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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 45)

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PART 64

Kashish pulls him into a trial room and locks the door frm inside

She puts her arms around his neck

Sujal jerks her away and gets out

Sujal to Ria-

s-I have to go

H zooms away

Kashish remains standing there...unhappy

Sab plan chaupat

Ab Ria aur Zach ko to Sujal ke wedding mein bhi aane ke asaar kam lag rahe hain

Kashish dono se minnat karti h ki

k-Please please usse ek baar manalo wedding mein aa jaye. I just need one more chance to speak to him

Kashish ko samajh nahi a araha...Sujal se kaise bata kare...Sujal phone uthata nhi..office mein jao to milta nhi coz Kashish ke lie reception mein mana kar rakha hai Sujal ne

Kashish ke kehne par Ria aur Zach gididate hain Sujal ke saamne ki  aaja aaja

Sujal says he cant come for wedding he will come for an hour in the reception and lights his ciggrett without another word

Ria is shocked seeing Sujal smoke again

Jaake Kashish ko piro deti hai

Kashish says 'han han I know'

Kashish naya formula apnaati hai

She starts calling Sujal from unknown number

Par Kashish ki awaaz sunke Sujal kaat deta

Sujal is stting in one of those bristo jahan they have huge glass window..

Raat ko 11 baje when its almost shutting time

He is sitting and smoking and

Kashish to bechari Sujal se milne hotel aai thi

Kisi ne milne naa dia

Idhar udhar mandraa rahi thi

Then bristo mein Sujal dikha to daudke aa gai madam andar

He is eating junk and smoking grass aur paani ki jagah whisky

Kashish daduke aai..thoda fisalte hue...zameen pe jaldi pohonch gai...stops across the table

k-Sujal !

She squels

Ash tray uthake kehti hai

k-Chiii itni saari ciggrett

Sujal ke baal bikhre hue hain, shirt untcked hai...1-2 button khule hain shirt ke

Kashish chipak ke baith gai Sujal ke bagal mein

Its a dark dining area.. waise hi dimly lit hai but since it was almost closing time saari light band ho chuki thi bas ek Sujal ke paas choti si jal rahi thi

Kashish chipak ke baithne ke baad..wraps her arms arnd his neck

k-Sujal

Kahin ek pianist saddy saddy peices baja raha hai... unintrusivly...

Kashish kisses Sujal's cheek

Sujal to bass apna cycle complete kar raha hai...a smoke...a bite..a swig...again a smoke..a bite ..and a swig

Kashish to makhkhi hai...bhinbhina rahi hai

She pulls his chin towards her

k-Sujal...I am sorry...Sujal please baby..I love you

He gets up

She also gets up

He picks up the bottle

Takes a looong drag of ciggi.. phir jo thodi bachi hai usse ash try mei cush kiya and starts walking

Kashish to peecha nahi chod rahi ...aa rahi hai saath saath

Her Sujal-Sujal is unending

Achanak saamne khadi ho jaati hai

Hangs onto him

k-Sujalll..please...Si prega di smettere ! [Please stop] [while her pronounciation was wrong]

s-Partire!!! [Go!!!]

k-Huh?

He shoves her away and goes to hi room locking himself inside

k-Sujal! Sujal please

She is knocking

k-Sujal please open the door'. I wanna talk to you. Tu sei la mia vita [You are my life]. I love you

 Sujal andar jakar koi italian classic music full volume mein chala deta hai

k-Bye baby...

Kashish chali jaati hai

Par usk ko ek idea sujhta h jaat ehue...daudke wapas aati hai

Baith jati hai Sujl ke door ke paas

Opens her english to italian wali guide aur purse se tissue paper aur lipstick nikala

Ek tissue pe

'Kashish ama sujal' [Kashish loves Sujal]

Likh ke door ke niche se kamre mein daal dia

Ek aur mein

'Amare you baby' [Love you baby]

Aise jitne tissue paper the saare daal dia neeche se andar likh likh ke

Chali gai...phir after an hour

Kashish ne socha sunega nahi, dekhega nahi to padega to zarur

Sujal ne andar ghuske gaana chaalaya... drink poori puu aur ciiiggi phooki...

He couldnt miss reading the tissues... jo samne hai wo to dikhaga hi..

 Unn tissue se hi..usse baaki ki bottle aur saari ciggy khatam karne ka motivation mila

Ek ek ciggy se unn tissues pe ched kiye

Kashish asks Ria

k-Kya hai yaar...kitna mana rahi hoon..maanti hi nah...ye ladkon ka itna atak kyun jaata hai bol dia to bol dia bass

Ria-Kyunki men dont get involve emotionally easily ..aur jab involve ho jaate hain to bura wala ho jaate hain. Aar ya paar

Late night phir Sujal ka phone rings

Its unknown no.

Sujal utha leta hai

Drunk to tha hi..to Italian mein Kashish pe khub chillaake phone rakh deta hai

Agin phone rings...

Sujal is fuming...

'quello che ?????????????????????????' [What????]

It was his bro

Bro-fratello? [Brother?] va tutto bene???? [Are you ok??]

s-bene?bene...bene...io sto bene [ok? Ok..ok..I am well]

Bro-non multa?[Not fine?]

s-Mujhe kya hoga huh? Huh? Huhhh? Why shouldnt I be... bene?...Bene.. Benee..$%&&..^&%&[Maa behen wali gaali...2-3 gaali aur hindi mein]

Bro-Quello che successo a Kashish?  [What happend to Kashish]

s-Chi?  [Who?]

Bro-Kashish

s- chi ?[ who is that?]

Bro-ha u ubriaco per molto?? [Did you drink too much??]

s-Main zyada peeta hoon? Huh who are you?huh? to judge me? My gurdian dog? My mother? My Kash? Who are you to say how much I drink!! Chi??! [Who?]

Bro-Your bro

s- Tch.. you shoud unirvi a me per un drink...join me for a drink then all will be.. bene...si? Yes?

Bro-perch sei triste [y r u sad] quello che successo. Dimmi  [y r u sad. tell me] What happened?

s-Not sad.. main kyun dukhi hunga... lekin ho bhi sakta hai ki  you are

Bro-Kash called me and she was worried. She said she loves you

s- Dont wanna talk about that...It makes me sad I think.. no...it doesnt make me sad...it makes something clench and hurt inside..is that sad? am i malinconico then? [Am I sad then?]

Bro-Its called heartbreak. She said you have started drinking and smoking a lot

s- No ...baat nahi karni...di lei[about her]

Bro-She was crying

Sujal phone kaat deta hai

He wont talk about Kashish



Edited by storywriter - 03 November 2012 at 12:25pm

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part 64
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Sujal is a gadha...
cont soon dear...
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PART 65

Bro-Kash called me and she was worried. She said she loves you

s- Dont wanna talk about tht...It makes me sad I think.. no...it doesnt make me sad...it makes something clench and hurt inside..is that sad? am i malinconico then? [Am I sad then?]

Bro-Its called heartbreak. She said u have strted drinking and smoking a lot

s- No ...baat nahi karni...di lei[about her]

Sujal phone kaat deta hai

He wont talk about Kashish

Udhar Kashish calls Ria all tensed and crying

k-lo lo amo...lo lo amo...solo lui [I love him ... I love him ... he alone]

Ria apne baal kheechkar bahar nikal legi agar she has to deal wit the two idiots anymore..

Bechari apni shaadi bhi enjoy nahi kar paa rhai

k-veramente lo amino [really love him ] Ria Zach helppp

Ria kehti hai subah baat karte hai..we are a bit busy

Kashish calls Sujal's bro now

k-Che cosa ha ditto [What did he say] egli mi odiano [does he hate me]

Bro narrates what all happened

Kashish again starts bugging Ria

Ria kehti hai Kashish ko ki zyada marna band kar...calm down

Ab Ria calls Sujal in the morning ki theres an emergency

Ria ek ladki ko leke Sujal ke paas aati hai

Ria says she is my friend..and she is very badly used by her ex. You have to help her. Ye kaam tum hi kar sakte ho

Sujal asks kyun

Ria says his ex knows Zach par tumhe nahi jaanta. Kash bhi is a common friend. Tum aur Kash will pretend to be a couple and Kash will say you are getting married to usse shopping karni hai. Wahan tum nahi miloge. You will meet Kash at a restraint. Kash will be with this gal's ex, jo ki Kash ka common friend hai. Wahan restraunt mein we will play a prank and police tumhe harrass karegi bcoz of that guy's fault. To kash uspe bhadkegi obviously ki uski wajah se tum yaane uske would be husband ko pareshaani hui. Please Sujal you gotta help her

Gal-Please...please...he has humilated me badly. I almost committed suicide. He used me. Please help me

The gal was crying

Sujal says no..sorry I cant help

Ladki rote hue zameen pe baith gayi

Ria gave him a hard look

Bechari roti bachchi ko Ria le jaati hai giving Sujal a hadr stare

Kashish ko jake kehti hai tia ki plan flop ho gaya

Ab Sujal was coming out of a huge conference from a hotel

Kashish aati hai huffing puffing in anger

k-What do you think of yourself? How can you do this to her? She is my ex-roomie. Do you even have a heart?

She pushes him

s-What do you think you are doing? Stop pushing me

Sab log mooh kholke dekh rahe hain

k-Why ???? Kya kar loge tum?? I can do anything

s- Please leeave..or else I'll hv to call the security

k-Really ! Try it !

Kashish tip toes holds..his collar and biggesttt smooch planted on his lips

Sab log jaw dropped dekh rahe hain

She showed her authority ki kya kar sakti hai wo

Achche se kiss karti hai

Wipes her lips, turns and walks away

Sab silet ho gaye aas-paas

Sujal bhi chup...kiss to waise bhi bada dhamakedaar tha

Chali gai Kashish...dekhta reh gaya shocked

Aaj hi ab Ria and Zach ka reception tha raat ko

Sujal ne vaada kiya tha ek ghante ke liye ayega

Kashish was in a transy saree

Sujal ne socha Kashish se 7 feet distance rakhe..phir hungama karegi...bass gift do..baat karo dono se bhaag aao

There Kashish has dressed to kill

She still has high hopes

Par she thinks, ab bhi baat nahi karega to main bhi nahi karungi

Sujal was there in party..checking his watch kab ghanta ho

Dono Sujal-Kashish nazre chura churake dekh sa rahe the ek dusre ko

Kashish aise hi sab se baat-vaat kar rahi thi

Kashish ka pallu kisi aur ke heel se phaaske

Trrr

Pura phatt gaya...sabke saamne

Just a tiny cloth remained

She was standing in middle of the party

Jaise bhi holds the cloth to save her honor

She is freezed with embarrassment...and on verge of tears

Sab ki nazre Kashish par fixed

Sab ghoor rahe hain..but no one is helping

Kashish ko ek pal ek saal sa lag raha hai

Kya kare wo

She cant even take a step like this

Sab silent hain

Only Sujal walks over to her, removes his coat and puts it on her

Kashish was all teary eyed

s-Come..I'll drive you home

Kashish to kuch kehne ki halat mein nahi...chal leti hai jahan le jaata hai...looking at him with her big grateful eyes

As they reach the Kashish's place

She invites him inside her tiny apartment..which only has a bed and very few furniture



Edited by storywriter - 13 November 2012 at 6:11am

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