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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 33)

-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2012 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
i am confused for whom to feel bad for LOLLOL...for sujal for the condition he is in or for kashish darling LOLLOLLOL ...poor her kaha phas gayi LOLLOLLOL.

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
one song dedicated for this up
phas gayaaa
its really hillarious i read this up sorry couldnt finished reading the whole fic
plz cont soon really waiting to see what will happen

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jikky_84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
 ROFL Poor Kashish...she is so embarrassed LOL

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged


k-Main...main..bartender ko bula kar lati hoon

He grabs her hand again

s-Kazzz help

Kashish looks here and there and then back at Sujal.. and gulps ...

k-Tum mujhe kahin ka nahi chodo ge

She says  looks down and tries to think that Sujal is a kid and she is just helping a kid go to bathroom thats all. nothing had happened betweeb then in the evening and this doesn't have to be anyhting awkward at all

Samjha rahi hai khudko while her fingers shake a little ...kisi tarah se fumbling .. she manages to opent the buttons and the zipper

k- Jao!!

She says hastily moving away from him folding her arms to her chest

Sujal staggers in the bathroom

He comes pback in few minutes looking relieved and askin her to zip it on

Kashish gives him a 'Are you mad' look

k- Either you do it or its the gay bar tender

She warns stepping away from him before e he can grab her

s-i trieddd

k- Poori raat padi hai. Keep on trying

Some men pass...lookin at Suja...they were actually...ogling

Guys-Any prbs?

Kashish ko samjh nahi aaraha ki kya kahe ..kare...

Sujal to bass Kashish ko dekh raha hai

Kashish soch rahi hai ki Sujalki izzaat bachaye ya khud ki...they guys looked gay enough

To finally sochti hai ki theek hai naa.. kaun jaanta hai.. wapas thodi kabhi ayenga.. and Sujal ek bachcha hai 3 saal ka..bachchha who needs help

Kashish ko pehle laga inn guys ko bole help karne ke lie

Par the usko laga ki pata nahi zip band karte karte molest kar diya to

Kashish finally says to guy

k- No evrything is fine. Thank you

The guys go

She moves to Sujal

k- Tum mujhse baat mat karna ab.. aur aaj ke baad sharaab pii to wohi bottle tumhare sarr par phod dungi

Sujal holds his ears...ultra cutely

Kashish jaldi se bending down so she can look instead of grop around

She finds thh zipper and pulls it up

Band kar dete hai button bhi...7 sec ke andar andar

Sujal grins stupidly

Kashish is red with embarrasement

k-Bass ab aur ek word nahi

Kashish ka earing gir jaata hai

s-I'' up...shhh...I..

He bends

k- Nahi ..

Sujal haath idhar udar maarta hai


k-Sujal khade ho

He then moves in othr direction


She tries to pull him up straight

Sujal aur haath maarta hai...trying to grab it

s-shhh shhh bohot..shaitaan hai ye

Kashish jhuk kar grabs her earing

k- Lo mil gaya

She put it back on quickly

Sujal straightens up

Itne sab aa jaate hain girte padte ki ghar chalo

Sjal apni masti mein chalne lagta hai and brushes to a pillar


k- Pillar hai wo Sujal. Chalo aram se chalo

He is again and againn sayin sorry to tht pllar

s-Kazzz ur the bezttt

He leans on her

Kashish mutters to herself

k-I am the stupidest

s-u knw..whn i zee u [Patting his chest] beats

k- otherwise nahi karta?


She is deadpanned

s-really harddd

Kashish just nods.. letting him mummble.. usko pata hai ki piike majnu kuch bhi bolta hai. and romantic bhi zyada ho jata hai.. aur itnae kuch ke baad Kashish ka mood nahi hai romance ka...

Kashish Raj aur Crsyal ko ek gaadi mein hotel bhejti hai

Ria aur Zach ko Zach ke ghar bhejti hai

Phir chest thumping cave dwelling Sujal ko apne saath gaadi mein baithake hotel ki aur

Sujal had already passed out mumbling about ppl leaving him

Uski muttering jo italian hindi eng mixed hai..zyada kuch samajh to aa nhai rahi Kashish ko

To wo Sujal ke baalon par haath pher deti hai trying to sooth him... relax him into sleep

Sujal  was feeling so relaxed

He puts his head on her lap

His lips brushing against her navel

Kashish sarr rakh leti hai cotrolling a shiver at his actions reminding herself that he is a kid.. just a kid in need of care

Hotel paas hi tha to jaldi pohonch jaate hain

Kashish  jaise taise usko uthwake le aati hai room tak

Sujal to was in la la land

Kashish Sujal ko leta deti hai uske jute-wute utarti hai muttering as usual all the time

Sujal tab se badbadaye ja raaha hai apni mixed language mein

Kashish apni alag kahani bak bak kar rahi hai

Dono blah blah

Sujal ke lie sab blurt sa hai..bass Kazz Kazz repeat hue jaa raha hai

Again Sujal ka phone bajta hai

It displays bro calling

Kashish Sujal ko settle karke jaa rahi hoti hai change karne ki phone bajta hai

k- Sujal tumhara phone baj raha hai

Sujal to pada sa hua thaapni dhun mein singign the drunk song now

k- Sujal PHONE!!!

She shouts to get his attention


He opens his eyes with greattt difficulty sab 4-5 dikh raha h

She gets his phone out of his pocket and hands it to him

Kaan par laga deti hai uske

Sujal haath idhar udhar maar raha hai phone pakadne ke lie

k- Baat karo!

Sujal relaxes on the head board


She holds his one hand with her own...dussre se phone pakad rakha hai

Sujal apne dusre haath se grabs her soft hands


Bro-Ciao fratello [hello brother]


Bro-Ancora ubriaco?  [Still drunk?]

s-il..vio..frazelo ...hiccc-aco..acoza  [still?]

Bro- You are drunk , my brother

He says in accenetd engligh

s-Blizzz -hic- zi..amo..frazello... [love u bro] ziii amooo ...hic-

Sujal looks at Kashish drunkly...:

s-...zi..amo..Kazzz [love u Kazz]

He drunkly kisses the air

Kashish narrows at him and gives him a disgusted look

Bro-Vieni in Italia? [are you coming  to Italy?]

s-Huh????  Iza..izalia..yyuppp

Bro- Did I...interrompere[interuppt] something?

s-Nahhh...nahhh ...hic-

Bro- You are in woman's company  but? Kazzz ...-hic-

Bro sighs.. Kazz Kazz Kazz sun kar pakk gaya hai.. wo

Bro-Quando vieni in Italia? When are you coming?

s-zo..zomani [domani...tomorrow] ...-HIC-

b- Is your Kazz coming too?

s-Yuppp Kazzieee nor...cvin..wizout..Kaziie ...-hic-

Bro-Mamma non sarebbe felice  [Maama wouldn't be happy] if you bring this Kazz

s-zonnn careee..noz..cmin..wizout..-HIC-..Kazzz

Bro sighs a long one..

Bro -Si deve la cura [You should care] ...-hic- my Kazzz...she iz

Sujal bends..and keeps his head on Kashish's lap

Bro- It's your head on the ... piatto. I have fore warned you. Let me know when you would arrive. I would come to pick you up

s-Nooo...Kazzz iz vy happiness...zell to mumma...Zuzal won come..wizout Kazzz ...-hiccc-

Bro- oh you bring her but I doubt you would go back with her...

Bro mutters to himself

Bro- Let me know when you would arrive. I would come to pick you up

s-Hmmm ...-HIC-

Bro-You enjoy your time with your Kazzz

s-Fra- zellooo...ti uuu ...-hic-

Bro-Notte buon fratello [Good night brother]

Kehkar wo phone rakh deta hai

Subah hoti hai-

Sujal to pada hua hai

Sujal ne phone patka his head was on her lap haath bhi pakda tha

k-Ab kya kar rahe ho? Kiska phone tha? Haath chodo mera

Thodi der jab tak hosh raha he was kissing her navel

Phir so gaya

Kashish tried to push him off when he was a bit awake but his arms were wrapped around her waist tightly

Jab so gaya to kisi tarah se she slips out from under him

Edited by storywriter - 03 October 2012 at 10:49am

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ronojoy_ria IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
oh finallyyy relieveddd
from problem
oh kashish good idea think him a kid bcoz he is behaving also like that
god knows what he will ask next thing to her
plz cont soon
jikky_84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Finally reached back LOL

Phir chest thumping cave dwelling Sujal ROFL just loved this line Embarrassed
Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
omg...poor kashish...

sujal was totally out of his mind...
-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 October 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Thank god !! kashish darling managed TongueTongue wonder if sujal remembers what all he put her through last night LOLLOLLOLLOL
waiting for Italy vacation Day Dreaming LOLLOL may be we will have a sober Suzzaaal LOLLOLLOL

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