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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 30)

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
I think sujal's idea of "aasman mein ghar" is nice he shud think abt it LOLLOLTongue he will be in gain LOLLOLLOL...
poor girl so scared of heights Ouch...thank god they reached back safe & sound Smile wonder wats next in sujal's head WinkSmile

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part 40
awesome...
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PART 41

They reach the hotel

Sujal stops the bike with a jerk

He feels like kissing her again wo hi jaanta hai..bike pe sidha kaise baitha tha while Kashish was holding him so close and tight

s-Kash we have reached

Kashish lets  go of him and gets off the bike

He holds her hand

s-You ok?

Kashish nods..smiling genuinly his time

k- I am fine now...I am sorry about the pathetic day

k- It wasn't pathetic!! We had fun too!!

She says vehmetly

s-Yeah ! Yeah ! Whatever

k-Those fountains were so devine and the food we had was good and the ice cream!! Tum mujhe aur khiloage..and then we went in the...[She blushes]...I mean...  wo helicopter meni veiew She becomes beet root red thinking about helicopter ride

Sujal to bass aage peeche upar neeche Kashish ki milky white creamy Kashish ki exposed skin ko dekhe jaa raha hai wondering whn will he get the the chance to touch her again his imagination running wild

k-I mean... i was able to sit in a helicopter...agar tum nahi hote to itni himat kabhi nai hoti

Wahan Kashish is blushing profouly.. ki ab calmly socha to pata chala ki nervous and height ki fear mein kya kya kitni jaldi ho gaya...and my God did she really suck his thumb in presence of other people... wo itni bold kaise ho gai...

Ab bhi  Sujal ki roaming nazrien dekh she bluhes even more

It was thte of self control he was showing..standing there not doing anything was award wining performance of his

k- I... I have to go change

She says backing away

k- umm see you later...

Keh kar bhag jati hai holding on to her heart

Sujal is tuktuki laga ke dekhe jaa raha hai

He takes a longgg bubble bath to calm himself

It was so difficult he neve knew...knowing Kashish was there across the wall

He wonders what must be she wearing...actually what isn't she wearing

How does she look as a whole\...milky soft skin

He looks at his thumb that she sucked

He thought bas ek baar ..ek bar aur Kashish mil jaye...yahan bathroom mein aa jaye... uske baad he will be decent ..he promisses to himself..just once

Wahan kahish bhi apne bubble bath mein saare moments relive kar rahi hai.. jo kuch usne miss kar diya ab wo sab realise ho raha hai..

How kind he had been.. how strong he had been...how fearles he was.. how well toned his body had felt under her fingers...how she loved hugging him and kissing him

Kashish ko bhi yaad aa raha hai jab wo low waist towel pehe kar uske palang par leta tha... tab to Kashish ne bhaga diya.. lekin agar wo ab aese hi lete gaya.. and if he says crawl then she would even crawl to him

She has goe completely under his invisible intabgible spell

Kashish ke tub ka paani thanda gaya.. lekin she remeberes that Sujal always feels warm..

How nice it would be to snuggle up againt him in winters

Whenever he would d kiss her ear or whiper somthing close in her ear she would feel his rugged chin brush against her skin.. slightly prikly at imes from 5  o clock shadow growth... she imagines how it would feel at other places.. places hi hands touched

Sujal ne to pura foreplay sab imagine kar liya

Calm gaya bhaad mein aur arouse hue jaa raha hai

Kashish ka bhi haall bura hi hai...na cha kar bhi baar baar wohi khayal dimag mein aa rahe hain

Kashish baha nikal aati hai nahake...

Sujal bhi thodi der mein nikal aata hai

Kashish ko lagta hai ki she needs to change her environment to stop thinking about all this

Kashish Ria ko dhundti hai usse zabardati saath baithakar usse baatien karti hai..

Ria- Tu mereko hi parehsaan kyun kar rahi hai.. chal  Raj ke room chal sabko pakana...

k- Nahi nhai whan nahi jaana... tum log bhi bahar nikal jao ... aur Sujal ko aur mat pilao..

R- Sujal to wahan hai hi nahi.. wo to pehle hi pareshaan bhag gaya...chalo chalo

Kheenchkar le gai Kashish ko..

Ria Raj Zach pii rahe hain...Kashish bhi saath baith bakwas kar rahi hai...

Sab ne socha blind mans buff khelein..

Kashish ki turn aa gai and Sujal bathroom se bhar nikal gaya being wet...

Since Ria ne kaha tha ki Sujal nahi hai.. and aise hi kheehch kar le gai thi..to Kashish ne bhi bheege baal aur ek lambi t-hirt type wale night gown mei hi aa gai thi

Ab Kashish ghoom rahi hai kamre mein hath failaye..ankhon mein patti bandhe

Sujal was in a towel

Every one gigling madly drunkly

Sujal stiffenes seeing Kashish

Kashish ko to bechari ko pata bhi nahi ki uske saath dhoka hua hai...

Kashish idhar udhar haath ghumati closes on Raj.. kyunki sabse zyada halla wahi macha raha tha So Kashish usi ki saide jaane lagi

Raj bhi stupid si smile leke apne haath failaye khada hai ki Kashish ayegi to wo usse pkad lega..

Sujal is looking at the circus

Raj got confused with rules.. usse laga apni jagah khade ho kar Kashish ko pakadne ka game hai

Sab has rahe hain..

Kashish is also laughing at the senseless game

Kashish bas pohonchti hai near Raj.. and Raj usse khichke apni bahon mein le leta hai

Kashishshriks.. pulling away

Sujal frows hard

k- Arre yeh kya haii.. mujhe tumhe dhundna hai tumhe bhagna hai... kaun ho tum..

Game tab hi khatam hoga jab you can identify the person correctly whom have caught

k- hmmm Zach or Raj...?

She touches the hair.. and top of head.. thoda upar toes par khade hokar jisse her nigt shirt rising a little with her actions..

Raj passig a lewd grin and admiring the view

Kashish ko samjh nahi aa raha ki kisko pakda hai..dono ki hieght same si thi

Sujal is clenching his fist...steping closer

Sujal ka ka coundown shuru ho gaya hai

Kashish rubs the cheek ki Zach was clean shaven while Raj was not...lekin she wasn't sure maybe it was the other way round

Sujal had enough

k- Ufff kya bekar game hai? Mujhe kya pata ki kaun hai?

 Sujal grabs her elbow and Kashish colides with his bare chest

k- Sujal!

Recognising his touch instantly

She takes off the cloth form her eyes quickly

k-Tum.. yahan... tumm...

Sujal is glaring at her his raw passion and anger mixed in his glare

She looks biwildered and confused

She looks wdown ki wo towel mein hai..

k- Tum towel mein?

She looks around at Ria ki ho kya rah hai?

Sujal's chest is heaving with anger

Kashish thoda peeche haone ki koshish karti hai..

Baki sab 'next turn next turn' chilla rahe hain

Sujal grabs her wrist

everyone- Ab Sujal ki turn!!!!

Sjal directs Kashish palm to his rugged cheek' vigourousky rubbing her palm to his cheek...achche se...eyes closed...living the moment...markin territory

Kashish ko to samjh nahi aa raha ki kya ho raha hai kuon ho raha hai kaise ho gaya

Kashish pne aap se doosra hath doore gaal par rakh deti hai

This touch this feel she knows she'll recognize anywhere anytime

Itne mein Raj and Zach lage pade hain ki bhai Sujal ki turn

Sujal ko kapda baandne mein dono lag gaye

Sujal looks at raj for a moment with a complete serious no non sense expression

Raj ruk jata hai hand raised in mid air

Raj- What did I do?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????

He whines turning and complaining to Ria

Sujal looks at him menaingfully at Raj then at Kashish for a sec then back at Raj

Sujal moves away

s-I am not playing. Lemme dress up



Edited by storywriter - 24 September 2012 at 9:47am

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
aww Sujal seems jealous TongueLOLLOL god save Raj TongueLOLLOLLOL for eyeing Sujal's girl TongueLOLLOL
& wishing Sujal all the best  Thumbs Up hope his imagination WinkWink comes true soon WinkTongue same for kashish too though she seems to be little confused TongueLOLLOL but with Sujal around i am sure she wud not be able to resist for long TongueEmbarrassedLOL

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part 41
awesome...
wow Sujal is J...
too good...
cont soon dear...

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PART 42

He whines turning and complaining to Ria

Sujal looks at him menaingfully at Raj then at Kashish for a sec then back at Raj

Sujal moves away

s-I am not playing. Lemme dress up

Raj to complain karr raha hai Ria se with epression like 'teacher, usne mujhe daraya.. kaha ki marega'

Sujal kapde nikalke bathroom mein chala jata hai

Ria- What? Kyun!!!

Chillati hai Sujal ke peeche

Ria-Nahi Sujal ruko. Why are you dressing up? You looked so nice.. Raj to pagal hai

Sujal chala gaya bina sune

Kashish poore halle ke beech statue si bani khadi hai

Sjal aata hai kapde pehnke

Ria to muh mar rahi thi to Zach ab gussa ho jata hai iss baat par and dono lad lete hain

Ladte Ladte dono kamre ke bahar Kashish ke kamre mein..

Sujal aake let jaata hai bed pe

Wahan Raj kone mein simat kar baitha hai..daant pad gai ghar par bhi aur teacher se bhi Aand Raj passed out there

k- Hi..

Sujal opens an eye

s-Hi. Sleep. We will leave in an hour

k- Wht in an hour? Maine packing nahi ki!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-Italy nahi...pub ke lie

Kashish bhaag jathi hai chillakar kamre se gate patakto hue

s-Kashhh

Sujal uthta hai

He then thinks chod naa..kaunsa wo leke jayega

She again comes back

k- Mere kamre se unn dono ko bahar nikalo

s-Kyun? Let them enjoy

Kashish's mouth opens a little

k-o how am I suppose to...how do I get ready? Lekin main packing kaise karungi?

s-Kis baat ki packing? Hum abhi pub jaa rahe hain...Italy kal shaam ko jayenge

k- Pub? Kyun? Do I have to go too?

s-Your choice

k- Nahi gai to tum kitni pii loge...lekin main tab tak kya karoon?

s-Jaane se aur piina ka kya link hai? So jao..kya karogi

Kashish looks aorund.. table is littered with botlle and glasses..

Sofa is ganda with dropped food and drinks

Chair par saare kapde aur drinks ka dher hai

Bass bed hai

Aur bed par adhe meni raj already faila hai doosre mein Sujal shehenshaho ki tarah leta hua hai

k- Main kahan baithu?

s-On bed?

Sujal zara sa khisakta hai

Zara si jagah hai..

Kashish idhar udhar dekhti hai..

k-Nahi...tumhe hi dikkat hogi...

He smirks...usse kya dikkat its his pleasure

Kashish jakar zameen par baith jati hai back resting againt the bed

k- Do you mind if I watch tv?

s-Nope. By the way tum let jao I'll just...

Sujal uth jaata hai but then lays down again thinking if he gets up and Kashish lays on his place then she in a way will be sleeping with Raj

Kashish TV chala kar sits

She is sitting jahan Sujal leta hai..

Sujal's head is near hers

She satrts flicking cannels.. looking for somthing non po*nish to see

Sujal kaafi der ghurta hai Kashish ko as she is busy flickering channels

kaafi der ghurta h k ani ko

He strts playing with her tresses..rolling them to his finger

k- Kya kar rahe ho tum?

Ek baar to she moves forward and turns to look at him

He removes his hand as if it burnt

Mudke let jaata h

k- Sujal kya hua?

She asks turning fluly towards the bed loking at his back

s-Nothing

She climbs a little on bed

Upar se bend hokar looks at Sujal's face

k- Tum ghum kar kyun so gaye?

All her hair faling around them hiding them in a curtain from the world

k-Tumhe tv e problem ho rahi hai? Main band kar deti hoon

s-No you watch it

k- Are you sure? Or is itsomething else?

Kashish ko bhi zyda kuch samjh aata nahi Sujal ke mood swing ka...to bechari kya kare ? Poocha bhi tab hi kuch nahi kaha...

Ab tv bhi  mute kar diya..

Ek Italian movie aa rahi thi english subtitles ke sath ek kisi channel mein wo hi dekhne lag jaati hai



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Italian movie with an Italian guy...nice...

mayb ab K ko kuch words ka matlab samajh me aa jayega...

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part 42
nice part...
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