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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 35)

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
so they r in Italy..finally...

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged

PART 53

k-Theek hai... then tum jao apni meeting mein I'll do what I'll have to do aur apne bhai ko bhi keh do ki zarurat nhai hai yahan aane ka kasht karne ki taxi bhi hoti hai

He doesn't answer

Takes the bags and strts walking towards the exit

s-He is already there

He goes and hugs the bro

s-Fretellooo

Kashish smiles nicely towards the brother extending her hand

k- Hi I am Kashish

Bro takes her extended hand  and kisses it

Bro-Sumaer

Kashish looks surprised and slightly amused by his actions

k- Nice to meet you too Sumaer

s-Si prende la sua casa [You take her home]. Ho un incontro [I have a meeting]

k- You don't have to tell him that, where else would he be taking me?

Kashsh says as usko aajkal thodi samajh aane lagi hai Italian

Padai karti thi wo roz..

s-Cia..fretello...bye Kashish

Kashish gives Sujal a icy good bye nod

bro-Come..shall we?

 Bro says in his italian accent

k- You can speak english then? Good!

Kashish to bina bole bore hogai thi itni der...sab bahar nikalne ko umad raha  hai

bro-Yes I do speak english

k- Aur hindi?

He nods

Bro- I understand hindi too and bhai told me..that you don't understnd italian

k-haan thodi thoodi aati ha... but then why do you and Sujal always talk in italian?

Bro-Bcoz we are comfortable that way. Will you have something? Eat ? Drink?

Kashish bites her lips

k- Well actually I am not hungry.. I really dont wan't to go to your home as yet...do you think we can just drive aound that is if you are not busy?

Bro-Why?

He smiles..he does resembles Sujal...but not as good as he is

Kashish smiles seeing how alike he and Sujal look while smiling

Bro-emm...drive..around..

Bro..to galat galat opinion bana raha hai Kashish ke baare mein

k- It just seems wrong to go to someone's house as guest without the peson who  has invited you.. may be only Indians think tht way... I dont know but it just feels wrong...but if you are busy.. why dont oyu drop me at some isght seing place and I'll catch a taxi after some time?

Bro-No...bhai has clearly asked me to take you home

He says in a serious tone

Bro-So lets go

Kashish drops her rmouth a bit and looks at him confused for a bit

k- Your bhai told  me to go wherever  want...and you may be his younger brother that you have to obey him but  dont and  wont. If you cant take me anywhere then please leave. I'll find a hotel to stay

He frowns hard...reall hard..and gives her a hard look

Kashish matches his look easily.. Sujal ko sambhal sambhal ke aadat ho gai

Bro-See Miss..I don't wanna force you; if you want anything...then call bhai and let him know

Bro dials Sujal's no

k- Your r disturbing him; its your head...

She mutters

Bro-Bhai its urgent. This girl is adamant and wont listen to me

Bro Kashish ko phone deta h

k-Your brother is taking me against my wish. Tell him he can leave without me

Kashish phone mein keh kar bina kuch sune bro ko wapas pakda deti hai

Bro-Hmm

Phone kaattha hai

Bro-Bhai said...to get a ticket now for India

Kashish raises her brow.

 Ek bar to use laga ki mazaak hai ki aise hi itna kuch hone ke baad no one would surely act like that

k- That is all he said?

Bro-Yes...either you come home..or either you go home

Kashish kii ankhien bhar aati hain... that Sujal was being so rigid harsh and cruel

Par she deosn't want to create a scene. roegi nahi wo wahan..

Kisi tarah ankhein band karke she controls her self

Bro-Better you come home. Bhai will see you in a while

k- It isn't even about that...

Kashsh  to kya kya sochne lagi tha...

She is quickly getting jolted out of her fantasy world

Lekin she is determined ki kisi bhi issue ki wajah se ladenge nahi...

Kashish expected atleast Sujal jaakar sabhi se ek bar milwata to..

Jab ki Kashish ne keh rakha hai ki tumhari maa se darr lagta hai

She  give Sujal's bro a trembling smile

k- I gues then I go to your home. Your brother doesn't even give clear instructions to every one..

She tries to make the matter light with a forced laugh

Bro nods..and starts walking

Bro-Mad woman

He mutters



Edited by storywriter - 10 October 2012 at 11:35am

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged

PART 54

k- I gues then I go to your home. Your brother doesn't even give clear instructions to every one..

She tries to make the matter light with a forced laugh

Bro nods..and starts walking

Bro-Mad woman

He mutters

Kashish sunn leti hai.. but shrugs it off.. isiliye wo akele nahi jana chahti...

Ab kuch kar bhi to nahi sakti.. ego ki wajah se sirf sab chod kar India jaana ot pagalpann hua..

She starts following bro

They reach the hugeee masion

Its HUGEEE...almost like a castle

Kashish looks wide eyed at the place

k- This is your home?! Really?

Bro-Yes

Kashsh 1 min to dekhti hai...

k- Itni badi jagah ka karte kya hoge lekin...

Bro-We live

She ooks at him with 'you mad look'

k- I figured thot out once you said its ur home..

Kehkar Kashish chup ho jaati hi.. obviously to usse tooo grand, opulance and wastage lag raha hai wo to inn logon ko bac civic need lagti hai

Some people in suits open the door for them

There's actually a butler who bows to them as they enter

Kashish to apna muhh band karke kisi tarah se dekh kar aayi andar

The butler bows

b-Welcome madam. We are very glad to have you as our guest. We will always be there for your service

Butler luggage uthata hai

Bro-Guest room

Kashish chup chap follows looking around.. trying to be demure and sophisticated

Butler-Would mam like some dinner?

k- uh no thank you.. I am not hungry

Butler-But sir called and ordered to provide dinner for mam

She closes her eyes momentarily...

She doesn't like being managed this way

k- I see. ...probably he also ordered someone to ram it down my throat if I dont eat...

She mutters to herself.. carefull not to let the butler hear

k- Actually you see I am a bit jetlagged and really not hungry, I dont wish to waste food

Butler-Wont madam have anything?

k- ummm.. just some tea then?

He bows...

Butler-Black or white

k-Half milk 1 sugar no cream, thank you

Butler-Cream milk or toned milk mam?

k-No cream so toned...

Butler-Cow mil?..Buffalo mik?...Goat milk? Camel milk?

k-You have camel milk? Wow! Ahem I mean uhh cow milk please

Butler-Yes mam..brown sugar...white sugar...or processed sugar mam?

k-Sugar cubes if you have..?

Butler-Yes mam..cubes of brown sugar? White sugar or processed sugar?

k-White sugar cubes

Butler-Yes mam...assamese tea? Sri lankan tea? irish tea? Darjeling tea? Chinese tea? Herbal tea? Red tea? Black tea? or masala tea?

k-oh I dont know... do you have any coffee?

Kashish says it all with a very poiite smile

Butler-Yes mam black coffee or white coffee?

k-I think black but then I may not be able to sleep. I have batter idea...how about the normal crystal water every guest is offered upon entering?

Butler-Yes mam. You want it with salt or no salt?

k-I want it packed in the bottle. Just the way it is...the seal unbroken

Butler-Mineral water or ganges water or lake water

k-Mineral water

He bows

Butler-Water in room temp...cold or warm?

k-I would like to have it now in whatever condition it is...preferabley room but

Butler-But mam?

k-Can you please make it  quick?

Yes mam..he bows and goes

k- And oh excuse me

Butler-Yes mam

k-Do have number for pizza delivery ?

Butler frowns

Butler-This late mam? If you want pizza then cook can make it for you

k- Are u questioning my choise Mr.?

Butler-No madam..actually outside items are not allowed in the premises

k- I see...

Butler-And madam gates are closed for outsiders at 9...sir had you in with special permission

k-Oh I see. Well then just the water thank you

He bows and leaves

Kashsh looks at the king sized room

She had never seen something so large and beutiful



Edited by storywriter - 11 October 2012 at 10:56am

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 1:26am | IP Logged
part 53
what he said that?
how Sujal say like that?
so high handed...

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
part 54
OMG that butler is really too much...
by the time he bring something the appetite will be lost...
poor Kashish...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 12 October 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
who is sujal..??

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Hey ... I'm a new reader hereSmile ... I really liked ur story Thumbs Up... What can i say about d butler ... He's just 2 muchROFL ... By d time he'll giv Kashish chai she'll lose her appetiteLOL ... & bechara Sujal's brother ... He's stucked between his brother & brother's GF ... Bechara ... I pity himLOL

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Part 51

aww workaholic Sujal is back LOLTongue ...seems romantic sujal kahin kho gaya  LOLLOLLOL now SK dont make issue out of it  LOLLOLLOL fight mat karna *fingers crossed* LOLLOLLOLLOL

Part 52

kashish darling getting bored SleepyLOLLOL flights get really boring when ur fellow passenger who happens to boyfriend decides to be unromantic  LOLLOLLOLLOL...
aww sujal got to know kashish ne kya dekha ipad mein LOLLOLLOLLOL...atleast some reaction from boy  TongueLOLLOLLOL good to know atleast he saw kashish while working  TongueLOLLOL

why kashish going alone to sujal's house sounds not good to me  OuchConfused

Part 53

Thank god kashish is regular in her Italian classes  TongueTongueLOLLOL good girl SmileBig smile
Hope bro turns good friend for kashish  SmileSmile ...

Part 54

I like the butler of the house  ROFL kitna khayal rakhta hai guest ka  LOLLOLLOLLOL wonder if he ask so many questions purposefully so that guests runs away irritatingly  LOLLOL& butler doesn't need to do so much work LOL

As for sujal come back soon before butler makes kashish a mad woman  LOLLOLLOL or ur mother-bro trouble her LOLLOLLOL




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