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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 40)

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
hi
the up is hot
sujal brings ligerie wow
needs to reads more
 

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Finally relieved its old sujal only LOLLOLLOL for once i was in doubts he has some twin brother LOLLOLLOL
hope kashish is happy with compensation by sujal for staying whole day in jail LOLLOL

hope they have pleasant stay in Italy with not much problems Tongue

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged

Oh...GOD...It's a Sujal-Kashish ff...!!!
Gotta read...gotta read...!

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Posted: 16 October 2012 at 7:25am | IP Logged

Really ???? I mean I thogut tht Sujal was more serious & sure about this relationshipShocked ... Rather Kashish was a bit reluctantConfused ... If Sujal does sumthing again wid poor girl Angry...like her boss did 2 her ... I'll surely teach him a lesson on behalf of  KashishAngry  ... & what's wid Sujal's mother???? She seems sum Rani victoria tht if she 'll talk 2 Kashish & acknowledge her ... then her class will go down Angry... & The conversation btn Sujal & His bro gives a hint tht Sujal has been married b4 ... W8ing 4 d nxt part ... Let's c what more secrets Mr. Garewal has in store 4 us Confused




Edited by Mfm_06 - 16 October 2012 at 8:38am

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged

PART 58

He gives her a paper bag

Kashish leti hai aprehensivly dekhti hai ki kya hai

Its lingrie

s-Like it?

He kisses her

k- I though you gt something for me..?

s-Its for you, isn't it?

k-Its for you .. more than me ...

s-Dont you like it? Its the first time I have ever got this sort

k- No I dont mean that I dont like it. Its very nice. Thank you

s-hmm

He hides his face in her snuggling into her

k-Should I try it on?

s-You?..Yeah...but...cant we just finish it quickly...I need to get up early

k- I know...look why dont you just sleep. You look really tired

s-ok

Uthke chala jaata hai

k- umm you can sleep here if you want to..I dont snore

Wo chala gaya...ruka nahi...

Kashish bechari to baat bhi nahi kar pai Sujal se

Kashish ko lag raha hai ki Sujal change ho raha hai

Wo bhi change hone ki koshish kar rahi hai but its kinda not working out

For Sujal it almost seemed taht he meant business...aaya...f***d her...chala gaya

Bahar bhi nahi jaane deta

Sujal sone chala gaya

Kashish bhi pad gai thi bistar mein but couldn't sleep

Soch rahi thi about Sujal, about their journey, about his love, about her wishes...her final wish to be loved

She was so happy that she finally had him with whom she can settle down

She remembers he promised in Vegas that he will be with her forever

She thinks of her other wishes

How he helped her fulfil her wishes

How they painted the town red together

How he would embrace her in his arms..whenever she would need him

How he mystically saved her life

Her heart is flying in love

She gets up...neend to aa nahi rahi thi

Sneaks into his room

She enters..as silently as possible

Andhera sa hai

She walks over to him and closes her eyes wrapping herself around him

Slowly she dozes off n his soothing presence assuring her heart that he is wth her

Next morning-

'Kashsh...Kashish'

She opens her eyes to see Sujal's face glidng in front of her

Automatically a smile appears on her face seeing him

s-Kashish what are you doing here?

Her sleepy haze vanishes hearing hs connfrontal tone

She looks at him and blinks with confusion

k-Main..wo...

'Bro !'

She hears Sumuer's voce from the other sde of the door

s-Yeah!

Bro-You are late

s-I know!

Bro enters suddenly

Bro-O sorry.. didn't know

He apologises seeing Kashish there

She shakes her head and walks out of Sujal's room

As she leaves Sujal says to his bro

s-Sorry... Know  I am late

Bro is looking at Sujal meaningfully

s-What? Don't start now...Kashish this and Kashish that...I don't know how she landed up here

Bro-Bhai...her awhole attitude is ringing alarm bells

Sujal sighs

s-You know...sometimes I alos feel that...her body language and all

Bro-So what do you think about her? Real commitment and all forever?

s-O no! Kashish is a trouble!

Kashish walks back towards Sujal's room as she forgot her phone there

But as she starts to step in she hears Sujal's vioce say-

'O no! Kashish is a trouble!'

Her throaght becomes dry with surprise hearing Sujal's words

But her heart wont believe what she heard

She doesn't wanna misunderstand her love

She waits to hair the whole conversation

Bro-Trouble?

s-I mean yeah look at her she is veryyy emotional, impulsive, cry baby, takes hasty decisions, rather immature, lacks indivisuality and strength sometimes, she becomes dependent, makes several blunders, already has made a big mess of her life, attempted suicides, some times confused, not clear headed and so clearly a trouble. And gals become more trouble when men commit and offcourse she can't take a break up. She doesn't know wht is move on; also fights over petty things. Doesn't know how to take things light and have fun

Sujal thinks inside that ...what on the earth is he thinking hooking with an indian gal all of a sudden...He may have been really high to even consider

Kashish's eyes are drowning in tears hearing Sujal

She cant take more...she cant bear more pain...more hurt of broken heart...of broken dreams and shattered fantasies

She cups her hand to her mouth and runs to her room, shutting herself in the arms of soltitude



Edited by storywriter - 17 October 2012 at 11:22am

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
HI
its totally a shocking part
and a practical one
sujal for whom kashish did so much he is saying
why these guys thinks that a girl is a trouble specially an indian girl
i know he ahs done so much for kashish but seriously the he is behaving is no better than a typical man who just wants a girl for her body and when he fulfills his needs he throws her aways thinking that its nothing but a trouble
for a woman
anyways i hope that sujal relaise her love soon
cont soon

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
is this really what sujal thinks abt her or was he just saying this coz if his bro...

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