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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 44)

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
wow very well done kashish i like it  why she is being sad ???

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
part 62
nice part...
the most confused and complicated couple...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 4:17am | IP Logged
aww poor sujal Hug sab usse chodkar chale jate hai CryCry...hope this time history doesn't repeat itself OuchOuch.
kashish darling run LOLLOLLOL before sujal goes mad & angry Ouch

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged

PART 63

k-Sujal ! Sujal !

Sujal chala gaya gusse se darwaza patak ke

But more dejected than angry

Kashish sits on the floor sad ab and feelng void

She tries callin him ...several times

Sujal phone nahi uthata

Kashish ia also wondering

Kitni baar phone kiya

Sujal phone naa uthaye

Kashish Ria ko kehti h.ai.ye ye kiya

Kashish bhi kya kare

Kashish rone lag gai ..ki ye keh dia

Ria Kashish ke pe chade jaye ki akal naa hai tujhmein ..ye wo

Udhar Sujal bechara sea shore pe pareshaan sa baitha hua tha brooding and glancing at the sea

He is sitting on the beach brooding looking hard and sad at the same time

A bunch of gypsy like peopl walk by and offer him a packet of grass or some rolled ciggis...

Sujal sochta hai koi usse uske khud ke liye nahi pasand karta hai..to kya jaa raha hai if he drinks and smokes'jisko pasand nahi hai.. usko to Sujal bhi pasand nahi naa..

Since he cant change whole of himself  to make her like him.. to ek cheech bhi change karne se kya ho jayega.. so maybe he can smoke some grass

Kyunki alcohol ki bottle so saath laaya nai..and smoking gives more saisfaction...

Also coz Kashish had disapproved and almost made im leave it... its sign of rebellion

Kisi ko kya pata ki cigrette pii raha hai ya grass..

Sujal to phone band karke baith gaya

Koi naa phone kare..naa family naa  bro naa Kash

Usse ab lagta hai ki yahi theek hai... they should be apart..

Bhale hi parting bitter thi but atleast ab aur hurt nahi karenge ek doosre ko

Sujal pii paake kuch der to wahan pad gaya

Par aas-paas zyada hi chakar chakar ho rahi thi to hotel chala gaya

Kashish saare frnd circle mein bol deti hai ki Sujal kahan hai, kahan hai

Two weeks ho gaye hain

Kashish ka to phone wo utha nahi raha tha

Zach jaata hai kuch der baad uske office mein  ki apni aur Ria ki shaadi hai...you are invited'plz plz aana

Sujal doesnt wanna go anywhere

He is tilted on saying no'

He doesn't wanna socialize

He jsut wanna retrieve to his shell

He hasnt even spoken to his family

May be he wld turn into a deppressed soul or an addcit and die some day'he hought

Daggers pierced his heart..whenever a thought about Kash would approach his heart

Wasn't there any way to delete the thoughts..he ouwld wonder

He says 'lets see. I will try' to Zach's invite

Ab Kashish roz Ria ka dimaag khaati hai ki kya hua..kuch kar naa'kya kaha usne

She really wanna go back to him

Ek din achanak dono Zach and Ria Sujal ke office mein pohonch jaate hain

Ab Ria Sujal ke peeche pad gai ki...Zach doesnt have anyone here..nor he  knowsa about Indian wear..tum uske lie shoppin karo..I love ur choice

Ria chipak gai Sujal se

Zach bhi..plz plz...its my wedding

Sujal says ok..

Wo bhi kya kare emotionally blackmail sa kiya ki meri shaadi hai plz plz

Sujal jaata hai dono ke saath

Sab idhar udhar dekh rahe hote hain

Zach ki shopping gai bhaad mein Ria junk jewellery dekhne lagti hai

Zach aur Ria nok jhok mein lage hue hain

Sujal side mein khada hai

'Hi everyone' Sujal hears a familiar voice and a soft hand holding him

Ria and Zach normalluy say hi to Kashish

They act as if sab normal hai Zach and Ria saath hain..Sujal and Kashish saath hain

Sujal is straight faced

Haath hata leta hai Kashish ka

Ria aur Zach aage agge chalne lagte hain

Kashish Sujal se chipak leti hai

Sujal is walking straight not looking at her

Sujal ne haath chudaya to kya hua...Kashish ne phir pakad liya

Sujal takes out his grss walla ciggi

k-Sujal !!!!

She goes to take it away

Par Sujal na dega ab ki nahi dega'har bari to he lets her tke it away..indulge karta tha..

k-Sujal..naraz ho?.. Sorry naa babu

She kisses his cheek

k-I love you

Sujal doesn't even twitch

Shopping karte hue Zach goes to change aur Ria bhi assist kar rahi hai

Sujal is stone faced all the while ignoring Kashish's existence

Kashish pulls him into a trial room and locks the door frm inside

She puts her arms around his neck



Edited by storywriter - 30 October 2012 at 10:33am

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
seems like he has got addicted...

hope they can work it out...


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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Awesome update
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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
part 63
in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta...
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
now dont tell me sujal in one week u learned to ignore kashish darling LOLLOLLOL wonder if u can TongueTongueLOL ...chipkoo cheez hai itni asani se peecha nahi chootega LOLLOLLOL
lets see how long sujal ignores & able to control himself TongueLOLLOLLOL

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