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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 108)

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by karanikakrey

OMG!!
ye kya tha ??
kria ko kyun itna torchur... :-(
anyway waiting for the next update eagerly..
thanks for the pm
thank u,update will be by 8pm

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
that bas***d ... Angry
gadha, ullu kahin ka 
waiting to know sharey's reaction
thanxx for the pm ...
please update soon 
waiting 

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please jaldi update karo na 

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
wait nhi ho raha hai

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:10am | IP Logged
kab karoge update ??

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjori

that bas***d ... Angry
gadha, ullu kahin ka 
waiting to know sharey's reaction
thanxx for the pm ...
please update soon 
waiting 

give me an hr. i'm typing will update within an hr.

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjori

please jaldi update karo na 

thodi der 

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
hi people..

here's the nxt update...

i'm realy sorry but it is necessary for the story

n this tym there is a kriyaansh moment but a very chotu one..

hope u'll like it...

enjoy.. Big smile




"kriya" sharey said in unison..

she opened her eyes n luked at them n then around herself..shravan had left..both sharey came

inside.. rey cupped her face while sharon closed the door..n joined them

r:kya hua? tum ro kyu rhi ho? aur aise aankhein bandh karke (cut by)

sh: rey vo

k: vo rey muje theek nhi lag rha bas thod chakkar sa aa rha tha..aur sur dard ho rha hai isliye..


she said squeezing sharon's hand n pressing her fore head with her one hand...

r; phle kyu nhi btaya? chalo doctor ke pass chalte hai..

k: nhi nhi..i'm f9 ..itna bhi nhi ho rha thoda rest karungi toh theek ho jayega...

r: par..

k: plz..

r; ok..take rest..

k: hmm..aab tum jao

r; shar tumhe mujse kuch baat krni thi..

sh: haan.vo na vo..kya hai na vo

k; vo yhi muje dard ho rha tha isse yhi btana tha aur kuch nhi haina shar..

sh: haan bas yhi..shi keh rhi hai kriya..

she replied fumbling..

r: acha theek hai chalo aab tum rest karo n shar kya tum plz bhar swayam ko bol ke kriya ke

liye

medicine mangva dogi..

sh: ok..

she left leaving kriyaansh alone..

rey immediately closed the door n lifted kriya in his arms n took her to the bed...he was shocked

too see dat she didn't protest..but saw her luking deep in his eyes..

he make her comfortable on the bed n laid beside her hugging her..while she was just luking at

him still lost..unknown of the tears velled in her eyes..

r: baatcutter zyada dard ho rha hai?

he said wiping her tears n kissed her forehead he immediately hugged her ightly n cried..


k: hmm..

r: toh chalo na doctor ke pass chalte hai..

k: nhi..agar aise rahungi toh theek ho jaungi..

n they shared an eyelock whch was broken by rey..he luked here n there for a while n again at

her..he can see the pain in her eyes bt don't know wht she was going 

through..shee took both his hand n wrapped them around her waist n closed her eyes..he was

shocked by her sudden action bt was loving it..she rubbed her cheek with his

while his hand immediately went inside her top making some random designs..he too equally

responded to her action..she kissed his cheek..while he was so lost that he 

started tracing her neck with lips till her shoulder wen she felt kriya pulling back..he immediately

removed his hands while she mantained some distance..it was nt dat

she dn't want it..she want him to remove every dirty mark of that cheapster but as she opened her

eyes he saw that cheapster peeping from the washroom behind rey n 

telling her to stop or else he would kill him..and she immediately pulled back...rey too sat straight

r: sorry kriya vo mei..i'm sorry plz..

k: rey jao yha se..

she said still luking at the washroom..he followed her gaze but didn't find anyone as shravan hide

himself..he again luked at her to say sumthing but she shouted at him..

k: tumnesunna nhi jao yha se..just get out..

r: kriya meri baat toh sunno..

he said holding her hands but he pushed them away with such a force dat her nail dugged near

his cheek n it started bleeding..

r: oouch...

he hold his cheek..she was about to soothe him but shravan camea li'l outside giving her an

angry luk unnoticed by rey..

k: get out reyaansh

she shouted..pushing him whch lead to another incident ..his head hit the table...kriya came to

help him wen he forward his hand to stop...n by one he hold his head

k: rey i'm (cut by)

r: itz ok..i should better leave i'm sorry for what i did..


he said irritated n getting up

k: rey meri baat toh suno

he didn't bother to listen hern went outside..she was following him n aws about to step outside

wen a pair of arms pulled her inside locking the door such that she 

fell down..it was none other than shravan...he sat infront of her n hold her hands tightly

sh: oh toh rey se tum itna pyar krti ho tum..aaj tak muje toh kbhi apne kareeb aane nhi

diya..haan iska matlab tum us waqt natak kar rhi thi na..

he twisted her hand n closed her mouth with his hand...

sh: aab suno tumhe rey ko apne aap se dur krna hoga..samji tum...aur gar nhi kiya toh u knw

mei kya kar sakta hu...

n he removed his hand frm her mouth..she was crying badly..

k: plz..aisa kuch mat krna plz..jaisa tum kahoge mei waisa hi karungi ..kuch mat krna rey ko..

sh: aur haan uss sharon ko bhi achi tarah se samja dena ki apna muh band rkhe

he get up n left...as he steeped outside swayam saw him moving to his opposite direction

sw: shavy kriya ke room mei..strange..

he entered kriya's room n saw her lying on the floor unconscious..

sw: kriya...

he lifted her n make her comfortable on the bed n called the doctor...

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aftr about an hr. kriya woke up n saw everyone gathered in her room exept rey..

sw: aab kaisa feel kar rhi ho?

k: f9

she smiled weakly...n sat on the bed..sharon gave her medicine while swayam's masi fed her

food..she was feeling relly well to see the affection...but soon it turned into fear

shravan: dkha kriya meri mom tumhara kitna khayal rakh rhi hai...rakhengi kyu nhi tum (cut

by)

sharon: vo rakhengi hi swayam ki masi jo hai..jaise vo sabki care krta hai waise vo bhi

karengi..

unlike u 

she said last word under her breath such that only shravan can hear dat...n both gave each other

tashan vala luk while swayam just smiled luking at sharon...

swayam's masi: acha bas aab ..isse rest karne do chalo sab bahar...

all left one by one swayam was the last one to get up wen kriya called him..

k: swayam

sw: haan

k: vo..vo sab. vo sab aye par vo vo re rey nhi

sw: vo yha nhi hai medical store gya hai usse lag gyi hai...chat se aate waqt railing se uska

surtakra gya isliye...

k: okk..

sw: hmm tum rest karo vo aayega toh mei usse bhej dunga..

k: okk..


n he left...within few min. kriya fell asleep..it was nite n she was still sleeping wen a boy entered

his room with a plate of food..he saw her sleeping n kept the food on the nearby table n sat

beside her n soothened her hair ..kissed her forehead n left...aftr around 10 min again a boy

entered with a plate of food as he came  near her he saw the empty plate n thought she must had

eaten he was about to move wen he heard her whispering in sleep

k: shavy ..shavy plz shavy plz..

he heard dat n the plate fall frm his hand..kriya woke up with the noise n saw rey luking at her

angrily..she saw his head bandaged n the cut he got frm her nails n feel guilty..


k: tum..tum mera matlab aap yha kya kar rhe ho

r: oh plz mujee itni respect dene ki koi zarurat nhi hai..n sorry to disturb u'r sleep..mei

tumhare liye khana leke aaya tha bt tum toh phle hi kha chuki ho...

k: but maine khana nhi (cut by)

r: mei chlta hu...


n he left leaving a confused kriya...

he quickly went to his room n called at the no. frm whch he get the call

(me showing onesided convo)

"hello"

"muje sare proof chahiye"

"kab tak"

"theek hai parsu 7 baje is adress pe pahunch jana _____ samne jo garden hoga hum vha

milenge"

"bye"

on the other hand kriya was sitting on her bed confused wen she too got a call..she picked it up...

k: hello..

c: hello sweety

k; shra..sravan tum

sh; haan mei acha chalo aab apne samne vale table ke neeche dekho ek chota stool hoga

uspe tumhara dinner rakha hai khalo..

k: iska matlab tumne rey

sh: haan maine hi vo khali plate upar rakhi thi kyunki muje pata tha tumhara vo aashiq pakka

aayega so... aab chodo in baton ko aur khana kha lo vrna muje vha aana padega..


k: nhi mei kha rhi hu..

n she starts eating n as she finished shravam wished her gud nite n cut the call..

sh: aab pata chalega ki shravan ka revenge kya hota hai..

she called sumone..

sh: photos ready...

c: bas ek din aur sir thodi si rhti hai..

sh: do it fast


n he disconnected the call n smirked..

********Flash Back**********

rey got a call frm an unknown no. wen he came back frm the medical store<it was frm

shravan bt he didn't know

rey: hello

sh: hello rey mei tumhe btana chahta hu tumhari gf tumhe cheat kar rhi hai..vo toh swayam ke

bhai shavy ke sath kamre mei

rey: u bustard ho kaun tum n how dare u speak about her lyk dat...

sh dheere itna chilao mat mei toh sirf tumhari mada kar rha tha..meri pass pics hai..

rey: excuse me.. vo aisa nhi kar sakti so just keep u'r mout shut n don't call here

sH: ok..dkhna bahut jald tum hi muje call karoge...

rey: shut up

n he cut the call as he was moving towards the room..swayam told him about kriya but his

ego came in between..so he didn't went to meet her n shravan who was observing

this frm behind smirked..

********Flash Back ENDS********



Phewww... likes n comments plz..

n for pm's buddy me
 

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 27 June 2013 at 2:28am

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