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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 38)

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Hey ... I'm a new reader hereSmile ... I really liked ur story Thumbs Up... What can i say about d butler ... He's just 2 muchROFL ... By d time he'll giv Kashish chai she'll lose her appetiteLOL ... & bechara Sujal's brother ... He's stucked between his brother & brother's GF ... Bechara ... I pity himLOL

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Part 51

aww workaholic Sujal is back LOLTongue ...seems romantic sujal kahin kho gaya  LOLLOLLOL now SK dont make issue out of it  LOLLOLLOL fight mat karna *fingers crossed* LOLLOLLOLLOL

Part 52

kashish darling getting bored SleepyLOLLOL flights get really boring when ur fellow passenger who happens to boyfriend decides to be unromantic  LOLLOLLOLLOL...
aww sujal got to know kashish ne kya dekha ipad mein LOLLOLLOLLOL...atleast some reaction from boy  TongueLOLLOLLOL good to know atleast he saw kashish while working  TongueLOLLOL

why kashish going alone to sujal's house sounds not good to me  OuchConfused

Part 53

Thank god kashish is regular in her Italian classes  TongueTongueLOLLOL good girl SmileBig smile
Hope bro turns good friend for kashish  SmileSmile ...

Part 54

I like the butler of the house  ROFL kitna khayal rakhta hai guest ka  LOLLOLLOLLOL wonder if he ask so many questions purposefully so that guests runs away irritatingly  LOLLOL& butler doesn't need to do so much work LOL

As for sujal come back soon before butler makes kashish a mad woman  LOLLOLLOL or ur mother-bro trouble her LOLLOLLOL




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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged

PART 55

Kashish looks at the king sized room

She had never seen something so large and beutiful

The butler knocks

k-Yes?

He brings the water in a single tray and places it and bows

k- Thank you

b-Sorry for inconvenience mam; the room is small as it is Sujal sir's guest room and he doesn't expect many stay over guests

k-oohh I'll..I'll manage..grazie [Thank you]

He bows and goes

Kashish looks around...room kissi angle se chotta nahi lag raha usse...

But then itna grand house hai... shayad in logon ko sab bada hi pasand hai to yeh room bhi chotta lag rah ho

The room has a huge 7 mattress bed and grand furnitures

Kashish ko samjh nahi aa raha ki karna kya hai itne bade bed ka

Kashish look at the clock...its late night...

Sujal wapas abhi tak aaya nahi...Kashsh ko neend nahi aa rahi hai...ek to jetlag upar se Sujal ka bahaviour

Kashish aise hi apne kamre mein chakkar kaat rahi thi...soch rahi thi ki Sujal aaya ki nahi; agar aaya to milne aayega ki nahi yaa so jayega.. bechara thak to gaya hoga.. wo khana kaise khaega yahan

Phir usse kuch kutton ki awaaz aayyi

Ab usne socha tha ki kamre ke bahar nahi ghumegi jagah kaafi strict lag rahi thi

Lekin bachhi bored thi...kutte intereting lage.. mauka bhi haath mein tha

Kashisj kamre se bahar nikal kar  pohonch gayi kutton ke paas

Wahin baith gai.. kutte bade the... aur kafi gusse wale bhi the to Kashisj durr hi baithkar unse baat karne lagi

Suna rahi thi ki kaun hai...Vegas mein kya kya dekha.. ab tak Italy kaisa laga

Pehle kutte grrr kar rahe the phir wo bhi chup chap obseve karne lage Kashish ko..

She seemed non threatening

Thoda paas akar they sniff around her extended hand

Kashish ne bhi private naam rakh diye kutto ke ab tak

Bhaag bhaag ke butler aaya

Butler-Madam !!!!!!!\

k- Huh? What?

He is panting

Butler-What are you doing here?

k- Nothing

Butler-You should be in your room..in your bed

k- I wasn't aware I had a night cerfew

Butler-Please mam kindly go back to your room...sir is really getting angry on us

k-  see

Kashsh pats the dogs heads

k-Bye Chief, bye Bruno.. see you tommorow..

Then buler ko bolti hai

k- Can you lead me back. I 'll get lost

He bows

Butler-After you mam. Please walk straight

k- I said I don't know the way.. so I cant possible lead, can I? Why don't you just walk ahead?

Butler-You are the master's guest...servant's cant lead master's or guests

He says as if it the fact every creature knows

k- I wont tell if you wont

Butler-Sorry madam  [head held high]

k- Fine...

Kashish chalne lagti hai straight...kahin kuch dikh jaye to ruk jaye.. kahin koi galat turn

They reach the room...butler bows and leaves

Sujal was standing there looking out of the wondow..hand in back

k- Hi, how did your presentation go?

He turns straight faced

s-What were you thinking..when you left the room? Huh?

k- I...

s-You know what is the time? Civilised people sleep this time. They dont roam arnd aimlessly lik you!

k-I was ..

s-You were what????????

k-I was not able to sleep. I heard the dogs barking so went to have a look.. I didn't know that this is supposed to be like a jail cell after the lights out bell and I am jeteagged rather than uncivilized; if you know the difference

He shows her hand...

s-I came here to take a look at how you are doing but you...

He shakes his head

k- I am doing fine

Sujal just sighs

s-Good night

Kashish just gazes him wordlessly

He walks away shutting the door behind him

k- Goodnight...

She says after he goes and remans gazing as he goes feeling dejected, sad, hearbroken, confused, angry and frustrated

Kashish bhi so jati hai phir...

Subah hoti hai

Kashish uth gai jaldi 7 baje.. ye sochke ki kahin usse kahe tum jahillon ki tarah 8 baje tak soti ho?!!Dispicable

She hears the ring of phone somewhere but its not her cell

Kashish idhar udhar dhund rahi hai kya baja kya baja

Wall ke saath phone hai...intercom...wo baj raha hai

Kashish uthati hai

k- Hello?

s-Come down for breakfast , Kashish. We have breakfast at 7 am

k- oh ok.. umm I don't know where to come

s-Open the door

Kashsh kholti hai gate

Sujal khada hai

He was smiling then frowns

s-You didn't wash?

k- Did you tell me to be ready?

s-You didn't know?

k- No

s-You didn't read the planner?

k- What planner?

He looks at the side table

Kashish looks too

To usne dekha ki wahan paper rakha hai ek...

k- Is that the planner?

He gives a meanigful look

s-Have you become dumb here, Kashish? Come down fast..I am going

k- I thought it was ome old decorative papyrus so didn't wanna touch it...I am coming

She says keeping a tight lid on her anger...turning his comments into jokes

s-No...I am already late and I dont wanna be late further

k- I see. Is there an alternative plan for me then in that planner or do I stay inside the room?

s-Come down quick..don't waste time in useless talks...

He gives her a bear hug and walks out

She doesn't even fel any warmth from the hug

Thankfully usne pehle raat mein hi sab saamaan bahar nikal liya tha..

She gets ready and comes down in 15 minutes

Everybody was having breakfast in hugeee dinning hall in king size dinning table

There was a lady who seemed lik the mom and the two brothers

Kashish comes managing to look presentable and not huffing from the hurrying

Sab pin drop silence hai khaate hue

Kashsh wahin just gate ke andar khadi hai

Teeno fully serious face banake khaa rahe han

Sujal gets up...seeing his watch

s-Excuse me everyone..I am getting late

Butler ne kursi kheench Kashish ke baithne ke liye

Everyone look at the butler

Maa frowns

Kashish bhi samjh nahi paa rahi ki Baithe, Sujal se baat kare yaa Maa ko goodd morning bole..

k -Buongiorno [Good morning]

She says smiling in general direction then says to Sujal

k- Work?

Everybody looks at her

Maa smirks then looks at Sujal

Sujal Kashish ko ankhein dikhata hai...baithne ko kehta hai

She sits chup chap

Bro-emm..good morning Miss Sinha

She smiles and nods at him

k-Good morning Sumuer

Bro-emm..mom this is Miss Kashish Sinha..bro's aquintence

k- Nice to meet you mam

Ma alooks at Kashish

Ma-7.20

Maa looks at Sujal

k- Excuse me?

Maa gives her a veryyy hard look like'''mannerless gal..

Kashish teeno ko ek hi baar mein dekhne ki koshish kar rahi hai whirling her head confusedly

s-emm..she is new..to Italy..and she is jet lagged...she would tak care tomorrow

Kashish gives back a difensive look ki maine kya kiya hai...

Ma sighs

Ma-Have the breakfast miss

k- Thank you mam

Saamne menu hai breakfast ka

Butler aata hai

Kashish ka mann kar raha hai menu ko cumple karke butler ko pakda de

s-Good bye every one. Good bye mother

He goes

Kashish opens her mouth to say bye lekin band kar leti hai..

Jab koi bye nahi kar raha to wo kyun uchle...waise hi Sujal ka khisak raha tha...

Maa bhi uth jaati hai excuse me bolke

Bro-..emm..I too have to go Kashish...bye for now...see ya

k- Yah bye..



Edited by storywriter - 13 October 2012 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tyro

who is sujal..??

what do u mean dear?
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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Mfm_06

Hey ... I'm a new reader hereSmile ... I really liked ur story Thumbs Up... What can i say about d butler ... He's just 2 muchROFL ... By d time he'll giv Kashish chai she'll lose her appetiteLOL ... & bechara Sujal's brother ... He's stucked between his brother & brother's GF ... Bechara ... I pity himLOL

Hey thnks dear...for likin the stry and commenting on it... really hope u wll keep on reading n commenting on every part...u knw ii have a grp on fb to notify ppl on updates...u can pm me ur fb id n i can add uSmile...thanks anyways...lov ya
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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -purnima-

Part 51

aww workaholic Sujal is back LOLTongue ...seems romantic sujal kahin kho gaya  LOLLOLLOL now SK dont make issue out of it  LOLLOLLOL fight mat karna *fingers crossed* LOL

Part 52

kashish darling getting bored SleepyLOLLOL flights get really boring when ur fellow passenger who happens to boyfriend decides to be unromantic  LOL...
aww sujal got to know kashish ne kya dekha ipad mein LOL...atleast some reaction from boy  LOL good to know atleast he saw kashish while working  TongueLOLLOL

why kashish going alone to sujal's house sounds not good to me  OuchConfused

Part 53

Thank god kashish is regular in her Italian classes  LOL good girl SmileBig smile
Hope bro turns good friend for kashish  SmileSmile ...

Part 54

I like the butler of the house  ROFL kitna khayal rakhta hai guest ka  LOL wonder if he ask so many questions purposefully so that guests runs away irritatingly  LOLLOL& butler doesn't need to do so much work LOL

As for sujal come back soon before butler makes kashish a mad woman  LOLLOLLOL or ur mother-bro trouble her LOLLOLLOL





So glad ur backed ...missed u sooo veryyy much
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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
nice cont soon
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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
It was nice ... But i don't get d sudden change in Sujal's behaviour ... What happened 2 him after cuming 2 Italy ?????? ... Why is he giving cold sholder 2 Kashish ... D mom seems a hard nut 2 crack ... Luking forward 2 d nxt part & hope tht all d confusions will b cleared soon ...

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