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Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) (Page 26)

jikky_84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.

Sujal is so drunk LOL

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-purnima- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged
aww cutie EmbarrassedEmbarrassed ..thank god he came back in room LOLLOL else poori raat bahar peeta rehta Silly
inspite of this i love this Italian sharabi Day Dreaming he is cute when he is bevda LOLLOLLOL

kashish darling TongueTongue must be loving too...she will love italian more when he is sober Tongue hope he is soon LOLLOLLOL

hope no problems at sujal's home SmileSmile calling at night ...hope no tension SmileSmile

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:03am | IP Logged
part 34
Kashish he really loves u...
come on yaar bring Sujal to sober state...
bohut hogayi yeh nasha and drinks...
cont soon dear...

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
call from home...nice...

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NilzStorywriter IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged


k-What???? ?!!Sujal!!!!!! SUJAL UTHO!!!!! What do you think you are doing?!!

She tries pushing him away and get away from him..


Phone aur bajna band nahi ho raha upar se...ring ring alag irritation

Kashish dhoondhne ke koshish karti hai ki phone hai kahan

Phone nikalti hai Sujal ki pocket se caller id dekhti hai

It says HOME

k-Sujal ghar se phone hai; ghar se!!!

Sujal ke kaan mein chilla rahi hai par Sujal tass se mass nahi ho raha

To Kashish sochti hai ki emergency hui to utha lena chahiye

k- Hello


It's a ladies stern voice

'Who is this?'

k-It's Kashish. Actually Sujal is sleeping right now.. he isn't feeling well. can i take a message?

'Who are you !'

k-Kashish; I just told you..

'Who is Kashish?'

k-I am Sujal's friend, who want to know?

'His mother'

Kashish ki asari neend ufd gai

Mom-What is Sujal's friend doing with him at dead of the night? Is Sujal seeing you or are you some call girl or something or may be a gold digger

k-As I said he is.. not well so I am taking care of him. that is all. I'll tell him that you called when he wakes up. You want me to tell him anything else?


Mom disconnects abruptly

k-Goodnight mam

Kashish loses her good natured smile after the conversation.

She is in a daze for few moments, then she calms herself with a sigh

Udhar Sujal idhar udhar haath ferke Kashish ko aur jakad leta hai

k- Tumhari mummy ka call tha. Sun rahe ho?

She says settling against him..

Achnak uthne se uske bhi sarr meni dard ho gaya

s-venire pi vicino a me, baby [come closer to me, baby]

He mumbles snuggling into her shoulders

k-Same to you honey

She says curling up in a ball against him

Kashish ne bhi aise hi keh diya addhi neendo  mein

Ab subah hoti hai

Aaj pehle Sujal utha as bahar thodi chakar chakar ho rahi thi sar dard ho gaya

Sarr pakad ke baith gaya

s-Arshhh i hate this hangover

He looks at Kashish ki wo so rahi hai looking like a pretty doll

Sujal feels ki jaake ache se kiss karle, ache se zara pyaar karle sehlaa le Kashish ke pinkish gaal, creamy skin, wo bikhre baal, her pink juicy lips

Kashish to aaj kafi time baad ghode bech kar aram se so rahi hai

Thode se kapde apni postion se idhar udhar bhi ho gaye the that was oozing sensuality...that accidental oomph was killing

Jab Kashish ko neendo mein Sujal  ki warmth nahi mili to she mades some protesting noise and rolled over close to Sujal curling herself over him

Sujal phir let jaata hai taking her back into his arms

Her arms around his waist kissing her forehead

Kashish smiles in her sleep

Then slowly kissing her eyes he slowly brushes his finger against her pinkish lips

She parts her lips breathing hot air on Sujal's neck

Sujal blows some air beneath her collar bone to remove some wild strand of hair exposing the small mole near the hollow of her breast

She stirs in her sleep moving impatiently against the foreign sensation

Sujal ki harkatoo se Kashish ki thodi neend khulti hai..

Ek bar to she blinks in happy delirium lala land.. seeing Sujal so close and at what he was doing and staring...

Next second jab sab register hua to she screams and scrambles away

k- Aah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 WHAT THE HEL WERE YOU DOING!!!! KAR KYA RAHE THE!!! Dimag kharab hai  kya tumhara!!

She is shouting getting of the bed tugging the cover to cover herself even though she is wearing clothes

Sujal is taken aback bechare ko pehle hi hangover tha

s-Whta??..I/?.What did I..?

k- Bhole mat bano! You lecher!! You .. you... chee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



s-What the hell did I do now?

Kashish gives him a seriously murderous look and goes to picks u her bag and shuts herself in the bathroom

Sujal ko samajh nahi aaya ki aisa bhi kya kiya. Wo dikh raha tha to usne dekh liya, it was just a mole aur wo dikhta hai...haan wo aise so rahi thi to thoda zyada dikh raha tha...yeah ok..he was taking a closer what? Ok fine he would her breasts would look what? He is a man. She can also imagine about him if she wants to. He didn't' go closer for deliberately looking..wo dikh raha tha saamne to usne dekh liya to kya

Kashish aati hai 15-30 min baad bathroom se not looking at Sujal.

s-What??????? Now what did I do????

k- Tumhare gahr se calll aaya tha kal raat mein

s-Whattt???????????????????????????? Who called?????? Did you pick up????? Kya kaha???????? Mujhe uthaya kyun nahi??????

He glares at her

Kashish to dekh hi nai rai Sujal ki taraf

k-Uthaya kyun nahi? Tumhe electrocute karti to bhi nai uthte . Phone tumahri mom ka tha. maine keh diya tumahari tabiyat kharab hai tum baat nahi kar sakte

s-Mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya. Tumne kya kaha tum kaun ho? Naam to nahi bataya naa

She shrugs.

k-I told her my name and told her I was your friend and was taking care of you since you were sick


k- Agar itni hi problem hai to khudne phone kyun nahi uthaya, kisne kaha tha itna piine ko

Sujal quickly calls back home

s-Hello mom

Mom- I have booked tickets and you are coming home in 5 days. I will not tolerate drunk or irresponsible behavior you have been showing for the last few days

s-I..emm..I drunk?

Mom- Shape up before coming here and loose the wh**e you are dragging around taking your calls. I don't want to deal with your mess along with your brother's

s-Mom !!!!!!!!!!! She is my frienddd

m-Sujal. Are you trying to bemuse me in this situation of your brother by saying silly things like this? Ii thought I brought you up better than this. I don't appreciate the lame joke or the gesture.. I don't need amusement. I need your presence here

Sjal side mein jaata hai

s-Sure mom but...


s-Kash is...

Maom-But? I take this but is coz of that insolent little witch?

s-Mom please...please mom..please why are you calling her names when you don't even know her. She is my very good friend

Mom...Sujal you are a grown up man and I do not know what other things you are taking other than alcohol to believe in little girl fantasy story of a girls and boys being nice friends, taking care of each other , without wanting anything in return.. I take it now you'll tell me that you have platonic relation too.. do you take me for a fool? The tickets will arrive at your hotel by today evening. You better be sober ,decent and alone when you get here.


Kaat diya maa ne phone sab kuch suna kar

Sujal clenches his jaw

Kashish had gone for a walk to give Sujal some privacy; as she comes

s-We are going to Italy tomorrow

k- What? Kal?!! Lekin..are you sure and wo bhi kal?

s-Yes I am sure

k- I mean main wahan kya karungi ja kar...naa hi mujhe Italian samjh aati hai and maybe itna urgent hai to you should go alone...

s-Tum mere saath jaogi. BASS !

Kashish chup 5 sec ke liiye phir frowns

k- Chillao mat

She says calmly

k- Main to sirf pooch rahi thi.. tumhare chillaane se mera zyad mann nahi kar jayega tumhare saath Italy jaane ko..

s-You don't wanna go? You wanna stay here alone?

k- Maine aisa kaha kya.. uff.. seriously.. tumhare bare mein soch rai thi ki.. ki. I mean.. you were drunk when u asked me.. and maybe you wanted to change your mind now that you are... I don't want you to think that you are under any obligation .. and aisa nhai hai ki I can't be alone.. tumhe sirf mere akele hone ke liye mujhe italy lejaane ki zaruruat nahi hai..warne mera kya hai... mujhe to nayi jagah ghumna pasand hai..

s-Kash Shhh!!!

He hugs her

Kashish bhi thoda lightly keeps her hand on his waist

k- Kya hua Sujal? Koi baat ho gai kya?

Sujal shakes his head

k- Are you sure? Everything is fine?

Kyouki kuch bhi ho Sujal itni jaldi chialat nahi hai kabhi bhi

s-Yeah ! Let's go back to hotel, come.

She nods

Pohonchte hain waps unke hotel mein

To wahan pohochte hain.. dono jaate hain apne apne kamroon mein...nahana dhona.. tayar hokar milna hai wapas

Kashish asks ek haath bahar nikalke from the bathroom ki Ria mujhe bahar se bathrobe paas kar do main  lejana bhool gai thi

Dia to sahi par, a big hand held her hand

k- Ria? Haath choddo mera! Kaun hai bahar!!

Sujal tickles her hand

k- Leave my hand or I'll scream!!!

s-Scream! I can barge in

Kashish hath khichne ki koshish kar rahi hai

k- Sujal!! Uff daraa diya!! and hath chodo.. please

Edited by storywriter - 16 September 2012 at 8:42am

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
part 35
nice part...
Sujal's mom seems to be strict and how the heck did her sons become like this?
so she thinks Kashish is some characterless girl...
and Sujal is taking her there...
hope she doesnt get humiliated...
cont soon dear...

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
his mom seems very strict...

but he is also her son...

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jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon

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