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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
super awesome part cont soon

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
dheere dheere dosti TongueTongue good Big smileBig smile
its good to see Sujal taking care of her Big smile
boss deserved it AngryLOL...ek do aur lagne chaiye the LOLLOLLOL
hope kashish finds new job soon Smile

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
nice part
Sujal ek bohut hi kind hearted aur helpful person hai.
love him yaar
ponytail badhnewali secene bohut hi superb tha,
chalo boss ko Kashish ki thappad ki bohut zarurat tha.
accha kiya Kashish ne job chod diya
Sujal ko yeh kyun impulsive decision laga main batati hoon, ek Sujal poori baat janta nahin, dusra woh Kashish ko strict professional samajhta hai, saath hi Sujal ko laga Kashish success ki itni uchi udaan bharne ke baad kyun dubara shuru karna chahta hai?
sujal ki character abhi tak clear nahin hai
but three cheers for their friendship
awsome update
waiting for the next
 

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 10:00am | IP Logged

** Adult content


PART 3

s-Why did you resign?

Sujal ko  atpata laga aise achanak impulsive decision ki baad mein naa pachtaye as she doesn't have anything in hand

k-I just felt like. I am fed up of it .I want to live like myself, do what I feel like

Sujal is just glaring at her

She smiles

k-Why are you so serious? You look as if you are unemployed not me

He keeps gazing at her...he looks devastated may be coz he cares

He doesn't say anything

As she recovers; their bond increases day by day

Ab to aisa hai ki Kashish ka ghar Sujal ka ghar ek samaan

Sujal ki cheezein Kashish ke yahan padi rehti hain aur Kashish ka saamaan Sujal ke wahan...iske bed pe uske kapde...Kashish ke fridge mein Sujal ki beer bottle, Kashish ke stilettos Sujal ke room mein

Sujal goes to his Friday nigh booze party with boys

Aata hai khoob late

Kashish ke ghar  ka bell bajata hai

k-What?????

s-I can't find my keys...you had a spare no...?

He looks silly drunk

She knows he must have them left it in the car aur 'faltu mein pareshaan kar raha hai

k-Didn't you know I was sleeping?

s-Yuppp

k-So? Don't you have decency or etiquette that you shouldn't knock on a lady's door at this time

s-But Kaashuuu...I lost my keysss

He was staggering in

k-Tch! Why are you coming in? Who asked you to come?

s-Mana bhi to nahi kiya...

Sujal phir bhi aaye ja araha hai

k-Sujal can't you understand ????? Gooo!!!!!!!!

Zor se knocks between his legs with her knee

s-AHHH!!!!! What are you doing? Are you idiot?????? That's the most sensitive area!

Kashish mooh phulake baith jaati hai, little misty eyed

He narrows his eyes and crinkles his eyebrow and frowns

s-What...What's wrong? What did I do? Why are you crying?

Bechare ko waise hi kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai usse bhi abhi saare nakhre dikhane hain

k-I hate you. Don't talk to me! You are my only friend and...and...you...you...went to that stupid party

s-So??????

k-So????????????????????? So...it's my b'day...how would you remember...nobody remembers ...not even my family...just leave it

Kashish jaake le aati hai uski spare ki but Sujal to so gaya pehle hi sofe par pad ke

Kashish dekhti hai ki so gaya hai to sone deti hai but she never understood his these weekly Friday night parties...naa jaane kya sukh milta hai

Subah hoti hai to Kashish kitchen mein kuch kar rahi hai utensils ki awaz dhaam dhaam karke

Sujal who was laid on the sofa was getting a bad headache due to the noise

Kashish ne side mein uski keys rakh di thi...uthke he goes into his house to sleep

Kashish aati hai thodi der baad Sujal ke flat mein

Aake parde khol deti hai

Sujal uthta hai sar sa pakad ke

k-You and your headache...drink the coffee

She puts the coffee mug on the side table

k-Take a shower, I have switched on the geyser

 s-umm..emmm

k-Don't go back to sleep...I can't make the coffee again and again

But when he doesn't get up after so many warnings then

k-Sujal I'll pour cold water on you if you don't get up in 3 seconds and I mean it

 Sujal uthta hai...sips his coffee

k-And how is it?

s-Huh?

k-The last night

s-What?

 k-Is it hurting?

s-What? Head?

k-No the other thing

 s-What other thing?

 Kashish khidki vidki khol rahi thi

k-That

s-What??????????? Can't you just say it clearly?

k-Your ...[she says in such a inaudible tone that he can't here]

s-WHAT??????????? LOUDER KASH

k-I SAID, HOW IS YOUR PEN**??????????????????????????

 



Edited by storywriter - 25 July 2012 at 10:02am

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
amazing part cont soon

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
ROFLROFLI just can't stop laughingLOLLOL
Kash is AMAZING!!!
They've become very good friends so good that they gave their spear  keys to each other...n nobody remembered her birthday that's sad,i spent my bday just like her...except the great kickWink
Is there any mystery behind Sujals' parties??
This chapter was hilarious..lets' see what happens next.
LOVED IT...CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
kash is amazing...

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
hi
the up is hillarious
sujal goes to night party and here kashish is upset as it was her bday
when sujal come to her house to get his keeys kashish hit him tight and sujal he got hurt they both lied on ther house nexr day kaishs goes to his house and asks him about his pain
plz cont soon and pm me
note:guys i have written an os for the first time if possible then plz give ur comments its just a request


Edited by ronojoy_ria - 25 July 2012 at 12:13pm

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