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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 8)

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
wow amazing part her list is funny but loved the passionate dance cont soon

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
part 8
nice dear...
Kashish is something...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
poor sujal EmbarrassedLOLLOL so much of self-control ClapLOLLOL...really a tough boy LOLLOL
he managed the dance well Big smileBig smile for once i thot after dance when sujal asks for remaining wish she might refuse ROFL but no LOLLOL girl is determined LOLLOL
all the best for movie ...select a good 1 LOLLOLwonder if they will find any good movie LOL

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged

Hey everybody...wish u all a veryyy happy frndship day...this part is dedicated to all my frnds on IF and specially to sania_58 jiska aaj birthday hai...wish u a very happy bday dear


PART 9

s- How about we bring some movie back and watch it and you can hoot and shout and dance all you want?

k-Naah. Theatre mein. Kaunsi film chal rahi hai theatre mein?

Sujal shrugs ...

s-Tumhare paas newspaper hai?

k-Haan hai naa. Wo to pada hai dekho. Main ready hoke aati hoon

Sujal jata hai  movies wala page kholta hai

s- Acha suno...

Sujal chlila kar bolta hai so that Kashish can hear him through closed door

k-Kya????

Sujal movies ke naam batane lagta hai...

s- Hangover2 jana hai? Delibelly jana hai?X-men mei jana hai? Yaa ye zindagi naa milegi dobara jaana hai?

k-Haan zindagi naa milegi dobara

s-Theek hai phir jaldi chalo

 k-ok ok bass ho gaya

Kashish jaldi se ready hoke aa jaati hai

Hamara Italian hero of course looks hot and dashing as usual... dark blue denim jeans and black shirt...

s-Chalein?

Hamari desi gal bhi kam hot nahi hai

Wo log jate hai.. Sujal ki car mein to the movie theatre.. ticket lete hain andar jate hai..

s- Kuch khaogi?

k-Butter popcorn and pepsi

s-Ye lo ticket.. tum baitho mei aata hoon

Sjal jakar sustenance lata hai...

Aas paas Kashish akeli baithi thi to sab couples baithe the mushy mushy types, bf gf, husband wife. Kashish looks around ajeeb sa feel karti hai, thoda sa jeleous bhi

Itne mei humara handsome hunk aata hai sirf Kashish ke ki liye smile karte hue, aakar baith jata hai

s-Lo tumhari pepsi... you know mei pehle baar yahan India mein movie aja raha hoon theater mein ... pehle kabhi jane ka hua hi nai...

k-ohhh to phir aur mazza ayega

s-Haan chalo dekhte hain..

Mann hi mann he s wondering ki Kashish ki harkatoon par kya unhe theater se bahar nikal denge

k-Tum bhi karna

s-Hmm I think as it's my first visit I'd rather just watch and learn...next time...huh?

k-Shut up darpok

The movie starts as pehla gaana ata hai Kashish gets up from her seat thoda thoda grooving fulll masti mein...she looks adorable that way

Peeche se log chila rahe hain...'idiot sit down.. bahar nikalo iss nautanki ko..' popcorn pad rahe hain...'sit down .. baithao isko koi...'

Aas paas wale Kashish ke saath Sjal par bhi glare kar rahe hain for not controlling her

Sujal chup chapp apni seat meni samakar invisible hone ki koshish kar raha hai

k-Sujal utho naaa

s- No. I am fine

She pulls him

Sujal nahi uthta but she is pulling him

Sujal nahi maan raha

Ticket wala aa jata hai

Ticket guy-Madam ye kya hai movie chal rahi hai; ya to aap chup chap baith jaiye ya bahar jaeye!!

s-Kashish baith jao

k-Tumhe kya hai? Maine ticket li hai tumko naachna hai to tum bhi nacho

She charges at the ticket guy

Ticket guy-To madam aap shanti se chale jaeyi scene mat kijiye warna humein bhi logon ko bahar nikalna aata hai

Sujal bhi khada ho jata hai

s- Just chill man..

He says to ticket man and then to Kashish he says-

s-Mmovie nahi dekhni to chalo... tamasha mat karo

k-Tum aisa keh rahe ho? Tum hi to laaye the mujhe

s-Tumne dance kar liya na.. ab baih ke movie dekho ya chalo..  ladd kyun rahi ho?

Peeche se sab loog gussa kar rahe hain, chila rahe hain, popcorn phek rae hain

Tabhi Hrithik aata hai screen mein

k-Wowww Sujaaal Hrithikkk. He so looks like you...tum bhi hero bann sakte ho. Dekho hai naa

Ticket wala glares at Sujal...

Ticket guy- Humein majboor mat kariye security bulane ke liye

Sujal grab Kashish's hand-

k-Chalo ab.. ho gaya no. 5 poora

He says pulling her toward the exit

She is giggling and hooting on the way

Sujal lekar bahra rnikal jata hai Kashish ko

s- Tum aaj juton se pitwati mujhe

Kashish is giggling

k-Par bohooot mazza aaya, par tum bhi karte to aur mazaa aata

s -He he he..[He mocks her]... sabko lag raha tha ki maine tumhe pila di hai and you have lost it.. kuch bhi hota end mein pittha to main hi. Chalo ab chalte hain yahan se

k-Main kehti aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...my Sujal is a  good boy [Dheere se pats his cheek]

s-They will make you take an alcohol level test then...khair chodo ab batao kahan chalna hai? We can go for no.4 there is stlil time for that and finally no. 6 or doyo u wanna bypaas no.4?

k-Pehle kuch khaa lete hain...I am hungry

She pats her belly

s- Batao kya khana hai?

k-Anything? Have you tried Indian food?

He nods.. yahan bai uski Indian khana hi banakar jati hai

k-Arre bai wala nahi acha wala restaurant wala. Mughlai khayein?

Sujal shakes his head.. he doesn't even know what mughlai is.. aur khaya bhi ho to nhai pata

s- Theek hai wahi khate hain.. kahan milega?

k-Tandoori knights

s -ok let's try it...

Jate hai wo dono restaurant and they order authentic mughlai food

k-Yummyyy...[she licks her lips]

Sujal also heartily agrees

s-Haan bohot achha tha

Kashish gives a wide happy grin

k-Dekha meri choice hamesha achi hoti hai. Chalo ab no. 4

Jaate hain dono gadi ki taraf

Sujal starts the car

s- Tumhe pata hai kisi strip joint ke bare mein?

She shakes her ehad

k-Tumhe nahi pata?

He shakes his head

k-Aww kitne sidhe ho

She nuzzles his chin

k-I thought tum log Friday nights wahin jaate ho

He doesn't need strip clubs...chicks readily throw off their clothes for him..except Kashish off course...a little grin comes over his face thinking ki usko bhi bikini tak to le hi aaya

s-Nahi hum to idhar udhar kabhi koi pub kabhi beech etc.. etc.  Ruko let me search...

Sujal apne phone mei search karat hai net chala kar

k-Apne kisi friend se pucho naa

s-Mere aise friend nai hain

k-Aise kaise? Saare gay hain kya

s-Aise nahi hain jo strip clubs mein jayein. Waise gay logo ke liye bhi special strip clubs hote hain Kashish...

k-Arre I am saying tumhare friends ko pata to hoga naa

s-Main dhond raha hoon naa

k-Jaise tum kabhi strip club nahi gaye

s- maine kab kaha ki mai nahi gaya.. but that was when I was very young... in my teens

Sujal ko address mil jata hai finally

s- Chalo address bhi mil gaya, chalte hai

k-ohhh ...teens? But you were under age naa

s-It's not underage in Italy...besides we got some fake ids and entered.. we were all curious

k-Boys [She rolls her eyes] Saare ladke dash hote hain

s-Dash? What do you mean by dash?

He starts driving while arguing side by side

k-Kuch bhi laga lo

s-Nahi nahi.. I am sure you have a lovely adjective..

k-Beep

s- Huh aur ladkiyaan kam hain kya? Wo to mauka nahi milta unhe warna curiosity to unhe bhi utni hi hai

k-ooo please! Aisa kuch nahi hai. All men are...are...are

s- Maybe they are,.. but then so are all women.. they just hide it better and refuse to believe it themselves thoroughly

k-Men are more..and all men are...few women are like that

They reach that place.. bahar gaudy sa electric blinking sign hai

k-emm..Sujal mujhe darr sa lag raha hai...pehle to main excited thi...ab mujhe darr sa lag raha hai

s- Kyun darne ki kya baat hai? tumhe dekhne ke ilaawa kuch nahi karna

She nods

k-Dekhne mein hi darr lag raha hai

 



Edited by storywriter - 05 August 2012 at 9:49am

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
gr8 part cont soon

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
LOL LOL god save my sujal LOLLOLLOLkahan phas gaya bechara LOLLOLLOL
sujal seems to be seedha saada guy but kashish surely gonna spoil him LOLLOLLOL
theatre se toh sujal bach gaya...hope he comes out safe from here too LOLLOLLOL

Happy friendship to u too Hug

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Part 6
 
oh Thank God, finally ek aur wish bina garbaad hue bina poora ho gaaya
yaar, manna parega Sujal ko, Sujal bina koi sawal kiye uske saath dene ke saath saath koi tamasha naa ho uska bhi khayal rakha.
Kashish ke andar to bachpana bhara pada hua hai, but Sujal kaafi mature aur understanding bhi hai.
but yes, main bhi Sujal se agree karti hoon, kya pata future kisne dekha hai, waise mujhe nahin lagta iss baar uss chiz ko use karne ke liye humhe last update tak jana parega
U understand naa??
nice part
 
 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Part 7
 
LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLROFLROFLROFL
 
yeh part padhne ke baad meri halat aisi thi
Kashish sach main unique piece hai, Shop main jaa ke con**** ke liye sab ke samne chilati hai, ab bikini pehen se sharma rahi hai,aapne wish list main hone ke baad bhi.
to chalo usne Sujal ko bhej diya, bechare ko woha bhi kaafi acche expressions dekhne ko mile logo ki.
teeno kharid li Sujal ne
woww, waise laddu to phootna hi pjootna hai, warna mujhe doubt ho jaata, Sujal ko leke
but yeh kya?? Kashish bahar nahin aana chahti
par Sujal bhi haar nahin mannewala, chalo finally usne aapne expert reasoning dekh kar Kashish ko mana hi liya.
waise uske baad jo bikini show hua, uske liye Sujal ki yeh chota sa mehnat kuch bhi nahin hai.
Fashion TV Live dekhne ka anand utha raha hai Sujal
waise sab kuch chod ke ek chiz bohut imp hai Kashish Sujal par bohut trust karti hai.
nice part, too good.

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