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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 38)

NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged


He gives her a paper bag

Kashish leti hai aprehensivly dekhti hai ki kya hai

Its lingrie

s-Like it?

He kisses her

k- I though you gt something for me..?

s-Its for you, isn't it?

k-Its for you .. more than me ...

s-Dont you like it? Its the first time I have ever got this sort

k- No I dont mean that I dont like it. Its very nice. Thank you


He hides his face in her snuggling into her

k-Should I try it on?

s-You?..Yeah...but...cant we just finish it quickly...I need to get up early

k- I know...look why dont you just sleep. You look really tired


Uthke chala jaata hai

k- umm you can sleep here if you want to..I dont snore

Wo chala gaya...ruka nahi...

Kashish bechari to baat bhi nahi kar pai Sujal se

Kashish ko lag raha hai ki Sujal change ho raha hai

Wo bhi change hone ki koshish kar rahi hai but its kinda not working out

For Sujal it almost seemed taht he meant business...aaya...f***d her...chala gaya

Bahar bhi nahi jaane deta

Sujal sone chala gaya

Kashish bhi pad gai thi bistar mein but couldn't sleep

Soch rahi thi about Sujal, about their journey, about his love, about her wishes...her final wish to be loved

She was so happy that she finally had him with whom she can settle down

She remembers he promised in Vegas that he will be with her forever

She thinks of her other wishes

How he helped her fulfil her wishes

How they painted the town red together

How he would embrace her in his arms..whenever she would need him

How he mystically saved her life

Her heart is flying in love

She gets up...neend to aa nahi rahi thi

Sneaks into his room

She silently as possible

Andhera sa hai

She walks over to him and closes her eyes wrapping herself around him

Slowly she dozes off n his soothing presence assuring her heart that he is wth her

Next morning-


She opens her eyes to see Sujal's face glidng in front of her

Automatically a smile appears on her face seeing him

s-Kashish what are you doing here?

Her sleepy haze vanishes hearing hs connfrontal tone

She looks at him and blinks with confusion


'Bro !'

She hears Sumuer's voce from the other sde of the door


Bro-You are late

s-I know!

Bro enters suddenly

Bro-O sorry.. didn't know

He apologises seeing Kashish there

She shakes her head and walks out of Sujal's room

As she leaves Sujal says to his bro

s-Sorry... Know  I am late

Bro is looking at Sujal meaningfully

s-What? Don't start now...Kashish this and Kashish that...I don't know how she landed up here

Bro-Bhai...her awhole attitude is ringing alarm bells

Sujal sighs

s-You know...sometimes I alos feel that...her body language and all

Bro-So what do you think about her? Real commitment and all forever?

s-O no! Kashish is a trouble!

Kashish walks back towards Sujal's room as she forgot her phone there

But as she starts to step in she hears Sujal's vioce say-

'O no! Kashish is a trouble!'

Her throaght becomes dry with surprise hearing Sujal's words

But her heart wont believe what she heard

She doesn't wanna misunderstand her love

She waits to hair the whole conversation


s-I mean yeah look at her she is veryyy emotional, impulsive, cry baby, takes hasty decisions, rather immature, lacks indivisuality and strength sometimes, she becomes dependent, makes several blunders, already has made a big mess of her life, attempted suicides, some times confused, not clear headed and so clearly a trouble. And gals become more trouble when men commit and offcourse she can't take a break up. She doesn't know wht is move on; also fights over petty things. Doesn't know how to take things light and have fun

Sujal thinks inside that ...what on the earth is he thinking hooking with an indian gal all of a sudden...He may have been really high to even consider

Kashish's eyes are drowning in tears hearing Sujal

She cant take more...she cant bear more pain...more hurt of broken heart...of broken dreams and shattered fantasies

She cups her hand to her mouth and runs to her room, shutting herself in the arms of soltitude

Edited by storywriter - 17 October 2012 at 11:22am

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
its totally a shocking part
and a practical one
sujal for whom kashish did so much he is saying
why these guys thinks that a girl is a trouble specially an indian girl
i know he ahs done so much for kashish but seriously the he is behaving is no better than a typical man who just wants a girl for her body and when he fulfills his needs he throws her aways thinking that its nothing but a trouble
for a woman
anyways i hope that sujal relaise her love soon
cont soon

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jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
is this really what sujal thinks abt her or was he just saying this coz if his bro...

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..moutushi.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
ShockedShocked ... Is this d same Sujal who was in India & Vegas ??????? What's his problem ?????? Beta tu to Sach mein pitega ek din Kashish seLOLLOL

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
part 58
honestly i dont understand Sujal...
he was all the while in India and in Vegas to lovey dovey and caring...
and here hes talking like this?
whats wrong with him?
or was he only interested to bed her?
cont soon dear...

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged


Kashish's eyes are drowning in tears hearing Sujal

She cant take more...she cant bear more pain...more hurt of broken heart...of broken dreams and shattered fantasies

She cups her hand to her mouth and runs to her room, shutting herself in the arms of soltitude

s-But still you know...she is actually a nice gal...very nice...who else could be more caring...people just need to understand her. She is pretty...I am attracted...she is caring...she is loyal...may be. She is almost indian girl wife materiel kinda thing... mean you cant just date and leave her knda thing...she is to be kept...,like dated and then married to be a wife... haven't seen somebody take so much crap from does she tolerate me

Bro-By the way mom was buggng me about hooking you wth some gal, she had liked

s-What??? Are you kidding me?? No way!

Bro-ok ok...leats leave for the offce else we wll be late


Sujal leaves for offce with his bro

Kashish s sitting n her room hugging her knees to herself...

She blames herslf of being a foolish for thinkin or even hoping something of that sought could happen

Sujal and she are hell and heaven apart

He is such a big guy...why would a man like him choose her

She is blaming herslef of hoping from life again..for feeling again

Why cant she just shut her heart and emotions

Kashish har pal khud ko yaad dilaati hai ki she should forget about cant never happen to her...nobody can love her

She isnt worth love...her life only has lonliness...

She should better habituate herself with it

She sane man in his right mind would ever choose her for a life partner...never love her

Its her punishment for breakin people's home...for giving sorow to her family

Sujal ne udhar keh to dia bhai ko but he knows cant help..seeing...her talking to her..staring at her

She decides of being aloof from him

She had locked herself the whole day inside the room

As Sujal comes back he knocks finding the door locked

He knocks a few times but when she doesn't respond he calls her name

Her voice sounds pretty hoarse as she responds in a 'hmm' and opens the door

He looks at her wth hs penetrating deep eyes

s-Are you not well?

k- I am fine

s- You don't...look fne. Tell me what's wrong

He says stepping inside and shutting the door behind him

She shakes her head in denial moving few steps back


s-What is the problem?

He asks so politely that she feels like she would melt then and there

She forces herself not to look at him

k-emm..nothing...emm..just...just...women problem it paining or something? am fine...ll just rest

s-yeah yeah ok...'ll send your dinner in the must eat

She does not even if thought the thought of food is repulsive right now

She steps towards her and kisses her forehead lightly

s-Rest. Do you think you will be able to travel tomorrow?

She looks up at him


s-Yeah...we are going back to India. My work is done here

k-oh...emm...don't worry I can travel. You go

s-I go? Emm///ok..take care

She nods and shuts the door behind him

Edited by storywriter - 19 October 2012 at 10:27am

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