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#1~Mr. N Miss. Cutter Ki Cute Luv Story~ (Page 10)

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
cute..
thanks for pm..


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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
ohk i'm rlly sorry was rlly busy with clg n cudn't read any pms...now the update ausum update riya awwieee i loves sharey n swayam complimented sharon n she blushed haha wow n kria running after swayam's life wow loved it...thnx for the pm update soon n pm me...

P.S - get well soon (i know i'm rlly late but still)
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged

hello everyone...Big smile sorry hadn't update due to exams.. just got time... as one exam postponed so updating... after dis will update after 4th oct. really sorry... n thnk u all for u'r luvly comments.. i  was very happy too see u'r comments n rply to all of dem soon... sorry to those who didn't got pm's.. really sorry...so here's the update...Wink

AS SHAREY REAHES THE FIRE EXIT.. FEY SAW KRIYA SHOUTING...SHARON COME NEAR KRIYA N TRY TO KEEP HER QUIET...

Sharon:kriya leave it.. plzz..

rey:yaa plz.. stop shouting...headache ho raha hai..( kriya look towards rey in anger n den towards sharon)

kriya: sharon i'm not gonna leave him at all.. voh hota kaun hai humse aise baat karne vala..voh koi cllge ka trusty toh hai nhi

rey:trusty toh nahi par unka beta hai..

kriya:kya... mar gayi..( with his mouth open)mera matlab toh kya beta hai toh kuch  bhi karega.. 9all were silent for a while)

swayam(frm inside of fire exit):itna sannata kyu hai bhai...

(rey was laughing quietly n he open d door, kriya was behind rey so swayam didn't saw her)

swayam:thank god chali gayi voh jhansi ki rani.. vaise jhansi ki ra.. raa..ni...

kriya: tum hoge trusty ke bete but u can't call me dat... teri toh..( n run behind him)

sharey(together): iska kuch nhi ho sakta..(dey luk at each other n chuckled n follow kriyam to stop dem... all of dem running in d whole cllge..to catch each other.. imagine d song bhootnike playing in background..)

sharon (gets tired n shouts in d cooridoor):attention..

reyam(together): yes mam..

sharon:turn back n start muving towards me..( kriya laughing hard)

kriya: wow sharon, u'r great.. yahan bhi boys following u'r commands..( n dey laugh)

sharon; that i'm..(n dey chuckled)(rey lost in kriya..)

rey:  wht do u mean??haan...

swayam: haan tumhara kya matlab hai..

rey:maine vahi kaha tha eng. mein...

swayam: maine socha inhe eng. aati hogi( n dey both laugh giving a hifii to each other)

sharon:oh,plz.. u guys r pethatic.. we know eng. very well( again reyam chuckled)

kriya (in rodrarass):u guyzz r crazy..sharon.. letz.. go..( sharon smiling lost in swayam)

kriya(a li'l bit louder):sharon..

 sharon:haan haan.. 

kriya;letzz go frm here.. 

sharon: ruk naa.. 

rey: haan ruku naa.. dekhte hai tumhe aur kya  kya aata hai...

swayam;haan..(n both laughing so hardly dat tears comes frm dere eyes)

kriya:itz out of d limit now..

 rey; woh.. ahh.. don't be angry.. we'r just kidding..(n again dey laugh) 

sharon: stop it guys.. u gonna pay for it..

reyam:bachao,bachao.. help..( n again burst in a laugh)

kriya(fuming in anger): you.. damnn ..(n walk out frm dere)

rey: itna attitude..

kriya: yaa hai attitude n talent bhi.. so..

rey:oh talent.. kya talent.. logo ko darane n hasane ka..

kriya: urgh... okk tumhe itni hassi aati hai toh ho jaye battle.. how abt a dance batle..(reyam silent)

kriya: kyu darr gaye..challenge se..

rey:challenge accepted.. 

kriya:ohh.. see u in rehersal hall in half hr.

rey; okk..

( after half hr. reyam reached Rh n Krisha on deir way..n in cooridoor suddenly a guy come running fastly n hits kriya.. n she fell down)

kriya:ouch..

sharon: kriya. r u fy9??

kriya:yaa me fy9.. lets go.. (n she try to stand up.. but again fell down)

sharon:wht fy9 haan.. nthing is alrite.. dispensery chalo.. 

kriya: sharon..plz.. me fy9.. letz go to rh .. dey'll be waiting..

sharon:be quiet n cum along wid me..

kriya: par sharon.. 

sharon: i'm not gonna listen..(she take her to dispensery n spray on her leg n move towards Rh) 

in Rh

rey;abhi ak toh aayi nhi voh miss.. aahh ahhh baatcutter..

swayam: agar woh nhi aaye toh achi baat hai..

rey;u scared of her..

swayam; nhi toh.. kisne kaha..(krisha reached dere n reyam saw dem)

swayam:haan darr lagta hai.. 

rey;kya..

precap: dance battle...Star


.sorry for very very late n short update..

hope u guys like it..

n pakka nxt update..

mei kriyaansh ke luvy duvy scenes..

my work done..

u'r turn to comment n like.. bye.. 

new readers  for pm's buddy me



Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 22 June 2013 at 1:15am

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
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yaay me first to comment...

Amazing part reyam teasing krisha was amazing...

Waiting 4 d dance battle..


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Edited by --Kinjal-- - 19 September 2012 at 1:30am

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
it soo gud...bt how will kriya dance with a sprained anckle..

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arsha.kriyaansh

it soo gud...bt how will kriya dance with a sprained anckle..
thnx n that u will know in nxt update
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
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awsummm update,,,,,,,,,,,i m loving it

thnkx 4 pm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n eagerly waiting 4 nxt chappyBig smile


Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 19 September 2012 at 12:31am

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