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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 42)

NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged

Sorry ppl for late update...was busy with durga puja


Sujal and Kashish come back to India

Kashish faltu Sujal ke ghar aane ki frequency kaafi kum kar deti hai

She spends her time in studying for job or interviews

But its recession time...and she doesn't have much qualification..nor much experience to get the post she was working in

Her behavour has also changed...she would cry seeing all the movies...she would speak less

When Sujal would come from his friday nigh parties she would just sob incessently after he passes out

She feels...he is so very close...but still so far from her

Sujal also notices her strange behavior but brushes it off thinking busy ho gai hai shayad...par kabhi lagta hai ki Kashish ko achanak kya hua

Kabhi kabhi Kashish becomes really curt yaa achanak irritate ho jaati hai...chilla jaati hai...jhagad jaati jaati hai

Sujal kuch puche to its like.'.sorry meri hi galti hai naa..mat karo ab se mujhse baat...I am a trouble'

Sujal tries to reconcile and make her calm down most of the tmes but kabhi kabhi heat of the moment mein , usko bhi gussa aata hai wo bhi chilla leta hai

Par then...its Kashish...he aches to see her

Sujal thinks she is stressed out kyunki usko job nahi mil rahi

Phir bhi job hi ho Sujal Kashish se mlne ki koshish karta hai roz...hamesha wo hi intiate karta ha ko bhi baat...Kashish to band si rehti hai

One day as Sujal was indulging n his match in her home Kashish says ki she has got offer from her ex boss to join the firm again as kuch nahi mil raha she is considerin the option

Idhar Sujal adhi se zyada bottle khatam kar chuka tha his ears perk ups

Dimaag mein chadd to rakhi hi thi

Sujal flalty says no ki..'you are not working there'

k-What? Why not? I am unemployed...I need work..cant you understand this?

Sujal adh gaya ki 'You are not working with him'

Kashish bolti hai-

k-Who are you to decide that?

Sujal's anger rises further

s- Who am I to decide???? Why are you so desperate to get f**** by tht b****

Kashish's jaw drops

k-What did you say??????????????? Mind your words, Sujal!!!!

s-Why should I mind my words? Huh?...I siad the truth...why are you so affected if I say anything to that SOB??? The keep still has a soft corner for him??

Kashish's eyes become moist hearing his harsh words

k-Get out Sujalll!!!!!!!!!!! GET OUTTT !!! DONT YOU DARE SPEAK TO ME AGAIN

Sujal uthke bottle vottle uthake nikal jaata hai

k-I never knew you have such a low mentality

s-I never knew you were such a despo sl**

She locks the door behind him burying herself in her tears and misery

Uske baad se Kashish ki Sujal se baat band

Ab hafta ho gaya Kashish ne Sujal se baat nahi ki naa Sujal ne Kashish se baat ki

Ab friday night Sujal nikal raha tha apne night out ke lie

Dekhta hai boss ko Kashish ke ghar mein ghuste hue

Sujal's automatically become narrow and his fist tightens

Sujal darvaza kholke phir andar ghus jaata hai ghar ke

Wo gaya to nahi apne ghar mein baitha hua

Pendulam ki tarah ghum raha hai idhar udhar

Soch raha hai kya ho raha hai wahan ye wo

Udhar Kashish bithati hai boss ko

k-Hello Mr Sudhir. Kaam ki baat shuru karte hai. I am ready to accept the post but I'll work from home..aur hum dono ka projct preferable diffrent hoga aur ho sake to office mein kaam karna ho to diffrent branch. I have agreed to work on less salary because of recession. II hope you will agree to my demands

Sujal se ab raha nahi gaya..jaake bell baja hi deta hai Kashish ke ghar ki

She opens the door and finds Sujal standing

k-Kya hai? What do you want?

Sujal dekhta hai Kashish ke side se boss ko

Wo boss bhi dekh raha hai

Kashish is frowning angrily at Sujal

s-I want !..I..I..want

She is staring at him in a business like manner

s-I want my white underwear

k-What??????????? Tum pagal ho gaye ho? I dont have any such thing!

s-Arre bhul gai? Arre hoga wahin..tumhari pink bra..that you wear underneath your pink dress uske pass hi to rakha tha

Kashish is zapped

k-What..are you talking about? I dont have any such thing aur tumhari cheezein mere paas kyun hongi? have it naa...aisa mat kaho..what will I only said naa..wearing something is better than not wearing anything naa aur baby ghar mein mehmaan bhi to aaye hain naa

Kashish to reddd ho gai hai

Boss-I guess..I should leave.Ii have kept the papers for you to sign

Sujal saare daant dikhake muskuraata hai arms around Kashish

Kashish hatne jaati hai to he squeezes her more

k-But ..sir...

s- Let him go baby...he knows we need privacy

Boss jaata hai to Kashish chillane lag jaati hai


Sujal just holds her face and plants his lips on her  turning it inton a huge juicy exploring wala kiss

Kashish pushes him away and slaps him

k- Do you think I am looseee???? GET OUTTT

Ab Sujal chala jaata hai

Jaake uss boss ko dhamki deta hai ki Kashish ko liya to mujhse bura koi naa hoga, dekh lio

Kashish ko call aata hai subah boss ka ki aapko nahi le sakte Miss Sinha

Kashish  is like kyun kya hua ye wo...aisa kyun kar rahe hain

Bohot puchne ke baad boss kehta hai ki Sujal threatnd him

Kashish kuch nhi kehti

Sujal to good news ka wait kar raha tha ki kab Kashish roni suraat banake ayegi ki job nahi mili

He was ready with his sorry speech about ystrday and sympathy speech

Kashish ke door lock karne ki awaaz aati hai toSujal  uchal ke bahar jaata hai

Par Kashish to saamaan uthake jaa rahi hai

Sujal is shocked ki ye kya ho gaya

s-Kash..wher..wher are you going?

She looks at him



k-I cant afford the rent since I am jobless

She knows she could have asked for a job from Sujal long ago, par usko laga ki Sujal is a friend usko deni hogi to khud offer karega

On the other hand, Sujal also thought about offering her job but he didn't know how would she react to his help and if some day she would really want his help. She just has to ask, why formality of offering

Kashish looks visibly disturbed

Sujal ko bura sa lag raha hai

Wo khud bhi ek week baad Italy jaane wala hai aur Kashish abhi jaa rahi hai

s-emm..Kashish! can join my company

She looks at him then shakes her head

k-No thanks...I have got a job...according to my capability. Ria ke frnd ki wedding planner ki company hai wahan

Sujal's heart knows ki wo iss situation mein Italy bhi chala gaya to Kashish se hamesha ke lie contact toot jayega

Uska dil kehta hai aisa

Islie pareshaan tha itna

Ussdin islie drink kar raha tha

But mind was saying usse kya

Kashsh kaun lagti ha uski???...Koi bhi nahi...kal kahin aur jayega to koi aur mil jayegi

Waise bhi Kashish means trouble

Dimaag ka dahi kar deti hai his calculative business mind argues with his heart

Uska dil to rode daal daalke sata raha hai bechare ko

Kashish ne aur musibat mol li shift karke

s-But...emm..Kashish is that new locality safe?

She looks at him

k-You dont have to think about a sl**'s safety

She smirks

He looks down

s-I am sorry...I...I

k- What are you sorry about? You just said the truth. You know that you were right. I AM  SL***, PR*******, W****...I am...

Her voice becomes coarse and heavy

k-So a greatt reputed man should not speak to a characterless looose gal lik me


k-Shhh shhh. I am emotional..but rational. I am a gal who slept with my boss for 2 yrs, slept with my neighbor and can sleep with every man willing. If anybody needs to sleep then..please give my cotact no. to him

Kashish ye saab baatein ghar ke bahar full volume mein chilla chillake bol rahi hai

Her heart is tearing apart wth emotions and broken dreams.

She wants clarity either Sujal should just move on and go or either give her full commitment

She is sick of living as a friend with benefit

She never wanted to get attached...but then she cant help it now

She doesn't want to pain herself more as she has realized that Sujal is no way close to commiting or a serious relationship with her

She is is like a doormat to Sujal she feels

Koi existence hi nahi hai

Ab Kashish chali jaati hai...chilla chullu ke...rote hue

Sab log aas paas ke ghar se bahar aa jaate hain shor sunke

Sujal silently retrieves back to his home

Edited by storywriter - 25 October 2012 at 10:15am

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
siyana Goldie

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Hey i was reading ur ff
The jaded prince in maaneet
version but u stopped
updating their nd due
to exams i stopped reading ff's
but now i m free so
started reading tjp in sk version
i cant explain how much
i loved readingTjp
its one awesomeff
nd u r very talented writer
and m gonna read this ff too
waise me on my phone
thatsy such weird comment

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-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Italy trip once again OuchOuch sounds scary LOLLOLLOL ek trip ke baad yeh haal dobara i wonder what will happen ConfusedConfused...

as 4 kashish's boss poor him sujal really went after him LOLLOLLOL...

God bless these two poor soulsLOLLOLLOL

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Aamnakideewani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10246

Posted: 26 October 2012 at 11:19am | IP Logged
very nice ff yaar lovely poor kash:( i hate sujal how can a guy cheat a girl  i hate guys GUYS are ************CensoredCensoredCensoredCensoredI CAN UNDERSTAND KASHISH's ffelings 2 baar dhoka toot he jayegi na usko b kisne kaha the bina commiyment itne agay bharne ko dumbo 

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
what will happen with these two...uff...

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
part 60
Kashish what was the need to approach her ex boss...
shes an idiot...
and well at least Sujal shooed him away...
and they really need time to understand the importance of the other...
cont soon dear...

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by siyana

Hey i was reading ur ff
The jaded prince in maaneet
version but u stopped
updating their nd due
to exams i stopped reading ff's
but now i m free so
started reading tjp in sk version
i cant explain how much
i loved readingTjp
its one awesomeff
nd u r very talented writer
and m gonna read this ff too
waise me on my phone
thatsy such weird comment

Thnks dear for redaing n likin my i wld strt with only maneet sk...i hope u stay with me...keep readin this fic n commenting...very happy to have u...thnks dear...sp thnks for commenting frm ph...i knw its a trouble

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