saw him pushing kriya..

(ps: he didn't heard there convo)

sw: kriya!!!

he moved forward but it was too late glaring at shravan n ran down..telling each n everyone to call

ambulance..while he immediately went out only to c a struggling 

kriya trying to get up holding her head..he lifted her..while she luked at him caressed his cheek

with those red hands leaving mark of her blood on his face...n then 

closed her eyes...soon the ambulance came n they reached to the hospital..she was taken to the emergency ward...swayam informed her parents n it was decided they

immediately runned frm there house so that they can reach as soon as possible..he even tried to

call rey but his no. was unreachable...on te other hand wen the matter

was informed to police they immediately went to caught shravan only to not find him

the whole city as per there contacts...two days went n kriya wasn't

conscious..doctors were trying hard but as she was already weak it wasn't working..swayam tried

to call at rey's home..thinkingmay be he had gone back n luckily his 

mom picked n told him dat he left india n went london for further studies n his bussiness training

as his father wanted..this was a big blow...he kept on fridgeting 

with his would he tell kriya about it? n on top of dat he got the disgusting secret to

be revealed to him about kriya's post..he was guilty that his 

cousin had done all this just to make her lyf terrible..swayam told sharon the reason about rey's he himslf dnt knw y he had left all of sudden dat too 

without a word..kriya's family already arrived n fired a case against shravan but aftr a lot of

searching the police concluded that he must have died or left the n 

they'll still not back out frm searching...


aftr about 2 more days she was examined her n told dem dat she had memory

loss n will behave lyk a be patient..sharon was the frst one to 

enter her room..even leaving her parents behind as they still were in shock while swayam tried to

hold them...shravan mom's n the newly wedded bride was all the tym 

there helping them,calming them down.. b'coz of the guilt..


inside the room:

sharon entered crying n saw kriya sitting with a pout on her face...n seeing here n there..

sh: kriya

kriya luked at her frm head to toe while sharon approached her n hugged n kriya tied to pull

herself back..
k: tum kaun ho? chodo muje..mumma...

she finally pulled back ..for a moment sharon forgot that kriya was no more the older kriya...but

soon reality struck her n she tried to wipe of her tears...

sh: sorry..

k: itz ok.. but dubara mat krna...waise tum kaun ho?

sh: mei tumhari dost sharon...

k: meri dost..

she thinked for a while n den smile sheepleshly puting her thumb in her mouth..

k: lagta hai muje short tym memory loss ho gya hai tbhi mei tumhe bhool gyi..

n she gigled at her own thought..while sharon just luked at him aftr a few seconds kriya finally

spoke to break out the silence..

k: but muje sach mei tum yaad nhi aa rhi...aur mera naam vo bhi nhi...

she said as she tried to remember whch cause her headache n she hold her head bw her hands

n pulled her hair tried to ease her pain..sharon moved forward seeing her 

lyk dat...

sh: hey..koi baat nhi vo tum thodi bimar hona isliye take rest docotar aate honge..

she ruffled her hear trying to ease her pain...listening the wrd "DOCTOR" shhe immediately

withdrew her hand..

k: nhi doctor nhi..vo injection lagayenge fir red red blood niklega aur dard hoga plz..muje tum

yaad ho haan tum sharon ho na meri frnd...dkha muje yaad hai plz doctor nhi

sh: shh..haan tumhe sab yaad hai chup ho jao..

k: par doctor nhi

sh: haan ok no doctor..acha tum so jao baad mei baat karte hai..

k: promise tum doctor ko nhi bhejogi..

sh: kk..promise..

kriya layed down n obeyed sharon n soon slept..while sharon couldn't cntrl anymore ..she went

out n saw swayam standing n immediately hugged him n cried her heart out..

sh: vo bhool gyi hume...sabko..muje bhi sirf shravan ki wajah se...nhi pehchanti vo hume

she cried n tears too made there way out frm swayam's eyes...

likes n coments plz...

still for pm's buddy me

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:29am

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moon_cupcake IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11718

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 10:06am | IP Logged

Amazing update

loved it..

gosh uss shravan ko sach mein maar de yaar...

acha huya swayam got to know the truth...

gosh kriya in memeory loss and rey gayab kisi jagah mein *name bhool gayi*

I want the next update ASAP!

iss baar sorry nahi bola meine for the late unres...LOL

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 June 2013 at 6:34am

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shelly_Arsha Goldie

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Posts: 2425

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
WTH!! THAT SHRAVAN!! kriya ko dhakka Shocked seriously..
OMG.. kriyas memory loss Cry aur rey london mein??!
he didn't even listen out to kriya and trust her Unhappy
Rey ko jaldi wapis ley aao!!
atleast that cheap shravan will be seen less, well i hope so anyway
hope to see kriya well soon!
Riyaa!! Solve everything soon.. nai toh mujhe jaanti hai na? LOL
hehe Amazingg updatee Clap
Update soon and do pm!! Smile

~ Shelly

Edited by shelly_Arsha - 09 June 2013 at 4:34pm

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kriapatel Goldie

Joined: 07 November 2012
Posts: 2278

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
How can anybody do that
shravana ne kria ko dhaka mara
how could he?
n rey ase hi chala gaya
ek bar bhi trust nahi kiya kria pe n true janne ki koshish bhi nahi ki
yahi tha uska pyar itna hi trust he use kria par
n poor kria has memory lost
i feel pity for her

Edited by kriapatel - 09 June 2013 at 12:09pm

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Neha_KR IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2428

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
awsum update
OMG kriya lost her memory Cry Cry

Edited by Neha_KR - 11 June 2013 at 9:13am

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Kanchi.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 December 2009
Posts: 6830

Posted: 09 June 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged

Amazing update...Big smile

Hate dat jerk shravan...Angry

aur rey london chala gaya...Unhappy

bechari kriya lost her memory...CryCry

lekin ab jaldi kriyaansh ko milao...!!!

overall superb update...Smile

amazingly wtitten...Clap

update soon...

thnx 4 de pm...

Edited by kanchi01 - 12 June 2013 at 12:38am

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