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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 5)

Padfoot_Prongs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
kya wish list hai.. sujal bhag jayega..ROFL

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged


k-I know you will take care of me

She puts her arms around his shoulders

s-You have never boozed before?

She shakes her head


k-I was afraid


k-Of losing control..and...but...but now I have you..I have no fear

She knew no one around would take care of her if she lost her senses

k-7th wear a bikini and haan 8th hai to enact a bolywwod song

Sujal nods

k-And...9th and 10th bhi hai...par wo bohot silly hai...baad mein bataungi

Kashish says giggling at her silly wishes...her last second and most important wishes one was that she wanted a boyfriend, a true lover who would cherish her. She never had a real boyfriend ever and the last was to get married dressed up grandly and have a very sweet family which would share and care for her. are lost in which thoughts? like the list?

s-umm ahem.. [A bit of a pause he is thinking... about the weird list and its contents...]'s... Quite a list... but umm really won't you rather have anything else like maybe a trip abroad or something? That would be very exciting too right?

k-Yeah but I alwaysss wished for this and...abroad I can go anytime. We can go to wild Vegas. I have heard it's great'

s-Vegas!! Oh umm yah sure why not...I haven't been there how about we go to Vegas instead of this list? I mean sure tum kabhi bhi ja sakti ho par ab tak agar kabhi mauka nahi aaya to kya pata kab jane ko mile...

k-You have never been to Vegas?????????????? You??????????????

s-What's so shocking about it? It's not like every adult male had been there...

k-No...I thought you NRI from Italy not been to Vegas. It's shocking. What were you doing in your college days???

Sujal just shrugs and looks at particularly interesting furniture.

Sujal ko Vegas jane kisi zarurat hi nai padi kabhi.. vivid occasions aur jaab theme ke hotels ki ilawa sab kuch tha Italy mei...

s-So should we go to Vegas? Ab to maine bhi nahi dekha...

k-Nah ! See the list is close to my heart.  I have never shared my wishes with anyone and I...just...I...

He pats he hand and nods. He is kinda elated that she has trusted only him to share it but... phir bhi.. he is not so sure about the dance in theater and tuff

k-So shall we start?

s-ok well.umm so I guess umm no. 1 is already done

The piece of furniture is pretty interesting. It has some very intricate carving... so he has to look at it instead of Kashish

s-And getting drunk...we should leave that for last so you can sleep after it...

Sujal gets up and gets his cigarette ash tray and lighter...Kashish sits straight as if getting ready for something special

He puts the cigarette between his lips, lights it and hands it over to Kashish

s-ok now suck on it a bit but don't inhale it all way down t your lungs. You'll cough if you do that. Just suck a little a small drag...

 k-But how do you do that?

Sujal instructs her

s-Ok so just try and breath in a little...very little

She keeps it between her lips

s-Don't breath through nose at the same time

She is all confused


Gai cigarette udke

k-Cough! cough ! cough !

She is panting                                                   

s- Maine kaha tha thoda sa bas zara sa...

He says patting her back


She is almost choking due to smoke inside her

K-cough ! cough !

He gives her water picks up the fallen ciggi and crushes it into the ash tray

Kashish jo red si ho gai thi thodi normal hoti hai

She is constricting her nose cutely

Dhuan sa ghhuss gaya hai harr jagah

Sujal keeps patting her back gently

k-Yaaak ! I feel like a chimney. It doesn't even taste good

Sujal smirks...

s-It's an acquired taste...I don't think you'll be getting drunk either at this rate...


s-Drinks don't taste nice either...

k-Then what is the point of smoking and drinking? Why do you go drinking and smoking?

s-As I said its acquired taste... once you get used to it you like it plus it has some soothing side effects although I know it's not healthy but well some vices I allow myself...

k-What soothing side effect

She grabs his muscular arm and keeps her head on his shoulder

k-You should better leave the cancer stick and also it smells bad

Sujal pats her head indulging her...

s- I thought this was about your wish list not perfecting me...

k-It's a good advice

 s-I'll consider it

k-Your gf would gonna like for changing you for good

s-That's why I don't have a gf... I like being me and don't want to change... anyway...what does no 8 mean? Dance on bollywood no?




Edited by storywriter - 27 July 2012 at 11:23am

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Padfoot_Prongs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged
waiting for dance...

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:56am | IP Logged
the up is good
so kashish started fulfilling her wishes and sujal is helping her
he lights a cigarette but akshish she starts coughing and waiting for how she fulfills her other wishes
plz cotn soon and pm me
jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
the last two parts remind me of the movie rock star gr8 part cont soon

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-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Hope kashish is able to change her BF for good WinkLOLLOLLOL...
I also want to know why kashish want to dance LOLLOLLOLLOL

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golu_1677 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
amazing parts...

Loved sujal n kash...

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sania_58 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged

second wish ka experience kaafi kharab tha

ab dekhte hai next wish kaise poora hota hai? Sujal bohut perfectly aapna kaam kar raha hai ab tak
par yeh to sirf shuruwat hai, aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai
all the best Sujal
sweet update
nice part
waiting for the next.

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