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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 41)

..moutushi.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
ShockedShocked ... Is this d same Sujal who was in India & Vegas ??????? What's his problem ?????? Beta tu to Sach mein pitega ek din Kashish seLOLLOL

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
part 58
honestly i dont understand Sujal...
he was all the while in India and in Vegas to lovey dovey and caring...
and here hes talking like this?
whats wrong with him?
or was he only interested to bed her?
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged


Kashish's eyes are drowning in tears hearing Sujal

She cant take more...she cant bear more pain...more hurt of broken heart...of broken dreams and shattered fantasies

She cups her hand to her mouth and runs to her room, shutting herself in the arms of soltitude

s-But still you know...she is actually a nice gal...very nice...who else could be more caring...people just need to understand her. She is pretty...I am attracted...she is caring...she is loyal...may be. She is almost indian girl wife materiel kinda thing... mean you cant just date and leave her knda thing...she is to be kept...,like dated and then married to be a wife... haven't seen somebody take so much crap from does she tolerate me

Bro-By the way mom was buggng me about hooking you wth some gal, she had liked

s-What??? Are you kidding me?? No way!

Bro-ok ok...leats leave for the offce else we wll be late


Sujal leaves for offce with his bro

Kashish s sitting n her room hugging her knees to herself...

She blames herslf of being a foolish for thinkin or even hoping something of that sought could happen

Sujal and she are hell and heaven apart

He is such a big guy...why would a man like him choose her

She is blaming herslef of hoping from life again..for feeling again

Why cant she just shut her heart and emotions

Kashish har pal khud ko yaad dilaati hai ki she should forget about cant never happen to her...nobody can love her

She isnt worth love...her life only has lonliness...

She should better habituate herself with it

She sane man in his right mind would ever choose her for a life partner...never love her

Its her punishment for breakin people's home...for giving sorow to her family

Sujal ne udhar keh to dia bhai ko but he knows cant help..seeing...her talking to her..staring at her

She decides of being aloof from him

She had locked herself the whole day inside the room

As Sujal comes back he knocks finding the door locked

He knocks a few times but when she doesn't respond he calls her name

Her voice sounds pretty hoarse as she responds in a 'hmm' and opens the door

He looks at her wth hs penetrating deep eyes

s-Are you not well?

k- I am fine

s- You don't...look fne. Tell me what's wrong

He says stepping inside and shutting the door behind him

She shakes her head in denial moving few steps back


s-What is the problem?

He asks so politely that she feels like she would melt then and there

She forces herself not to look at him

k-emm..nothing...emm..just...just...women problem it paining or something? am fine...ll just rest

s-yeah yeah ok...'ll send your dinner in the must eat

She does not even if thought the thought of food is repulsive right now

She steps towards her and kisses her forehead lightly

s-Rest. Do you think you will be able to travel tomorrow?

She looks up at him


s-Yeah...we are going back to India. My work is done here

k-oh...emm...don't worry I can travel. You go

s-I go? Emm///ok..take care

She nods and shuts the door behind him

Edited by storywriter - 19 October 2012 at 10:27am

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..moutushi.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
LOLLOL Gosh ... U really scared me about Sujal's replyLOL ... Here d misunderstanding & d cat & mouse game beginsWink ... Are yaar baat sun rahi thi to puri sun to leti ... Adhi hi sunni thi tujhe??????LOL ... Here bechara Sujal to even doesn't know a thing about dis misunderstanding ... Let's c for how much time our Kashish can resist our Sujal's charm ... Boy u'v got a mission in ur hand ... How 2 manaofy ur upset GFLOL ... All  d very bestThumbs Up

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 2:56am | IP Logged
part 59
yaar grrr u really made me to think about Sujal and now this update...
poor Kashish she didnt hear the later part...
cont soon dear...

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..moutushi.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Hey ... When will we get d nxt update ???????

Edited by Mfm_06 - 21 October 2012 at 10:11pm
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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Part 58

I was surprised Sujal readily got agreed to go back to sleep LOLLOLLOL i thot he will throw tantrums LOLLOLLOL but kashish still followed himLOLLOL

awww sujal OuchOuch what he did Kashish ki good morning ki bad morning kar di Cry...hope kashish able to handle herself Confused

Part 59

Lolz kashish shud have made a late exit from sujal's room LOLLOLLOL he hadn't completed what he wanted to say LOLLOLLOL... but he is surely one confused guy LOLLOLLOL Love or not to Love kashish...

so its back to India...can we expect old sujal back LOLLOLLOLLOL

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