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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged
loving this romantic sujal...

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Posted: 30 September 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged

PART 45

Kashish is frowning and  giving disaproving looks through out

Zach-Let's have a compettetion

s-Sit [He gestures to Kashish]

Kashish chup baith jati haii.. usse bhi pata hai koi nahi sunega...

Wahan Crystal bhi pohonch jaati hai

The place is actually beautiful ...but nobody noticed much

Sab piina chalu karte hain...not drinking rather gulping like fish in water

Kashish to wo apna sweet lime soda order karke baith jaati hai sabke saath

Bohot mann kar raha hai uska ki sabko mana kare...sabko rok le...sabke haathon se drink ka glass cheen le

k- Tum log aram se bhi to pii sakta  ho.. aese pii rae ho jaise kal to tumhe phir kabhi piine ko milega hi nai

Kashish sochti hai kaaafi saarei ho gai h par...koi ludak nahi raha...ajab..[pills ka kamal]...usko ko bhi lag raha hai ki aaj kuch zyada  hi sober lag rahe hain sab inspite of the drinks,.. phir use laga ki shayad drinks strong nai hongi

Idhar bartender thak sa gaya tha de deke to...Sujal ki hi capacity itni zyada thi

Kashish ko kya matlab hai competition se usse to rokne ke liye bolna  hai bas

k- Tum sab ab kuch kha kyun nahi lete ho huh? Ek baar ke liye bohot pee liya hai sabne right

Raj stumbles down the stool ka bit

Raj-3..3000000000..30th

Kashish gasps and Raj ko jakar seedha karti hai

Ria-31

k- Ria bas bhi karo please

Zach 40-000

k-Zach tum to ho hi awaara

Crystal-45-5

k- Ye to ladki hai hi nahi

Sujal chuckles drunkly..looks at everyone...raises his hand

s-60...0000000!!! 60

k- 60!!!!!!!

Kashish's jaw drops with shock

k-BASS!! Bohot hogaya sabka. End of competion

Par koi sunn nahi raha tha

Sab Sujal ko congatulate karte hue aur drink thuss dete hain usse

Kashish jaakar hath pakad leti hai  Sujal ka

k- Nahi bass bohot hogaya hai. Aur nai piiyoge.Competion ho gaya hai

He hugs her and snuggls to her shoulder

s-Th..thanks vavy

She sighs...

s-My kazzz

k-Haan haan..

She knows ab talli ho chuka hai...ab to heavy flirting phir passing out

k- Kyon ab chalie? Sab sunno ab hum chal rahe hain

s-Nahhh...kizz me first

k- Kyun?

s-kizzz me...I am drunkkk

k- I don;t kiss drunk people

s-Kizzz

k- No kisss for drunk

s-Kizzz me...love ve..pazzionazely

k- Drunk logon ke sath kuch nahi..

Sujal tries getting up off the bar stool but stumbles down

Kashish abdi mushkil se pakad kar sidha rakthi hai..

He is heavy and keeping him upright is a uphill task

s-I..i am..vine..-HIC-..very..vine

k-  Suuurrreee. Chalo yahan se chalo. Sab log utho. Hum sab ab wapas jayenge

He shakes his head

s-v..vill..u..rance..wimme

k- No. I don't do anything with dunk ppl

He pouts sadly

s-Kazzz Kazzz

k- Haan yahin hoon bolo

s-dunn u love me

k- Yes I do

s-nooo..no yu don

k- I do

He movs his arms frantically

s-nooo...liar

Kashish tries to control him

k-Sujal Sujal.. hushh

She puts her hand on his cheek

k- Shhh look at me

He kisses her palm...relaxing

She pulls his face so he can look at her straight

His eyes are drooping

k- I do love you.. but I pefe a sober you... than to a drunk you. ok?

She says stroking her thmb across his  lips

He parts his lips and kisses her thumb...taking it in..sucking it

Kashish hastly pulls her thumb away...agar yahan chalu ho gaye to pata nahi kya hoga

k- Chalo na Sujal.. wapas chalte hain

She slides closr to him giving him huge puppy dog begging eyes

He holds the bar table to get up, that he does after his 6th attempt

Kashish is immidiately by his side in case he needs her suprt to walk

Kashish is muttering

k- Uff kitni pii li hai chala bhi nahi jaa raha hai

He climbs up the bar table

k- Arre kahan chad rahe ho?

She says trying to pull him back to ground

All the drunk friends hoot

k-Nahi Sujal. Please stop this..

Sujal grabs a bottle and gulps again, putting it on top f his head

k-Sujal, tamasha mat karo!

s-Attention..ladies..and..f*****

k- Main tumse baat karna band kard dungi, Sujal. I am serious. Get down this instant. SUJAL!!

Kashish Sujal ka hath kheechka zabardasti pulls him down

Sujal sunta hi nahi

He grabs her wrist and pulls her up

s-Kazzz

k-SUJAL GREWAL!!! This is my last waring

s-THIS IS MY KAZZZ...my KAZZZ

k-Aana hai to aao, main jaa rahi hoon

s-my prerry Kazzz...my lovely Kazzz

Kashish looks around blushing ki Sujal ke saath saath log Kashish ko bhi ghoor rahe hain

She tries to push away from him

s-Kazzz...

Sujal whispers veryyy close to her face..his breath on her skin

k- Sujal I swear main tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi. Mujhe abhi issi waqt chodo

s-Kazzz who takes care of mine..when..i am drunk...Kazzz who hugs me when i am saddd

k- Nahi karongi main tumhari care, you are a brat.. bigad gaye ho baat nahi sunte ho

s-She loves me when..i crave for ittt

k-Ok whatever.. dhindhora mat peeto

s-u..u knw...-Hic-..she..shi iz ...favoulus cook rooo...shez greattt

k- Thank you lekin ab se kuch nahi banaungi kyunki tuhe to piine mein zyada intrest hai

s-fanrasy of every man [low tone whisper]

Kashish puts her hand on his lips

But Sujal ne haath hatta liya

k- Bas bohot bol liye tum, ek aur word nahi

s-I am sooo lucky to have ...hic- her

k-Ab chodo mujhe warna I'll pinch you

s-i i...i...i..feel like...FEEL LIKE MARRYING HERRR

Kashish looks at Sujal mouth open

The drunk friends were rejoicing and dancing

k-KHISAK GAY HAI KYA  TUMHARA???!!!! DRUNK HO TO KUCH BHI BOLOGE???!!!

He hugs her TIGHTTT

k-CHODO MUHE!!!

She stomps on his foot

s-oooh

He retrieves and stumbles down rollinng on the floor

Kashish bhi door ho jati hia

k- Mainn jaa rahi hoon iss pagalpan se durr. Jisse aana ho aa jana. I'll wiat for 10 minutes outside

Kashish chali jati hai bahar

Kashish gadi mein wait kar rahi hai sabka...adha ghanta ho gaya

Bahar some rowdy young black men get off frm some sports cars...koi yahan halla machaye...to koi kuch kare

Kashish gadi mein hi baithi hai..wo andar aa kar aur dekhna bardasht nhai kar sakto aur naa  hi Sujal ki harkatein public mein jhel sakti hai

Naa usse bahar ka wo ladko ka shor bardasht ho raha hai

Kashish utar kar gadi se wapas andar challi jaati hai

Kashish calls on Sujal's cell

He was sitting on floor leanin to wall inside the bar

s-Kazzz

k- Tum nahi aoge naa. You don't want to be  with me.. you rather be with your drinnks

s-Kazieee

k-Haina aisa hi hai na.. yahi importance hai na meri

s-i am ..i am zorry

He looks so cute puppy like

k-  No you are not...you are lying.. tum har baar bolte ho.. if you ever seincerely felt sorry even once to waapas aisa nahi karte but tumne to aaj saare records todd diye. Tum raho wahin.. aur piyo, wahin so bhi jaana

s-Kazzz

He opens his arms not realizing that she is on phone she can't see him

k-Ab main aur wait nahi karungi. Yahaan bohot saare ajeeb se ladke ghoom rahe hain... main wapas jaa rahi hoon gadi mein aur 15 minute baad wapas bhi chali jangi

s-Kazzz ve wiz u...kazzz...my kazzz

k- Nahi main jaa rahi hoon. Yahan mahal achha nahi hai

s-Non essere arrabbiato [Do not be angry]

k-Baas yai inform karne ko phone kiya tha

s-Kazzz...Kazzz comm roo me...Kazzz neer u...wairin foz my Kazzz ...hic Kazzz



Edited by storywriter - 30 September 2012 at 11:32am

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sujal is full talli...out of his senses...

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 2:34am | IP Logged
ROFL suzaalll (he reminds me of some1Wink)
LOLLOL khisak gayi hero ki LOLLOLLOL my sympathies with Kashish LOLLOL must be having tough time handling him LOLLOLLOL hope sujal comes back atleast now LOLLOLLOL else his Kazz will be angry LOLLOL& he wont like dat LOLLOL 

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
part 45
hes full talli...
hope she doesnt get into any trouble...
cont soon dear...

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PART 46

k- Nahi main jaa rahi hoon. Yahan mahal achha nahi hai

s-Non essere arrabbiato [Do not be angry]

k-Baas yai inform karne ko phone kiya tha

s-Kazzz...Kazzz comm roo me...Kazzz neer u...wairin foz my Kazzz ...hic Kazzz

k- Main jaa rahi hoon.. tumne pii tumhari punishment

Phone drops off his hand

Idhar udhar ki awaaz aa rahi hai..Sujal ki nahi

k- Sujal? Sujal???

She is shouting on the phone

k- Sujal kuch bolo !!!

Aas-paas music ..log sab ki awaazein

k-SUJAL!!!

Kashish 15 sec wait karti hai, phone mei chilati hai phir gate kholti hai bar ka..bina left right dekhe andad bhagti hai...koi cat call karta bhi hai.. 1 pakadta bhi hai...kick mrke.. kaat ke andar bhag ke aati hai phone haath mein pakde..

k- Sujal?!! Sujal kahan ho??

Beech beech mein phone mein bol rahi hai while looking for Sujal

Poochti hai Ria se ki Suja kahan hai

Sujal to wahin pada tha on floor leanin to wall singing a drunk song that Raj taught him

Kashish finds him and looks at him ver yvery angry

Dekh rahi hai door khade hokar Sujal ko aur uski harkato ko

Raj bhi pasar jata hai next to Sujal

They share a bottle and the song

Kashish is getting angrier than ever

Sujal keeps his head on Raj's shoulder singin the song

s-Kazzz mizzinggg Kazzz

Kashish stomps over to them

Jaakar kicks Raj on his legs-

k-Useless spineless .. lawaris namard.. nalayak.. gutter ke kede..

And then glars at Sujal

k- Tum bhi kam nai ho

Sujal and Raj stare at Kashish with astonishment

She grabs the bottle from thier hands and empties on thier head

k- Lo naha lo.. doob jao!!!

Kashish glres back at Raj

k- Tum!!! Tum to apni shakal mat dikhan mujhe wapas

Crystal also staggers and falls onRraj

Crystal-Babyyy

Kashish makes disguting sound and then turns her blazing anger snapping on Sujal

k- Tum , bas ab nahi. Bohot ho gaya. Ab chahe tum  maro, ro, pito kuch bhi karo main apna dimag nahi kharab karungi.

Kehker she turns around and marches to Ria

s-Kazzz...come roo me...neer u

k-Sambhal lena jisko sambhalna ho main jaa rahi hoon

She gives Sujal disaproving disappointed look

s-Kazzz Kazzz plzzz

He pleads almost..he looks miserable when he pleads...he never pleads...Kashish had never seen him pleading

Kashish Sujal ko ignore karti hui bahar ko jaati hai par door se hi wo ladke dikh jate hai.. unka number badh gaya hai and they look angry too

To Kashish bahar to jaa nahi sakti

Anddar hi bar ke door opposite end mein jakaar baith jaati hai

Sujal was making all the efforts to hold his weight on his feet saying 'Kazz' numerous times

Kashish bhi poori koshish kar rai hai ignore karne ki bar bar par nazar usadhr hi jaye

Kai baar she has to consiously stop herself from geting up and going to Sujal

Wahan Kashish baithi baithi hands clasped in her lap Sujal ko akhon ke kone se ghoor raih hai...feet firm on floor ready to dash to him any minute

He is holding onto the floor...his legs are betraying him againn and againn

Itni koshish ke baad khada hota hai atlast

Smiles triumphantly

DHAAAPPP

Again on floor

Ab Kashish bhag ke pohonch hi jaati hai

k- Are you ok? Lagi to nahi? Kya kar rahe the? Baith nahi sakte shanti se?

Sujal smiles stupidly

k-Dimag bhi pii gaye kya sharab ek saath? Bolo naa lagi to nahi?

She says looking over patting hsi cheek gently to get an answer

s-I..was..gettin up.. or..or-hic-..u wld hv..lvt me

She shakees her head

s-u..dnt lv me..-hic-

k- Kahin nahi jaa rahi main. Wahi nto baithi thi

s-zen?

k-Bahar ajeeb se log khade hain. Main nahi jaungi wahan akele. Aur waise bhi zyada oversmart banne ki zarurat nahi hai.. jab kaha tha saath chalo tab to ruk kar piini hai.. ab jab neend aa rahi hai, ghar jana hai to 'Kazz Kazz don't leave me'

s-Nooopeee u zidnt understnd..zen -hic-...nobody under..stnds..nor even u.,..

He complaints lik a small boy

k-Kyun karu main undertsand? Tum sochte ho kisi aur ke baare mein apnse siwae? Do you ty to understand others? Nahi na?

s-uuu

k- Ab chodo inn sab baaton ko. Chalo uthkar upar baithte hain waha

She says pointing some sofas and desk..khopche wali jagah

Kashish ko aga ki tool par to balance mushkilhai...ussse tek lekar baithna hai to wahi sahi rahega

Kashish bartender ko bolti hai to help her move Sujal over there

Dono jaise taise Sujal ko uthake ladkhadate hue wahan tak pohochte hai

s-jzt..gemme..up..i cn..wlk

k- Chup bilkul chup. No more complaining warna main daant doongi

s-Kazzz

k- What?

s-Piii

k- Huh?

s-Wanna pee

She looks at Sujal up and down... khada to hua nahi jaa raha hai usse

k- How will you manage?

s-psss!!!!

Awaaz nikalta hai

k- Mujhe wo pat pata hai! Chalo tumhe restroom ke bahar tak chodti hoon

She helps him walk to the retroom

k- Ab jao...

She holds the main door open for him

Sujal staggers holding the wall...gets in

5 minute ho jate hain ..nahi nikalta

Kashish bahar se awaz lagati hai

k-Sujal are you ok? Tum wapas girr to nahi gaye na?

s-Kazzz

He comes out looking down at his pants... pouting face

k-What? Aren't you done? Did you wet your pants?

She says trying to guess

s-iz nor opin

k-What is not opening?

He pats his zip and the button area

Kashish looks down at him and then back at his face with a blank face

k-So?

s-Peee

k-So?

s-Kazzz

He is visibly struggling with it

s-help meee

k- Wait I'll go get someone...

s-Kazzz

k- Yahin ruko I'll get help

She starts to go

s-Kazzz...help meee...peee nowww...Kazzz

k-Shh haan naa. Laa rahi hoon kiso ko wait karo

Wo dekhti hai idhar udhar.. bartender to gay sa tha..

Aur baki sab zyada sober helping state mein nahi tha

Jo the wo busy the make out karne mein

Kashish sochti hai ki zach ko kheech kar le ayegi

To Kashish jaane lagti hai Zach ko bulane

Sujal wahin pada sa hua hai...jaise taise...struggling with it

Zach to hilta nahi hai chipka hua hai Ria se

Raj bhi busy hai Crysal ke sath

Kisi anjaan ko approach pata nahi kaise kare

Bar tender waise hi Sujal ko drooling expression ke saath dekh rahe the

Kashish walks back to Sujal

k-Can't you stillopen it? Problem kya ho raih hai. Ek zipper neeche hi t kheechna hai!!

She says to him a low voice

s-zunno

She realizes there are 2 buttons aur ek zipper hai

k- To button kholne mein kya problem hai try to karo

Sujal kar hi raha tha try

Kashish encourage kar rahi hai try karne mein

k- Dekho wo bartender hai.. wo kar dega help lekin he looks a bit gay.. agar usse help chahiye to bulaun usse?

s-I'll pee..in 5 zeconds

He pants

k- oh.. ohhh... oh to kholo aur jao andar

He takes her hand and keeps it thier

s-Kazz...kholo

k-What?!

Her jaw almost touches the ground in shock

She tries to pull her hand away..

k-Main...main..bartender ko bula kar lati hoon

He grabs her hand again

s-Kazzz help

Kashish looks here and there and then back at Sujal.. and gulps ...

k-Tum mujhe kahin ka nahi chodo ge



Edited by storywriter - 01 October 2012 at 11:28am

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part 46
OMG this is embarrassing...
bechari kashish...
cont soon dear...

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