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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 6)

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Posted: 29 July 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Part 4
I must say Kashish have a really...ummm...interesting wish listEmbarrassed
Sujal's feeling so uncomfortable,didn't expect something like this..o boy you'll get surprises everyday...kash will surely change your world.
Kash really trusts Sujal a lot...shared her wish list with him,that's good.
Part 5
This part is all about imagining Sujal's expressionLOL
Kash wants to smoke n drink...not a good idea,girl.
I hope she understood that after her little experimentWink
Sujal...don't teach her such things...girl will get into some serious problems.
Now go n help Kash to complete her other wishes.
Loved it...continue soon.

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged

Sorry ppl...cant like ur like button is acting funny so...thxs a lot for ur efforts


**Adult Content

k-You should better leave the cancer stick and also it smells bad

Sujal pats her head indulging her...

s- I thought this was about your wish list not perfecting me...

k-It's a good advice

 s-I'll consider it

k-Your gf would gonna like for changing you for good

s-That's why I don't have a gf... I like being me and don't want to change... anyway...what does no 8 mean? Dance on bollywood no? Can't you dance on whoever you want?

k-No no it's not just dance, the feel. I mean the actual way the hero heroine dance

k-So you want to dance on film set with hero and backup dancers?

He asks while Kashish breaks into fits of laughter

k-Naa naa.  You are mad. Just ...ok, switch on the TV

He switches it on

k-Switch on some bolly music channel

Sujal chala deta hai..

k-See how the hero heroine are dancing, lip sync and all

s-So the music is playing... dance...

Sujal says leaning back on his bed getting ready for a show

k-Sujal !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not just me, we both

Sujal shakes his head... ki  nahi mujhe nahi aata ye bolywood dance and all... ki itne mein ek helen ka item number bajne lagta hai...

s- Ismein to sirf tumhara hi part hai...chalo dance...

k- Nooo. I said not like that. Leave it for some time. Let's go down

s -Fine fine I get it ill dance I just don't dance well... so it will only happen if the dance is western...

k-Yes...but first we are going down. Come

s-By the way no. 7 do you have bikini?

k-no I don't ...come

He follows her...

s-So we'll get one too... and you can also go to your chemist shop...

She walks to the chemist shop

Shop mein bohot zyada bheed hai, aunty bacche, buddhe sab hain

Dukaan wala to busy hai...uska assistant aata hai

'Haan didi kya chahie?'

Sujal khada hai peeche...he is amused...In Italy it's not such a big deal buying a cond*m he was surprised ki its even on her list...even today suddenly he would be astounded by some narrow minded rule of middle class Indian society...

k-Mujhe cond*m chahie !

Saare log chup Kashish ki taraf dekh rahe hain par wo bhi peeche hatne walon mein se nahi hai...

Wo dukaan wala assistant ko hata deta hai..khud aata hai

He whispers.

 Shopkeeper-Haan boliye , madam kaunsa?

k-Kaunsa hai aapke paas?

Saare log aas paas Kashish ko aise dekh rahe h..jaise she has done something taboo

k-Acha ! aur flavour?

Sujal walks upto close behind her

Thoda side e mei khada ho jata hai so he can some shield her from curious accusing glares...he was amused earlier, but he also knows ki sab mazak nahi hai...he leans in and quickly whispers a brand name in her ear keeping a very casual hand at her spine

k-Kya? Kya ye acha hai? Have you used it?

s -Yes that's the one we want

k-Par India mein ye brand milega?

He nods at her question

k-Ye dotted kya hai?

s-A full class on brands in public was not on your list was it?

He  says smiling and pretending ki koi aur hi lovey talk kar rahe hain dono... so that people may think that they are so lost in each other ki ladke ki jagah ladki ne maang liye cond*ms and pepple start ignoring them a little

k-But...we should buy the right thing  naa

s-hmm you are right...why not buy one of every type?

He says very low right in her ear

k-No no itna kya karna hai? Dukaan kholni hai kya?

Sujal shrugs..

s-Main kaam mei le lunga dont you'll get to learn and see the difference

k-ohhh..kaun hai kaun hai..[she nudges him]

He smiles and says-


k-ohhh..ok...Thik hai, sab ka ek ek packet

Shop keeper bhi Sujal and Kashish ko ita close dekhkar chup chap muhh band karke de deta hai... it's not that they were like chipku touchy feely close but it was in Sujal's body language ki shopkeeper ko laga that they are lovers

Kashish leke aa jaati hai

k-Ab batao naa..whoz the gal?

s- No one... faltu tum dukaan par argument karti to maine aise hi keh you never now kya pata koi ban jaye...maine kaha tha tumse thodi der pehle I don't have gf

k- oh aise hi kharidwake waste karaya

s-Nahi nahi waste nahi.. I am optimistic kya pata future mein kya ho...achha ab chalo kisi mall mein chalkar tumhe bikini bhi dila dete hain..

k-Nnahi..mujhe nahi lena

s- Why not?

k-Mujhe sharam aati hai

s-Isme kya sharmane wali baat hai???and c'mon you got guts ..Didn't you just march to a busy shop and shout for cond*ms?


Edited by storywriter - 30 July 2012 at 11:14am

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Padfoot_Prongs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
ek or wish puri ho gayi..

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
the up is good
despo yaar kasdhish
but sujal supportsher
plz cont soon

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
phew...thank god one of wishes of kashish got fulfilled LOLLOLLOL thankfully sujal made sure no scene is created LOLLOLLOL...& like sujal i am optimistic Evil Smile he might need in future may be not in near but might be little later ROFL

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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon
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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
part 6
Kashish is one unique piece...
cont soon dear...

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged


s-Nahi nahi waste nahi.. I am optimistic kya pata future mein kya ho'.achha ab chalo kisi mall mein chalkar tumhe bikini bhi dila dete hain..

k-Nahi..mujhe nahi lena

s- Why not?

k-Mujhe sharam aati hai

s-Isme kya sharmane wali baat hai???and c'mon you got guts ..Didn't you just march to a busy shop and shout for cond*ms?

k-Nahi nahi'you get it for me

Kashish giggles

s-Me? What if I get something you don't like?

k-Na get it for me.

s- I still think you should about I do the talking and you can just stand there

k-O no. What we can do is u can go and get it and I can do the preparation for the dance

s- Arre aise faida hi kya? Agar tumhe pehni hi hai to apni pasand se apne mann ki pehno.. .chalo.. it won't be so bad..

k-Nahi naa'

She hides her face in his arms

Sujal sighs..

s-Theek hai theek hai...-I'll see what I find

He says patting her shoulder

She smiles

k-Thanks you are a sweetheart sujju..

She pulls his cheek

Sujal goes to the shop

Wo jata hai'asks for bikinis this time he gets all the censorious glares but he just shrug it off usko ab tak itni baar mil chuki hai ki ab usse zyada farak nahi padta...

Sales girl-what size sir?

He messages Kashish and asks for her size and answers the salesgirl after receiving her reply

He chooses three'.he can't decide between them

Ab Sujal teeno le leta hai khushi khushi

Mann mein ladoo to phoot hi rahe hain imagination start to ho hi gai hai

Sujal aata h to

Kashishk saara furniture side kar rahi thi dance ke liye

k-Phew ! Hey ! You are back

s-Yup... why are you moving my furniture?

k-Creating space

s- For what? course

s-oh the dance... hmmm I what are we dancing on?

He says handing k the bag containing the bikinis

Kashish checks the bag

k-You got???? oh? There are 3?

s- I couldn't' decide...

He shrugs innocently

s-We'll see which ever looks the best..

k-ohhh never least you helped.  I'll try them

Sujal nods.. curbing his enthusiasm and not smiling too encouragingly

Kashish ghus jatai hai andar ghuske nikal hi nahi rahi

Sujal wait kar raha hai... 15 min ho gaye

so he asks

s-Kashish what happened is it ok? Lemme see.

k-yeah...its nice. Thanks for the help

s-it is ?then come out, let me see

k-What???????? Why should I come out?

s- So how would I know how nice they look?

k-You don't need to know

s-Don't tel me tumne bathroom mein pehenne keliye bikini mangwai thi...

k-To aur kya karu unka?

s-I mean agar kisi ko pata hi nahi hoga ki tumne pehni.. to kya matlab pehene ka... if no one saw it, it didn't happen

k-Mujhe pata hai maine pehni..that's enough

Sujal shakes his head not believing this...

s-Agar tume akele mei n hi dekhna tha to khud ko to  apne undergarment mein hi dekh leti... swim wear material ki kya zarurat... they almost look alike anyway...

k-To main kya ye sab tumhe dikhane ke lie kar rahi hoon

s- Nai maine aisa nhai kaha.. mai to bas yeh keh raha hoon ki tumhe feel hi nai ayegi ki tumne bikini pehni hai agar tum kisi ko dikhaogi hi nai..besides... jo achhi lagegi wo hum vegas le kar jaenge...

k-Vegas leke kyun jayenge?

s-Maine suna hai wahan ke hotels mein bahut aache pools hote hain.. and is some they have a hot spring kinda thing...tumhe room meni hi baithana hai wahan jakar to theek hai tumhari marzi

k-Thik hai thik hai par tum dekhoge nahi. Ankhein band karo

s-To bataunga jkasie ki konsi achhi hai

k-Wo..wo mujhe..pata hai

s-c'mon Kashish... what are you afraid of? I am not gonna jump on you , you know that

k-I know but...I...I have never'I...ok ok..I'l come

She wears the pink one first

Kashish to darri hui, sehmi hui

She was ready to run away

Sujal gives her big smile upon seeing her and nods his head appreciatively-

s-Nice... I do have a good choice...

Kashish runs to the room

Sujal wait kar hai next ke liye..

k-Sujal ! I can't wear this

She says from behind the door

k-ohhh God

s- Ab kya hua?

k-I's'I mean...skimpy...Sujaaal

s-Kashish bikinis are supposed to be skimpy...stop being a prude. I thought you wanted to get out of the small town conservative mentality plus I didn't buy anything cheap or vulgar

She opens the door, peaks out'pinkish ho gai hai khud blush karke

s-come out. Lemme see

She comes out hesitantly, kaanp sa rahi hai

Sujal looks at her a bit slack jawed in awe but quickly recover his cool before she can notice and gives her an amiable grin


Edited by storywriter - 04 August 2012 at 11:54am

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