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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
aww felt bad for kashish ..no1 wished for her bday OuchOuch...even after kashish told him Sujal didn't wished him LOLLOL...
wonder if he remembers LOLLOLLOL...i doubt when he doesn't even remember he was hurt TongueTongueLOL
poor boy LOLLOLLOL bina galti ke got punishment LOLLOLLOL...waiting for his reaction LOLLOL

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
yeh tha update padhne ke baad mera first reaction
adult content dekh kar maine socha kya ne kya likha hoga???
 
chalo dono ki dosti ki gaari bohut acchi tarah se aage badh raha hai
waise yeh dosti ka ek reason yeh hai Sujal Kashish ke liye honestly care karta hai, yaa phir uske dil main koi aur baat hai
but Sujal ne Kashish ko birthday wish nahin kiya, thats sad, Kashish to dukhi hogi naa
phir woh kickLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
lekin coffee dene aa kar yeh kya sawal tha????
waiting for bechara Sujal ka reactionShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked aisa hi hoga naa Sujal ka shakal??
nice part
loved the update
great going
waiting for the next part


Edited by sania_58 - 25 July 2012 at 11:18pm

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged

**Adult Content


PART 4

s-What other thing?

 Kashish khidki vidki khol rahi thi

k-That

s-What??????????? Can't you just say it clearly?

k-Your ...[she says in such a inaudible tone that he can't here]

s-WHAT??????????? LOUDER KASH

k-I SAID, HOW IS UR PEN**??????????????????????????

Sujal chup...zip lag gayi bilkul and Kashish was laughing uncontrollably...pagalon ki tarah hasse jaa rahi hai...15 min tak hasti rehti hai

Sujal confused sa dekhe jaa raha hai, sharmaya sa, embarrassed sa. kabhi sharmaya kabhi idhar udhar dekha

k-ohhh...oh..wooo...oh God..I feel so relieved...I actually said it...I actually said the word...Sujal! I said!!!!!!! I just said

Suja; bina expression dekhe jaa raha hai 'yes I know' types

k-Idea! I'll just come

He feels isse kya hua? Wasn't I drunk last night...or...

Sujal gaya bathroom mein nahane dhone

Kashish aa gai kuch der baad aur Sujal ko dhek ke smile si paas kar rahi hai

He raises an eyebrow

k-It's my b'day

 s-yeah yeah...sorry happy bday

k-hmm...you forgot...so ought to get a punishment. You have to fulfill my wishes and you will help me

 She sits beside him and usko bhi bithati hai haath pakadke

k- You know, what I come from a small town very conservative family. I have never said the word...I just said it. I felt so relived...so nice...I mean...I know it's stupid...but then also...every person has those small wishes...right? So here is my list and I am so lucky to have a friend like you to help me and share it with

Sujal is looking at her blankly aur  andar uske danger ka siren baj raha hai

Kashish starts with her list

k-No. 1 to yahi tha...to say aloud the male pvt organ PEN**

s-Shhh!!!!!!!! There are kids near the locality

k-What? There are no kids. Do men have some other pvt things apart from that

He shakes his head looking at some piece of furniture

k-hmm..ok then. 2nd is I want to try a cigarette

He nods

k-3rd  I want to go to a medical shop and buy con**ms. 4th to visit a strip club

He crinkles his eyebrows

k-5th to go to a movie and dance in the theatre and hoot and whistle. 6th try drinking

She looks at Sujal

k-How about getting drunk?

He shrugs

k-I know you will take care of me

She puts her arms around his shoulders

s-You have never boozed before?

She shakes her head

s-Well...why?

k-I was afraid

s-Of?

k-Of losing control..and...but...but now I have you..I have no fear

She knew no one around would take care of her if she lost her senses

k-7th ..to wear a bikini and haan 8th hai to enact a bolywwod song

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by storywriter - 26 July 2012 at 10:32am

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Kashish darling has a long list of wishes LOLLOLLOL ...poor sujal LOLLOLLOL wonder if by end of it he wud die of embarrassment LOLLOLLOL...all the best boy Thumbs Up u really have a crazy girl to handle LOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
heyy, itni saari wishes
main padh rahi thi, aur soch rahi thi Kashish break mar.
main bas Sujal se itna hi kahungi all the best darling, aage tumhare liye bohut tough time hai.
 
well, lekin main ek baat keh na chahungi, Kashish ki jo wishes hai, woh according to our society, very much mardangi
mujhe lagta hai Kashish jis enviroment main badi hui hai, woh bohut conservative ke saath saath shayad kaafi male dominating bhi tha, so Kashish yeh sab karke aapne aap se kuch sabit karna chahti hai.saath hi recently woh exploited hui hai, soo tum samajh sakti ho, main kya keh rahi hoon
 
nice part
good work
waiting for the next.

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:19am | IP Logged
part 3
nice...
he kneed him...
poor guy...

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
ooh this part was too good cont soon

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
part 4
OMG her list is really making me faint...
bechara Sujal...
cont soon dear...

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